Oh, thats a pretty interesting concept... 

And I like the implement of several different concepts of vampirism in one.

Looks like an interesting setup for a continuation ^_^

Veeeeery creepy

Did I already tell you that I like this dark setting?

3 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh, thats a pretty interesting concept... 

And I like the implement of several different concepts of vampirism in one.

Looks like an interesting setup for a continuation ^_^

Thank you ?

Yeah, I kinda mixed in a quite a few one, and was inspired of the strigoi for her way of drinking, as well from the actual leeches, those are kinda creep me out.

2 hours ago, worik said:

Veeeeery creepy

Did I already tell you that I like this dark setting?

Thank you ?

Im glad you like it ?, I like it too, pretty fun for me to be honest.

44 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

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I though I would love to make our with her but seeing her tongue, my desire completely vanished.

Great episode Residan.

thank you again for this episode wow ..what a tongue new one for a vampire as always looking forward i love your ideas ?

The tongue scene... I love how you're implementing more horror concepts into your stories : in that case the tongue felt unexpected and creepy as hell. Having Eliza not expecting to become a vampire was rather surprising though, but allowed for a great "developing illness" first person insight, which prepared the ground for the rest. Though having a new type of vampirism develop that way (I suppose one can get infections from eating as well), there is still a bit of a contradiction with her using blood powers to paralyze her victim, as it contradicts the fact she was supposed not to know about it. Anyway, eye candy screens (including Riften by night), with a touch of sexiness and horror. A tasteful mix !

Malicia : « 

                 I hope that's not why Gwynolda wants to kiss everyone's pee-pee, no ! »

9 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

I though I would love to make our with her but seeing her tongue, my desire completely vanished.

Great episode Residan.

Thank you ?

Yeah, she has that instead of fangs. ?

7 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you again for this episode wow ..what a tongue new one for a vampire as always looking forward i love your ideas ?

Thank you ?

3 hours ago, Tirloque said:

The tongue scene... I love how you're implementing more horror concepts into your stories : in that case the tongue felt unexpected and creepy as hell. Having Eliza not expecting to become a vampire was rather surprising though, but allowed for a great "developing illness" first person insight, which prepared the ground for the rest. Though having a new type of vampirism develop that way (I suppose one can get infections from eating as well), there is still a bit of a contradiction with her using blood powers to paralyze her victim, as it contradicts the fact she was supposed not to know about it. Anyway, eye candy screens (including Riften by night), with a touch of sexiness and horror. A tasteful mix !

 

Malicia : « 

 

                 I hope that's not why Gwynolda wants to kiss everyone's pee-pee, no ! »

Thank you ?

Well it means the horror vibe and aura's and things seems integrated to my stories, my desire to write them and mood for it, slowly put itself in this storyline, but so far its great I think, really improves things.

Yeah, Im sure everyone expected a cute fang, not a long leech like creepy tongue to drink blood, I decided to explore the other vampire concepts.. which worked quite well, it makes Eliza less sexy and more creepy.

Its more on Eliza's lack of knowledge and perception, otherwise she would figure out before killing one person, and she took Gauis words too literally.

She thought, its a alchemy or make up thing, and she need eat red things to keep looking young, cause she not really was aware of vampire blood infecting thing.

Ohh in Oblivion eating a vampire parts, in game we eat a heart, can infect with the strain, along with other things too, since its a undead, but eating vampires seems infecting, that counts with their blood probably as well.

Ohhh, she was lost herself in hunger during that scene, and used instictly her powers, I mean she is vampire now and her basic insticts are changed from human.

Idea was, she lost herself to the hunger during the scene and went more on the monster/bestial side and used her powers naturally, and utilised that way.

So normally, if she well fed, she probably need learn these how to use manually, and figuring out her abilities and body.

I could make this part a bit more obvious. ?

Since after drinking blood and killing the girl, she was like what happened and made her conclusions of her being a vampire.

I don't think that Malicia, you know Gwynolda ain't vampire opposed Serana, who is your friend and want girl pee-pee-s. And it seems your delivery boy brought the letter in the right place, but we have two ladies in the same name oopss..

4 minutes ago, Forshare said:

Ooh she could stick her tongue down the throat and drink from the inside ?

