Now THIS is a comic I want to follow... really well done!

Graphically, this is still a treat in terms of colors and visual identity. Now, scenario wise, inviting someone for a threesome doesn't looks that logical after being shocked by a simple kiss. And it's not obvious that David is in fact answering to himself in his second vignette (I had to crosscheck with the french version). Anyway, I guess the next entry will finally feature some answers regarding the mystery !

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Graphically, this is still a treat in terms of colors and visual identity. Now, scenario wise, inviting someone for a threesome doesn't looks that logical after being shocked by a simple kiss. And it's not obvious that David is in fact answering to himself in his second vignette (I had to crosscheck with the french version). Anyway, I guess the next entry will finally feature some answers regarding the mystery !

That's something I realize after i finish the chapter. That's not illogical for me in my personnal experience, but yea it can be weird. I think i do a will twist in saying that Judith was a bit drunk and/or high and she apologize or something.

I will correct for the David dialogue, he is not anwering to himself, but you're right, in english, its not obvious, i will down the bubble a bit. (And maybe correct Alicia dialogue). Its one of the problem when I work in a language and adapt in english after. (I do that because its hard to think in english for me).

Thank you for your feedback.

really well done

@sirlycan13 Thank you.