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[nordwhore]

Fantastic mod, thank you very much. I can't wait to play more.

[SkatingJesus]

I have a question about next chapter, and the plugin: it will be a "new mod" independant of the Prolog, or do you plan to pack the Chapter 1 with the prolog?

 

I mean, I already did the prolog with the save I want to use, so if you pack Prolog + chapter 1 for your next release, maybe it would corrupt the save, and I will have to use another save, maybe?

 

(I hope my question is clear, english is not my native language, and my english always sucked! )

[Athstai]

I have a question about next chapter, and the plugin: it will be a "new mod" independant of the Prolog, or do you plan to pack the Chapter 1 with the prolog?

 

I mean, I already did the prolog with the save I want to use, so if you pack Prolog + chapter 1 for your next release, maybe it would corrupt the save, and I will have to use another save, maybe?

 

(I hope my question is clear, english is not my native language, and my english always sucked! )

The mod will extend, meaning it will be one file with all the chapters in. You should be able to use your old save where you completed the prolog and continue the quest once you have installed the updated mod. "Should" because that part is currently in testing, but I am pretty sure it will work out.

[SkatingJesus]

Ok, thanks or the answer.

 

I can presume that if you didn't change anything in the Prolog script, there is no reason for me to have any problem.

 

Anyway, thanks a lot for your work and for the time you spend for creating this mod, it's very appreciated for everyone here, and we can't wait for Chapter 1!

[Ponygirl]

 this mod and really looking forward to more

great mod and thanks so much for taking the time to make it and sharing it with us

 

hugs from Denmark

[orcking12]

You probally have already found these by now but sexis has 2 rough positions in them rough doggy and missionary that look more nonconsensual and jackabite has some sound bites out that are more rape oriented, The sound bites arent that great yet be they seem to be getting better as he adds but the 2 positions are pretty good.

[Athstai]

New version with the first two branches of the next chapter is up. Enjoy

 

BUT: Do read the Requirements/Installation Notes in the first post.

[SkatingJesus]

YEEEEEEEEHHAaaAaAAAAAAAAAAAaa!!!

[SkatingJesus]

So, I just finished this chapter 1, and one word comes to me: MORE, MORE, MORE!

Absolutely great work. I didn't had any bugs (or really minors ones), and the story goes better and better.

 

Anyway, I have a few questions:

[spoiler=SPOILERS!]I notices that the discussion at the Bright Inn is "a bit long", as when we hide, we can't really see the actors speaking. When the discussion was finished, about "what is the new slave to get?". I waited a few minutes, and nothing happened. So, I showed my face, that caused a combat, with the 2 foes trying to escape. Is it the only path for this part, or maybe the ennemies would have unfortunately discover me? (because nothing to me to attack them, I did it by myself).

It seems you did a great work about the possibilities of Tusam interrogation. There is so many (that's brillant!), that I did tried every ones of them. Can we avoid the submission part?

Let Tursam rot in jail or killing him is really important to the story? But maybe, if he's freed, it would be a spoil for Chapter 2 and others, so I would understand if you answer "You wil see at the right time!".

Anyway, great work, perfect animations, and Bug free!

The only bug I noticed was when I visited first the Farm, and then the follower told me to go to the Inn, I fast-traveled a bit too fast and I was alone in the Inn. Everything went right when I just reloaded my save and wait to have the "Go to the Inn" message before fast-travel.

 

 

But then again, AWESOME WORK.

the dialogs are perfectly written. Hard, sexy and sometimes funny. The two mains characters of this chapters are both great!

 

Good job!

[Athstai]

So, I just finished this chapter 1, and one word comes to me: MORE, MORE, MORE!

Absolutely great work. I didn't had any bugs (or really minors ones), and the story goes better and better.

 

Glad you like it.

 

Anyway, I have a few questions:

 

[spoiler=SPOILERS!]

 

I notices that the discussion at the Bright Inn is "a bit long", as when we hide, we can't really see the actors speaking. When the discussion was finished, about "what is the new slave to get?". I waited a few minutes, and nothing happened. So, I showed my face, that caused a combat, with the 2 foes trying to escape. Is it the only path for this part, or maybe the ennemies would have unfortunately discover me? (because nothing to me to attack them, I did it by myself).

 

It sounds like the scene bugged and stopped, reload and try again. But: It will always end in this fight, so no there is no other path here. Your action will only influence if the fight starts earlier or later.

 

 

It seems you did a great work about the possibilities of Tusam interrogation. There is so many (that's brillant!), that I did tried every ones of them. Can we avoid the submission part?

 

Nope Well YOU do not have to submit, you can deliver Danica The Shydra part will have some dominating scenes (from the Players point of view). But there is no no-sex branch currently.

 

 

Let Tursam rot in jail or killing him is really important to the story? But maybe, if he's freed, it would be a spoil for Chapter 2 and others, so I would understand if you answer "You wil see at the right time!".

 

It won't matter for the story itself, but some of those "ends" will have a "hidden" follow up scene if you choose the "right" one and find the proper location

 

 

 

 

Anyway, great work, perfect animations, and Bug free!

The animations in the player scene were made by an animation artist working for this mod and I do love them too as they fit perfectly into this scene. But it was a lot of work - the one scene consists of 38 single animations, even if it looks only like 3 or 4 so unfortunatly we cannot do this for each scene.