I thought on that too, and actually with her tongue and her vampire concepts, seems ideal and less suspicious and more erotic way to brutally murder her victims ?, same time even more creepier a bit.

At the moment she just discovering herself, later she probably use similar methods ?

2 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Thank you ?

 

Well it means the horror vibe and aura's and things seems integrated to my stories, my desire to write them and mood for it, slowly put itself in this storyline, but so far its great I think, really improves things.

 

Yeah, Im sure everyone expected a cute fang, not a long leech like creepy tongue to drink blood, I decided to explore the other vampire concepts.. which worked quite well, it makes Eliza less sexy and more creepy.

Absolutely. But that goes indeed quite well with the horror vibe, you may have found your writing genre there.

2 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Its more on Eliza's lack of knowledge and perception, otherwise she would figure out before killing one person, and she took Gauis words too literally.

 

She thought, its a alchemy or make up thing, and she need eat red things to keep looking young, cause she not really was aware of vampire blood infecting thing.

 

Ohh in Oblivion eating a vampire parts, in game we eat a heart, can infect with the strain, along with other things too, since its a undead, but eating vampires seems infecting, that counts with their blood probably as well.

 

Ohhh, she was lost herself in hunger during that scene, and used instictly her powers, I mean she is vampire now and her basic insticts are changed from human.

 

Idea was, she lost herself to the hunger during the scene and went more on the monster/bestial side and used her powers naturally, and utilised that way.

 

So normally, if she well fed, she probably need learn these how to use manually, and figuring out her abilities and body.

 

I could make this part a bit more obvious. ?

Probably.

As for Oblivion allowing to infect oneself by eating, I didn't know, but it makes sense in a way.

2 hours ago, Resdayn said:

I don't think that Malicia, you know Gwynolda ain't vampire opposed Serana, who is your friend and want girl pee-pee-s. And it seems your delivery boy brought the letter in the right place, but we have two ladies in the same name oopss..

Malicia : « But I wrote Gwynolda on the address, yes !

                I don't say that tongue lady doesn't need expert advice, but Gwynolda needs it more, you see ?  »

Okay, I did not expect THAT kind of a vampire from Eliza. ? The whole story just went from this:

to this:

And I absolutely love it! ? It was creepy, disgusting, disturbing and perfect! Eliza's reaction to the whole experience was very fitting for her character. She showed some surprise and then went " Well, it's a diet change. I can work with that".  Her main concern seemed to be that it wasn't a pretty sight and looks like she's planning to figure out how to control this so she can feed and still look dignified. She really is narcissistic, isn't she? ?

Some of Eliza's thoughts in the end suggest that she might consider creating her clan of vampires or ruling over an already established one. ? I doubt she'll just sink quietly into the shadows, so whatever you're planning for her is bound to be epic. ?

I agree with Tirloque: you're a very good writer and it seems that the horror theme comes to you naturally.  Your last few episodes really make the reader feel uneasy and it is generally an incredibly difficult thing to achieve. My deepest compliments on that! ☺️

With all of this being said - the screenshots were amazing.  The alchemist shop door was my favorite. It looked warm, inviting and felt like the only good thing among Riften's lower levels. And the fact that in a few minutes even that place of healing turned into a horror show deepened the aura of corruption and decay of the whole city.

Really well-done. Thank you for sharing your work with us. ☺️

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Absolutely. But that goes indeed quite well with the horror vibe, you may have found your writing genre there.

 

As for Oblivion allowing to infect oneself by eating, I didn't know, but it makes sense in a way.

 

Malicia : « But I wrote Gwynolda on the address, yes !

 

                I don't say that tongue lady doesn't need expert advice, but Gwynolda needs it more, you see ?  »

 

Do you think? ? Well if you think that, thank you for the compliments ❤️

I certainly having fun with the concepts and the horror tools, at least how I see the horror genre and its strenghts. Seems perfect mix for my skyrim stories, and kinda was intended for long time, at least for Arilith def, now even Gwynolda and her future stories seems have that.

Now I wonder what could I do with the actually planned horror projects. ?

Yeah, one of the dlc-s we need eat vampire heart, althought outside of the vampire infection, it really brought a load of diseases as well, so not the most optimal way ?

