Super Cool! You did Great! IT! 

Pretty Badass chapter ?

New girls looks cute and ready for horsedick corruption, all of them will be corrupted eventually ?

Seems all of the allies are dead, vigilants, silverhand, I guess only the Dawnguard remains?

And one of your dragonborn makes an apperance, I thought Gwen gonna kill him and use him as rug, based on crappy they are in tes ?

New team seems balanced, we got two fighter a a mage for Gwen, while other girls getting horsedicked in other parts of Skyrim.

And ?

9 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Super Cool! You did Great! IT! 

Yay, thanks ^_^ 

7 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Pretty Badass chapter ?

 

New girls looks cute and ready for horsedick corruption, all of them will be corrupted eventually ?

 

Seems all of the allies are dead, vigilants, silverhand, I guess only the Dawnguard remains?

 

And one of your dragonborn makes an apperance, I thought Gwen gonna kill him and use him as rug, based on crappy they are in tes ?

 

New team seems balanced, we got two fighter a a mage for Gwen, while other girls getting horsedicked in other parts of Skyrim.

 

And ?

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Gwynolda: Thats a lot of heresy in one place.

 

Yay, thanks ^_^

Yes, you know the whole idea why I'm inventing a cute girls in my stories

well, not all of Silverhand are dead actually, as you can see on a last pic they bow to Gwen, cos she defeated Dragonborn ;) I thought that it was pretty clear, thanks for pointing it out. ^_^

And I really have some plans to develop this line with dragonborn, werewolves and silver hand a way futher.

And yes, Gwynolda - it can't be too much heresy, you know it better me

Nice! I like the new girl!

7 hours ago, Crw said:

 

Yay, thanks ^_^

 

Yes, you know the whole idea why I'm inventing a cute girls in my stories

 

well, not all of Silverhand are dead actually, as you can see on a last pic they bow to Gwen, cos she defeated Dragonborn ;) I thought that it was pretty clear, thanks for pointing it out. ^_^

 

And I really have some plans to develop this line with dragonborn, werewolves and silver hand a way futher.

 

And yes, Gwynolda - it can't be too much heresy, you know it better me

They created for a noble cause ?

Ohh hnice, they got a semi useful bandit army haha.

Interesting look forward for more.

She gonna purge a lot if you tease her.

Well, if that wasn't an action packed chapter, I don't know what is !

First the infiltration, then the fight Dragonborn vs Gwen. I noticed an improvement in the clarity of the fights, while still having them as dynamic and acrobatic as ever. Also, I love your new movement effects for the blades, it's more subtle and clearer at the same time than the previous one. Compliments regarding the screenarchery & layout, the shots gradually becoming simultaneously more eye-pleasing while illustrating the story more effectively. The jumps were nice, the dialogues rather on point (for an American audience I'd say ^^). And we gained simultaneously a cute addition to the team and a quite interesting twist regarding your second Dovakhiin (quite badass fighting in his birthsuit ^^). The singing intro was a nice idea as well. We are entertained ! ?

Malicia : « That dragonborn guy is very handsome !

               Plus it's the very first time people like a story where the only naked person is a guy. That's very good, yes.  »

11 hours ago, Resdayn said:

New girls looks cute and ready for horsedick corruption, all of them will be corrupted eventually ?

Malicia : « You should very stop thinking about horses all the time, that would make you healthier in the head, yes.  »

Wow!  The effects here are great!  Especially with the motion blur.  I haven't figured that out here myself!  I thought the chapter moved quickly, but, it had a good pace.  I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!  

Very nicely done. I loved the jumping effect a lot and the end of the episode was great turn around.

Must say I saw Malicija's influence in your story. Both sides, bad and good one had a redhead girl. That was very good subliminal message of the ginger club: reds rule

Very interesting thriller and drama in this episode. Nice work, crw. Very nice.

12 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Nice! I like the new girl!

Thanks Spy ^_^ she's cutie, isn't she?)

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, if that wasn't an action packed chapter, I don't know what is !

First the infiltration, then the fight Dragonborn vs Gwen. I noticed an improvement in the clarity of the fights, while still having them as dynamic and acrobatic as ever. Also, I love your new movement effects for the blades, it's more subtle and clearer at the same time than the previous one. Compliments regarding the screenarchery & layout, the shots gradually becoming simultaneously more eye-pleasing while illustrating the story more effectively. The jumps were nice, the dialogues rather on point (for an American audience I'd say ^^). And we gained simultaneously a cute addition to the team and a quite interesting twist regarding your second Dovakhiin (quite badass fighting in his birthsuit ^^). The singing intro was a nice idea as well. We are entertained ! ?

 

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PS : you did well to advertise the publishing as a status. I didn't get any blog notification.

 

Malicia : « That dragonborn guy is very handsome !

