It's like a cool movie ??

I wonder what music would fit? ?

Good work 

This one scene reminds me of Farnese de Vandimion from BERSERK

Hmm interesting chapter.

Great work!

Love the second half of the story, also the whipping was really well done. 

Which location is this in? Some kind of castle mod? 

1 hour ago, donttouchmethere said:

It's like a cool movie ??

I wonder what music would fit? ?

Many thanks! I am glad if this is so! I always try to work on the plot! It’s always difficult with regard to music. 
But I think that this exact episode in my head would have sounded like this.
 

2 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Good work 

This one scene reminds me of Farnese de Vandimion from BERSERK

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Thank! Bullseye, this is a direct reference to Berserk! In love with this universe and its characters. ^_^

2 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

Hmm interesting chapter.

Thanks, Deso ^_^

1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

Great work!

Love the second half of the story, also the whipping was really well done. 

Which location is this in? Some kind of castle mod? 

Thanks a lot, Alter! As I said - a Berserk reference ^_^
It's a LE port of Whiterun Safehold, with minor tweaks (Guess who got his nasty hands on the CK again. ). I found it in the Russian segment. If you need it, I can provide a link.

24 minutes ago, Crw said:

Thanks a lot, Alter! As I said - a Berserk reference ^_^
It's a LE port of Whiterun Safehold, with minor tweaks (Guess who got his nasty hands on the CK again. ). I found it in the Russian segment. If you need it, I can provide a link.

Thanks!

I'll just port it myselves, it's a one click solution for a mod like this. Thanks.

Woaahhh, this was a badass chapter! "Don't teach me how to breath while stepping on my throat" I love that line. And that ending... Oooh, the shots and dialogue really established the intensity. Fantastic!

1 hour ago, Crw said:

Thank! Bullseye, this is a direct reference to Berserk! In love with this universe and its characters. ^_^

So she is suppressing her sexual desire... she will be an easy target for Sanguine and his followers. 

10 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Thanks!

I'll just port it myselves, it's a one click solution for a mod like this. Thanks.

Oh, I didn't know that, thanks, then I know what else I’ll add. ^_^

10 hours ago, Collygon said:

Woaahhh, this was a badass chapter! "Don't teach me how to breath while stepping on my throat" I love that line. And that ending... Oooh, the shots and dialogue really established the intensity. Fantastic!

Thank you very much Colligon! I'm glad you like it. ^_^ Because you are one of those people, looking at the work of which I tried to get skills and knowledge in terms of taking screenshots. ^_^ 

9 hours ago, Jayomms said:

So she is suppressing her sexual desire... she will be an easy target for Sanguine and his followers. 

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I can’t deny it.  Most of the girls in my stories end up pretty much the same. ^_^

12 minutes ago, Crw said:

I can’t deny it.  Most of the girls in my stories end up pretty much the same. ^_^

Nice entry ! And with a rather catchy composition for the header, really eye catching. As for the chapter itself, no major english mistakes, and a badass ambiance ! Also liked the effects, such as the weeping or the redressing. I'm not entirely sure I understood why exactly Vile wanted the apprentice sent to Riften, but that didn't lessen the dramatic aspect of the twists, nor the ambiance inspired by the characters. Great work as always.

Malicia : « That white haired gal whipped herself only to get people to see her boobies surgery, uh. That's very silly.

                 Tabi also has white hair, but she didn't need to do things like that to get a boyfriend, no. »

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Nice entry ! And with a rather catchy composition for the header, really eye catching. As for the chapter itself, no major english mistakes, and a badass ambiance ! Also liked the effects, such as the weeping or the redressing

 

Thanks Tirloque! Glad you liked it!
This is a rather old header. Managed to get a decent amount of approvals on the Nexus, I’m thinking of using it for the "Order" chapters on a more permanent basis. ^_^

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I'm not entirely sure I understood why exactly Vile wanted the apprentice sent to Riften, but that didn't lessen the dramatic aspect of the twists, nor the ambiance inspired by the characters.

A bit Alert. 

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « That white haired gal whipped herself only to get people to see her boobies surgery, uh. That's very silly.

I think that she wants to show that the Order funds are spent on essentials. ^_^

That was a badass chapter.

New girl looks totally like a new boss enemy ?.

Tho she deals with heresy.

Seems Molag Bal got his turn in the games and already lost >.<

10 hours ago, Resdayn said:

That was a badass chapter.

 

New girl looks totally like a new boss enemy ?.

 

Tho she deals with heresy.

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Deals with Vile? This Entire Order need to be purged.

 

Seems Molag Bal got his turn in the games and already lost >.<

Yay! Thanks Res ^_^ 
Great shot, btw!
Which one of them? Young one or the boss one?
 

-The two assassin girls at the end we’re great! Adorably sweet and unassuming looking - best characteristics for assassins!

 -BDO Armor has also been my go to armor as they seem better grounded than most of  Tera armors.

-Tanita is extremely CUTE! Can’t wait to see “more” of her.....her Adventuress I mean!

-Keeping magic uses on a leash has a very Divinity Original Sin and DragonAge feel

-I think my poor,  pervy brain has been permanently hardwired that every time I see a very strong, commanding female alone in a room with another, significantly less domineering looking female . . . well ?
I was expecting her to use her domineering stance and authority to make a subtle move towards Tanita - but again, that’s my brain after writing so many stories involving religious women of authority.

Also, I’m a big sucker for great looking Blog Feature Images. Yours for this entry has a great movie poster or book cover look that one would encounter at bookstores! -though very Darth Revan looking    

20 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

-The two assassin girls at the end we’re great! Adorably sweet and unassuming looking - best characteristics for assassins!

 -BDO Armor has also been my go to armor as they seem better grounded than most of  Tera armors.

-Tanita is extremely CUTE! Can’t wait to see “more” of her.....her Adventuress I mean!

They are cute - I agree!
They appear periodically in my stories and move the plot in a new direction. Tricksters ^_^
I myself a big fan of BDO outfits, especially the one that Dint is converting ^_^
Tanita was originally conceived as an episodic character. But then I got a couple of ideas and now she's really going to have to experience *ahem*... adventures of all sorts.  

20 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

-I think my poor,  pervy brain has been permanently hardwired that every time I see a very strong, commanding female alone in a room with another, significantly less domineering looking female . . . well ?
I was expecting her to use her domineering stance and authority to make a subtle move towards Tanita - but again, that’s my brain after writing so many stories involving religious women of authority.

You talk about it like it's a bad trait  
In my head, they were connected by a different kind of relationship. I will try to reveal this in the future. ^_^ 

21 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Also, I’m a big sucker for great looking Blog Feature Images. Yours for this entry has a great movie poster or book cover look that one would encounter at bookstores! -though very Darth Revan looking    

I disagree with this. You make great and unique Feature Images! In your own style. In my case, this is just one of the best screenshots I have ever taken.
As you said - "hitting that screenshot button so many times for fear you can not replicate those perfect conditions!" 

Did you change any settings for this one? The visuals look even better than your previous stuff, particularly the skin ?

Great job again!

On 8/27/2020 at 3:10 AM, SpyVsPie said:

Did you change any settings for this one? The visuals look even better than your previous stuff, particularly the skin ?

 

Great job again!

Thanks! Nothing specific or new at all, I use a variety of light sources for this scene and I found some pretty good ones.
All of them are vanilla, by the way.

6 hours ago, Crw said:

Thanks! Nothing specific or new at all, I use a variety of light sources for this scene and I found some pretty good ones.
All of them are vanilla, by the way.

Well it works really well.