Great work!

Great work!

A bit shorter than usual, but I like the details you put in every scene/ screenshot, both in writing and in scene arrangement.

> Same as Alter ?

2 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Great work!

Thanks Tex! ^_^

1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

Great work!

A bit shorter than usual, but I like the details you put in every scene/ screenshot, both in writing and in scene arrangement.

Yay, thanks you Alter! Glad that they did not go unnoticed, and glad if you liked it! ^_^

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Same as Alter ?

 Thanks you Eva! ^_^

thank you as good as always , i love your stories  and all what is happening  ?

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Great stuff, Crw! For this entry and the last! The storylines may be slow to start weaving together, but it's been fantastic with developing the characters. I love it! Keep it up!

On 10/8/2021 at 8:02 PM, wilson99 said:

thank you as good as always , i love your stories  and all what is happening  ?

Thank you, WIlson99! I'm glad you still here and enjoying this ^_^ 
 

On 10/9/2021 at 11:50 AM, Jay-Omms said:

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Thanks Jay! 

20 hours ago, Collygon said:

Great stuff, Crw! For this entry and the last! The storylines may be slow to start weaving together, but it's been fantastic with developing the characters. I love it! Keep it up!

Many thanks Collygon! Well, it's still just the very beginning of season and I'm only setting the things up!  and I'm really glad if you liked it! ^_^ 

Indeed a shorter entry, yet not without perks nor drama. Also liked the small details (the teddy was awesome XD), and the effects during the sex scene (the movement effects, the partial sectional view). Nice character development entry altogether.

« That Tina gal is very disturbed, plus her guy shouldn't be talking about other people during honey-honey. 

               Emma is much more intelligent than her. It sees at her teddy. »

21 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Indeed a shorter entry, yet not without perks nor drama. Also liked the small details (the teddy was awesome XD), and the effects during the sex scene (the movement effects, the partial sectional view). Nice character development entry altogether.

Thank you very much Tirloque! I'm glad if you like it!
Honestly, I was planning to introduce Tina as Emma's sister even before the reboot, but it all dragged on and transformed into something like that.

22 hours ago, Tirloque said:

« That Tina gal is very disturbed, plus her guy shouldn't be talking about other people during honey-honey. 

               Emma is much more intelligent than her. It sees at her teddy. »

: « This is not just a teddy, no, this is a "Teddy of great sacred wisdom", yes!  

And my sister didn't receive this gift, that's why she's so Baka, you see?  »

Twincest?!

Short and sweet entry this time, great job!

On 8/14/2022 at 10:58 AM, SpyVsPie said:

Twincest?!

 

Short and sweet entry this time, great job!

Yeah, I want to experiment more on his subject ^_^ Thanks Spy!