Yes, Malicia and it went to the right place, just it happens the inkeeper lady was saucy and gave that too Gwynolda's mother.

1 hour ago, Devianna said:

Okay, I did not expect THAT kind of a vampire from Eliza. ? The whole story just went from this:

 

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And I absolutely love it! ? It was creepy, disgusting, disturbing and perfect! Eliza's reaction to the whole experience was very fitting for her character. She showed some surprise and then went " Well, it's a diet change. I can work with that".  Her main concern seemed to be that it wasn't a pretty sight and looks like she's planning to figure out how to control this so she can feed and still look dignified. She really is narcissistic, isn't she? ?

 

Some of Eliza's thoughts in the end suggest that she might consider creating her clan of vampires or ruling over an already established one. ? I doubt she'll just sink quietly into the shadows, so whatever you're planning for her is bound to be epic. ?

 

I agree with Tirloque: you're a very good writer and it seems that the horror theme comes to you naturally.  Your last few episodes really make the reader feel uneasy and it is generally an incredibly difficult thing to achieve. My deepest compliments on that! ☺️

 

With all of this being said - the screenshots were amazing.  The alchemist shop door was my favorite. It looked warm, inviting and felt like the only good thing among Riften's lower levels. And the fact that in a few minutes even that place of healing turned into a horror show deepened the aura of corruption and decay of the whole city.

 

Really well-done. Thank you for sharing your work with us. ☺️

Thank you ❤️

I love those picture comparison, second pic is really epic to be honest, holy molly, thats some monstrous vampire boy. ? I love it. ?

Im very happy to have everyone suprised by the vampire direction I went, tongues were wonderful idea and makes a refreshing concept of the vampires. ?

That was intention, unexpected, pretty creepy and most importantly disgusiting, like the actual bloodsuckers, expect the bats they kinda just cute, even if they drink blood. ?

But really, I went to the actual the blood suckers, like leeches, and damn those things are creepy and disguisting, yikes, so the idea was why not make her resemble to that.

I mean she is undead blood drinking abomination, a parasitic creature, I think its fitting for having similarly monstrous and creepy way of drinking blood, I know nowadays vampires are kinky blood drinking undeads, but lets forget they are monsters. I not really hide I was inspired of the strigoi kind of vampires as well.

I be honest, Eliza would make similar rewarks for the fang one too, but her current one is truly a creepy sight, and as Foreshare mentioned, if she kiss someone and put that tongue down and drink inside them, it just makes it even more creepier, I legit have shivers thinking of that.

Yes, thats her only concern about the entire thing, she not even concerned being a vampire, she looks youthful and pretty, just need some diet change and complety fine, most concerning thing she found is to not look fancy when she eat, like nothing major happened with her. ?

Ahh yes, thats her narcism showing, if she ended up a vampire, she can't be anything else then the top dog, the very best and the greatest vampire, how can those low-life claim to be the same thing as she? Yes, paired with the learning plans and these thoughts, she definetly up for something. ?

Hmmm, it seems I must do something good in the horror genre if everyone complements me for it ☺️, I just honestly used the strenghts of the genre and the concepts , what nowadays kinda forgotten.

But thank you for the compliments ?

I really happy with my screenshots in this arc, so far every of it is great and delivers my intentions. Yes that is very good connection, I even made Anna a bit nice-ish and quirky with some of her lines, showcasing not just the shot, but herself is good person, then she just got a living nightmare and a horrible death. ?

35 minutes ago, Forshare said:

Well that drinking might give you shivers, but it makes me feel a bit differently ?. I would probably have Ralea experience this if those tongues could go on NPCs. Except for the dying at the end part?

I mean having a big ass tongue going down on your throat and drink your blood out feels a bit hardcore ?

In erotic sense, I think tongue is less deadly for oral sex ?

Well Ralea seems to have jobs to serve people as maid, she might get unlucky to meet a vampire noble ?

6 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Yeah, one of the dlc-s we need eat vampire heart, althought outside of the vampire infection, it really brought a load of diseases as well, so not the most optimal way ?

Well, eating expired food isn't too recommended after all.

