Awesome ?

I can learn a lot from your blog ?

Great entry.? It seems that both of them are enjoying themselves. Bolund probably more than Bera. But at least she was not too shy to give some sass back towards the end. Which is good. However, her face on the last image would suggest, that she may have doubts about her recent decisions at the moment.?

Sooo... Looking forward to seeing, what Bolund comes up with next. And how B. will handle it.

Sidenote: What happend to Bera's eye on the cover-image? 

Very nice job with the editing, lighting and framing.

17 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Awesome ?

I can learn a lot from your blog ?

Like wise! ?

Thanks for the feedback  

4 hours ago, HM1919 said:

Great entry.? It seems that both of them are enjoying themselves. Bolund probably more than Bera. But at least she was not too shy to give some sass back towards the end. Which is good. However, her face on the last image would suggest, that she may have doubts about her recent decisions at the moment.?

Sooo... Looking forward to seeing, what Bolund comes up with next. And how B. will handle it.

 

Sidenote: What happend to Bera's eye on the cover-image? 

Hey, thanks for the feedback

Yeh she ended up enjoying it more than she thought she would lol

Side note: That is her all-seeing eye which allows her to delve deep into your soul and see your deepest dirtiest desires ?  pstt - *she's supposed to be winking* (yes i know it's bad lool)

24 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Very nice job with the editing, lighting and framing.

Thank you!

and thanks for the feedback.

Damn, getting better and better with every chapter.

This chapter surprised me pleasantly. Not just because it came out early but because the overall quality and editing increased significantly since back when you started. Bera is a cutie like always.

And the snippets are actually a very welcome edition. Shame Bera's face can't be seen in any of them.

Another nice chapter indeed. Same thing than the other, you're good at finding how to dramatize events, even if there are relatively few of them. That's one of the keys of scenarizing a sex story I guess.

And you can see all what your dialogues and effects add by comparing it to the snipets : just movement, nice bits moving, but without any of the emotion nor personality that you imbue through the dialogues.
Good work.

« No one told me that I was a wet dream come true. So that's a big compliment, yes.

               Wonder if she gonna stay though.  »

Wow you've really done it! The Staff is your-... I mean Berry Nice! 

On 10/18/2022 at 10:56 PM, Tirloque said:

Another nice chapter indeed. Same thing than the other, you're good at finding how to dramatize events, even if there are relatively few of them. That's one of the keys of scenarizing a sex story I guess.

And you can see all what your dialogues and effects add by comparing it to the snipets : just movement, nice bits moving, but without any of the emotion nor personality that you imbue through the dialogues.
Good work.

 

 

« No one told me that I was a wet dream come true. So that's a big compliment, yes.

               Wonder if she gonna stay though.  »

Thanks for the feedback  

Yeh I was hoping to get the story moving as Bera seems to have spending too much time with Bolund, lol 

I'm glad you like the snippets. As I said before, not sure if I'll continue making them - it just seemed a shame wasting them. 

On 10/19/2022 at 6:14 PM, Jay-Omms said:

Wow you've really done it! The Staff is your-... I mean Berry Nice! 

HAHA thanks for the comment, glad you liked it. wish i could go back and make Bolund re-enact that gif when he saw Bera naked in chapter 9: