This ... has potential for good things or disaster, anyway should be interesting. ^^

Nice and simple chapter. 

Chapter wasn't long at all, enough action and good dialogue.

I def wouldn't be one to judge on "too long" but this doesn't seem like it is at all from where I'm standing. I actually always find these "too short" (because I want more each time) Great stuff

never too long

On 5/22/2024 at 3:24 AM, Talesien said:

This ... has potential for good things or disaster, anyway should be interesting. ^^

Indeed it does. I'm still in debating which way to take it.
 

Thanks for the comment 🙂

On 5/22/2024 at 6:07 AM, Jay-Omms said:

Nice and simple chapter. 

Thank you 
 

It's gonna pick up soon lol 

Thanks for the comment 🫡

On 5/22/2024 at 11:49 AM, myriad said:

Chapter wasn't long at all, enough action and good dialogue.

I'm glad you enjoyed 😊

I'm still having problems with loading images so perhaps it's that what is making loading a chapter up so challenging and time consuming. 🤷‍♂️

Thank you for commenting. 😉

On 5/22/2024 at 2:33 PM, dryuya said:

I def wouldn't be one to judge on "too long" but this doesn't seem like it is at all from where I'm standing. I actually always find these "too short" (because I want more each time) Great stuff

aww thank you!
I shall do my best to make them longer if I can.

Thanks for the comment ☺️ 

On 5/23/2024 at 3:24 AM, ObeyMrWalrus said:

never too long

Then I shall do my best to make them longer lol 

Thank you for commenting 😌

OMG! 🤣
You put the
Arschbombe literally translated = ass bomb/ cannonball/bomb
to a whole new level.

And love for the Wild Love Story! 💞

On 5/24/2024 at 3:41 PM, chooseChaos said:

OMG! 🤣
You put the
Arschbombe literally translated = ass bomb/ cannonball/bomb
to a whole new level.

And love for the Wild Love Story! 💞

Thank you

I gladly accept the love lol 

Thanks for commenting