6 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Do you think? ? Well if you think that, thank you for the compliments ❤️

 

I certainly having fun with the concepts and the horror tools, at least how I see the horror genre and its strenghts. Seems perfect mix for my skyrim stories, and kinda was intended for long time, at least for Arilith def, now even Gwynolda and her future stories seems have that.

 

Now I wonder what could I do with the actually planned horror projects. ?

This is your new horror project. You've got so much potential for it with Gwynolda's story, while at the same time having a variety of other possibilities and a nice screenarchery setup. Make the best out of it !

6 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Yes, Malicia and it went to the right place, just it happens the inkeeper lady was saucy and gave that too Gwynolda's mother.

Malicia : « That's very not nice. I paid the postmen for it, uh. I gonna make a claim. »

25 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Well, eating expired food isn't too recommended after all.

 

True ?

25 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

This is your new horror project. You've got so much potential for it with Gwynolda's story, while at the same time having a variety of other possibilities and a nice screenarchery setup. Make the best out of it !

 

Well technicly  yes and no, Gwynolda's story is more like main project and horror aspect just got integrated in.

Certainly this arc really got some good potential and overall for her future stories as well, I think dark fantasy aspect and horror gonna stay.

And when I going back to Arilith, you can expect her story will get too in some aspect.

I try make the best out of it, it seems horror gonna remain in my writings.

25 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « That's very not nice. I paid the postmen for it, uh. I gonna make a claim. »

 

Talos Express getting lazy nowadays ?

Eliza out here lookin' like she boutta rock and roll all night and party every day.

Nice entry, I like how you change POVs between chapters and the process of discovering her vampirism was well done. 

1 hour ago, SpyVsPie said:

Eliza out here lookin' like she boutta rock and roll all night and party every day.

 

Spoiler

 

Nice entry, I like how you change POVs between chapters and the process of discovering her vampirism was well done. 

She definetly have the rock and roll potential with her tongue, maybe instead she should go to the bard college and make a band ?

Now I have gonna Kiss songs in my head for the day ?

Thank you, well she is kinda main antagonist and the true one, its really was to time to make her actually an physical apperance ?, otherwise most of the arc is still dominated by the protag's pov.

Whaaaaa- Leech tongue!? Eeeeyuck! Really made me shudder. Fantastic idea! Seriously repulsive, but fantastic! Haha, terrific job, Res!

6 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Whaaaaa- Leech tongue!? Eeeeyuck! Really made me shudder. Fantastic idea! Seriously repulsive, but fantastic! Haha, terrific job, Res!

Thank you ?

Im glad the tongue did its purpose really well, I thought making her way of blood drinking resemble to an actual bloodsucker was good idea, like really leeches are creepy and disguisting.

She is creepy and rather scary with her way of bloodsuck, I personally love it.

Dear god. How in the world such a beautiful vampire can have such ugly tongue? Nicely done, Lady D.

On 9/27/2019 at 9:17 AM, Tirloque said:

 

Malicia : « 

 

                 I hope that's not why Gwynolda wants to kiss everyone's pee-pee, no ! »

Damn, I can't post any gif. LL stop responding after few seconds of uploading.  

Well, I'm sure some girls and boys would love it. Especially if she is skilled in using it

12 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Damn, I can't post any gif. LL stop responding ager few seconds of uploading.

Then don't upload them, just link them :

- right click on your gif on its original website -> copy address/url

- paste it in your LL message

- click enter

12 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Well, I'm sure some girls and boys would love it. Especially if she is skilled in using it

Malicia :

6 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Then don't upload them, just link them :

- right click on your gif on its original website -> copy address/url

- paste it in your LL message

- click enter

Malicia :

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If you wanna get a kiss on the pee-pee you know what to do, now. »

 

> I have that gif on my laptop. I can't remember where did I downloaded it from.

> As for second picture: IT'S GROSS!!!! and the chameleon didn't kissed pee-pee but man's mouth. That guy is sick. He can wash his mouth a thousand times, but I will never kiss him.

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

Dear god. How in the world such a beautiful vampire can have such ugly tongue? Nicely done, Lady D.

Thank you ?

Just because she looks very pretty, she still blood drinking monster ?

I personally love her tongue.