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On 31.12.2017 at 4:59 PM, Crw said:

Hello again ^_^
A small experiment to create comic frames. With a coupe of Gifs
What do you think?


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Nobody replied so far, I guess.

The picture quality is strange.. is that on purpose? If not, do not stick to it.

That counts for the facial "pose" of picture 1 and 2 (in parts), too. Although, pic 1 is the weakest, but that might be because of the light. 2 & 3 are darker, that's makes it better.

The white background is also not a good choice.

All in all, it doesn't remind me of a comic strip. If you could place it like this: pic 1 upper left, pic 2 upper right and pic 3 below 1 & 2, having the seize of them both combined.

 

That could do.

Hope that doesn't sound so harsh.

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21 hours ago, Swiftstep said:

Nobody replied so far, I guess.

The picture quality is strange.. is that on purpose? If not, do not stick to it.

That counts for the facial "pose" of picture 1 and 2 (in parts), too. Although, pic 1 is the weakest, but that might be because of the light. 2 & 3 are darker, that's makes it better.

The white background is also not a good choice.

All in all, it doesn't remind me of a comic strip. If you could place it like this: pic 1 upper left, pic 2 upper right and pic 3 below 1 & 2, having the seize of them both combined.

 

That could do.

Hope that doesn't sound so harsh.

Nope, it okay) And no matter how harsh it sounds, it's fairly objective, and helps me to understand what to work on. Kindly grateful ^_^ Аnd thanks for the advice.

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