 

               Plus it's the very first time people like a story where the only naked person is a guy. That's very good, yes.  »

Thank you Tirloque, glad you find that one enjoyable ^_^

Thanks, in fact this werewolf fighting scene cos lots of troubles. Its initially suppose to look completely different:-/ but I'm still half pleased with the result.

Well, I noticed that there is some things happening to both, whole ll site and a blog section. Some functions are gone as the notifications and some other minor things...

7 hours ago, djregs said:

Wow!  The effects here are great!  Especially with the motion blur.  I haven't figured that out here myself!  I thought the chapter moved quickly, but, it had a good pace.  I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!  

Thanks for the compliments ^_^

I just didn't get the second sentence, but I like that you enjoyed it ^_^

6 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Very nicely done. I loved the jumping effect a lot and the end of the episode was great turn around.

Must say I saw Malicija's influence in your story. Both sides, bad and good one had a redhead girl. That was very good subliminal message of the ginger club: reds rule

Oh, many thanks, Elf Prince ^_^ glad you like it

well I guess Malicia influence everything around her like storytellers club, blog section and all that

3 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Very interesting thriller and drama in this episode. Nice work, crw. Very nice.

Thank you Eva ^_^ I glad you like it ^_^ 

9 minutes ago, Crw said:

Thanks for the compliments ^_^

I just didn't get the second sentence, but I like that you enjoyed it ^_^

You did some pretty interesting motion blur effects (movement) like in the one below.  That's what I was geeking out about.  

3 hours ago, Crw said:

Thank you Tirloque, glad you find that one enjoyable ^_^

Thanks, in fact this werewolf fighting scene cos lots of troubles. Its initially suppose to look completely different:-/ but I'm still half pleased with the result.

Well, I noticed that there is some things happening to both, whole ll site and a blog section. Some functions are gone as the notifications and some other minor things...

Come-on, that fight still looked badass. Would it be solely because Malicia liked the opponent's style. ^^

As for the notifications, it's a bug that has been around from some months now. So we can only deduce that the recent update (which removes the font choice indeed) didn't correct the bug.

9 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Must say I saw Malicija's influence in your story. Both sides, bad and good one had a redhead girl. That was very good subliminal message of the ginger club: reds rule

Malicia : « You're very right, Mr Prince. We gonna very rule everything, 'cause of our intelligence, yes.  »

4 hours ago, djregs said:

 

You did some pretty interesting motion blur effects (movement) like in the one below.  That's what I was geeking out about.  

Ah, thank you ^_^ now I got it ^_^

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Come-on, that fight still looked badass. Would it be solely because Malicia liked the opponent's style. ^^

 

As for the notifications, it's a bug that has been around from some months now. So we can only deduce that the recent update (which removes the font choice indeed) didn't correct the bug.

Well, yes, but I guess it could be cooler ^_^

I guess the only thing that we can do in term of tech problem(btw I think it's too loud word) is wait...

Well ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I was also a fan of the leap scene ?

I'm still in love with your dialogues! ? I love the screenshots too, obviously, but those snippets " eyes on the prize", " did you expect a pool party?", "artsy-fartsy" - they are just perfect! They add a certain degree of moxie mixed with humor to the otherwise drastic situation ( inquisition has fallen, vampires are attacking and so on). And the "4 little vampires" song was just too adorable! ? The signal exchange had me chuckling for quite a while. ?

The whole episode was like watching an action movie. I can't even pick a favorite moment because I liked every single shot.  The Dragon-wolf-boy was certainly an eye candy, but it looks like he will be trouble later on. And Gwen now technically leads the Silverhand? Really looking forward to the next chapter. Your story is absolutely captivating. ?

P.S. The vigilant girl is a cutie.

P.P.S. I didn't get a notification about your new chapter. ?

9 hours ago, Devianna said:

I'm still in love with your dialogues! ? I love the screenshots too, obviously, but those snippets " eyes on the prize", " did you expect a pool party?", "artsy-fartsy" - they are just perfect! They add a certain degree of moxie mixed with humor to the otherwise drastic situation ( inquisition has fallen, vampires are attacking and so on). And the "4 little vampires" song was just too adorable! ? The signal exchange had me chuckling for quite a while. ?

 

The whole episode was like watching an action movie. I can't even pick a favorite moment because I liked every single shot.  The Dragon-wolf-boy was certainly an eye candy, but it looks like he will be trouble later on. And Gwen now technically leads the Silverhand? Really looking forward to the next chapter. Your story is absolutely captivating. ?

 

P.S. The vigilant girl is a cutie.

P.P.S. I didn't get a notification about your new chapter. ?

 

 

Oh, thank you very muck, Devianna ^_^ 
To be honest I'm sometimes feeling like I'm using too much of the cliche stuff and frases like this. ^_^ 
Speaking about Vigilant-girl, I was just trying to defuse tensions, cos last time Im thinking that all that happening become too serious and complicated. And I guess some people already don't understand whats happening in here.