[SkatingJesus]

I noticied one real bug, for now:

 

[spoiler=SPOILERS AGAIN!]During tursam "very final" end, I saw a funny "accident": Johnny beheaded him in normal way. Tursam's head rolled on the floor, but I think you turned off tursam's immortality at the wrong place, as I saw his beheaded body standing up, then kneeling like any immortal NPC, when they are fully weakened but can't die. Then, the follower put his head-less body again on the execution spot, Johnny executed him a second time. pretty excessice to be sure Tursam is totally dead!

Second problem was that the action froze. Both characters stays standing there, and nothing more happened. I didn't tried to save and reload to see ifthe action would continue, but I wanted to share that little problem. But I presume everybody would let tursam go, if there is any hope to see again this wonderful and funny character!... And maybe take a revenge on the Dragonborn...

 

 

That's all I noticied for now!

[souldead341]

I can confirm the "very final end" bug above, it went the exact same way.

[Tobbe27]

Oh, the new version! Exciting! I'll download it immediately!

[tukugawa]

nice mod, only thing i have to say is i crave for more of this.

[DirkJag]

It's finally here.

[Tobbe27]

I seem to be getting stuck... maybe? Not sure! Possible spoilers but not really.

 

 

Tursam says "Bribing the guards all the way to..." and then nothing more happens, with the actors just standing there. Have tried reloading the scene but it wont go any further sadly!

 

[Seaboo]

Excellent mod, thanks for your work !

[Athstai]

I seem to be getting stuck... maybe? Not sure! Possible spoilers but not really.

Tursam says "Bribing the guards all the way to..." and then nothing more happens, with the actors just standing there. Have tried reloading the scene but it wont go any further sadly!

I don't know why it gets stuck there for you, it should work fine generally. But if you leave your position the interrupt scene should fire up and everything should go on. Otherwise you need to try an earlier save. And if this doesn't works, something must be conflicting.

 

 

[aljustineg]

nice mod the animations are great il be looking forward for your next chapter and i didnt encounter any stuck scenes 

[serana´]

you are awesome !

[Tobbe27]

Alright, finished it! I absolutely loved it and I'm amazed at the sheer quality of the production behind it. The writing is great aswell, altough the sex dialogue is about as cheesy as it comes (probably a good thing though ). I did discover a number of bugs/misses:

 

 

 

- Dialogue would not proceed beyond "Bribing the guards all the way to..." in the inn. I never did figure out why it didn't work, but attacking the troop lead to progress in the quest regardless. I assumed attacking would result in mission failure however, something others might assume aswell if it bugs out for them like it did for me.

 

- I caught up to Tursan during the chase and hit him. When the cutscene for his escort away came, he instead began to fight (had to reload). I assumed I was meant to whack on him until he yielded again, I didn't know you were meant to just follow him. It is after all quite easy to catch up to him.

 

- If you do not wear the Whiterun Guard ring when Tursan yields, the quest will be stuck. I had forgotten to put it on (using a +HP ring instead ) so I was a bit confounded there, luckily I remembered that the ring might trigger certain scripts.

 

- When crouching down in front of Tursan, I was teleported away from the room and ended up outside the gates with the guard. Only happened once and it worked fine after that, but something was amiss at least the first time!

 

- The prisoner talking about sacrificing his family and neighbours at one point says "Scaryifying"- while he is scary, that's probably not what he meant

 

 

 

Would just like to say again that this is easily the best mod I've seen for Skyrim so far, what with all the different choices and attention for detail. I loved that you could look into the other cells and have a look at the other crazy prisoners, and the animations were absolutely amaaaaazing. I thought for a while you'd be using stock animations, but these were incredibly detailed and hot to say the least.

 

While I understand that it took a lot of time to do them, using such detail to the... main scene in a chapter would be crazy good. Thanks for taking your time to develop this mod!

 

 

A big thanks to DarkAngel1265, for animating the scene between the player and the slaver!

[Deep Red]

Like the previous chapter, amazing work. I wish it would've been even partially voice acted, but the great story made up ten fold for it! I played it as a submissive dragonborn and the scene with Tursam in the cell, negociating a deal was hilarious. The animations were well-done indeed. This chapter has left me begging for more. The other random prisoners in the old jail had some pretty funny quotes as well. I really love the twist of humor added into story, it helps keep the atmosphere light-hearted and it works toward character development (at least from my perspective ). Keep up the great work!

One little thing though, Anray continues to be a follower even after finishing the chapter. I can't dismiss him at all either, unless it's something on my end? He's pretty cool, but a bit on the overpowered side with enough health and stamina to make all your other followers jealous. There were some other minor bugs, but I'm pretty sure those might be attributed to my ~240 mods in my load order, though.

Update: I uploaded a handful of screenies to showcase my favorite moments.

 

Note: These pics count as an actual spoiler I suppose. They don't give away much, but a fair warning nonetheless.
[spoiler=Pics (NSFW!)]
     

 

Edited February 15, 2013 by Johnnyred

[capslox]

awesome! can't wait next chapter

[redizi]

This Quest is AWESOME!

 

i cant wait for the next updates. I want it! 

 

nice how the story evolved.

[nirax]

wohoo DI update, cant wait to test it ^^