A part of me very much expected the ending to go differently.

now we never will know if he would've sold her out or not. For a moment there, Bolly Baby was between good horny Boy and bad traitor ? Maybe good for his reputation that he didn't got to decide

And don't mind Yorpers, he thought she would "handle" the guards herself ? naughty yorpers, very lewd yess!

5 hours ago, Gukahn said:

And don't mind Yorpers, he thought she would "handle" the guards herself ? naughty yorpers, very lewd yess!

mhm, would have been a shame for story progression though.

Oh boy, finally! And it's a story driven chapter to boot. And I absolutely love Bera's new hair.

This was definitely worth the wait. Though I do hope we won't have to wait as long for the next one.

Good to see you trying yourself at other kind of twists. Bolund's sudden turn-around was well brought, and the pressure around it well managed. Compliments as well on the dialogues and facial expressions, crafting a convincing setup. Now, I had some doubts about the reading order and the inverted tails of some bubles here and there, but that was absolutely minor. Nice chapter ! ?

5 hours ago, TheOakenRoot said:

Oh boy, finally! And it's a story driven chapter to boot. And I absolutely love Bera's new hair.

« It was a nice story chapter, we finally got it, and some people very absolutely prefer Bera's real hair uh. »

That was a good bit of tension-build-up. Well done. And the solution to Bera's predicament was a nice (and believable) twist. Good doggo. I also liked it, because it means, that the door is still open for further "cooperation" and/or drama between Bera and Bolund further down the line. Speaking of Boli-Boy: Judging by his reaction when he heard the guards talking,  it looks like he's not quite the Bad Boy he thought himself to be. Sooo... All in all this promises to remain interesting. Certainly looking forward to see what is going to happen next.?

On 1/8/2023 at 2:21 PM, yorpers said:

A part of me very much expected the ending to go differently.

On 1/8/2023 at 3:17 PM, Gukahn said:

now we never will know if he would've sold her out or not. For a moment there, Bolly Baby was between good horny Boy and bad traitor ? Maybe good for his reputation that he didn't got to decide

And don't mind Yorpers, he thought she would "handle" the guards herself ? naughty yorpers, very lewd yess!

Thanks for the comments

I was very conflicted on which way i wanted it to play out. Should he rat her out and keep her as his pet? Or does he keep to his word and let her go. In the end, I'm glad she is finally out on the road to saving her BFF. 
 

On 1/9/2023 at 4:58 AM, TheOakenRoot said:

Oh boy, finally! And it's a story driven chapter to boot. And I absolutely love Bera's new hair.

 

This was definitely worth the wait. Though I do hope we won't have to wait as long for the next one.

Hey  Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you like the chapter (and her new hair ?).

I'm working on the next chapters already, though it might be a while till they're ready to publish. RL can be a real hindrance y'know?

On 1/9/2023 at 10:52 AM, Tirloque said:

Good to see you trying yourself at other kind of twists. Bolund's sudden turn-around was well brought, and the pressure around it well managed. Compliments as well on the dialogues and facial expressions, crafting a convincing setup. Now, I had some doubts about the reading order and the inverted tails of some bubles here and there, but that was absolutely minor. Nice chapter ! ?

 

 

« It was a nice story chapter, we finally got it, and some people very absolutely prefer Bera's real hair uh. »

Hi, thanks for leaving a comment. 

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and that you felt the tension I tried to capture in this chapter.  

I do agree in regards to the arrangement of speech bubbles. there was a lot of dialogue I wanted to get in and it certainly was a challenge to fit it all in without crowding the story. 

Nevertheless, I'm glad you enjoyed and I'm somewhat pleased with the outcome  As always, your honest and constructive feedback is appreciated  

On 1/9/2023 at 8:06 PM, HM1919 said:

That was a good bit of tension-build-up. Well done. And the solution to Bera's predicament was a nice (and believable) twist. Good doggo. I also liked it, because it means, that the door is still open for further "cooperation" and/or drama between Bera and Bolund further down the line. Speaking of Boli-Boy: Judging by his reaction when he heard the guards talking,  it looks like he's not quite the Bad Boy he thought himself to be. Sooo... All in all this promises to remain interesting. Certainly looking forward to see what is going to happen next.?

Thanks for the feedback  

I had a lot of fun making this chapter and it makes me so happy that you enjoyed reading it. 

Yes, I think Boli-boy even surprised himself in discovering his soft side. 

13 hours ago, Dovahblood12 said:

Hey /cdn-cgi/mirage/5b6b2aefa3970520fc1e50c2b25eed57dd7015a91534d4d20717ee0cda1760ef/1280/https://static.loverslab.com/resources/emoticons/smile.png Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you like the chapter (and her new hair ?).

 

I'm working on the next chapters already, though it might be a while till they're ready to publish. RL can be a real hindrance y'know?

 

Ouf! I'm glad to hear that, but also saddened that we have to wait again.

Really nice shot composition and overall visuals/ lighting. Great job.