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[EN/FR] A God's Curse / Chapter 4 : Regrets


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This one come out late, i wasnt happy about what i did. The Chapter 4, 5 and 6 were ready but the story took too long to move foward. So i rewrite it. I had to redone all the screens, scenery...

 

Hope you enjoy.

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Summary

 

Previous chapter Chapter 3 : Bad Dream

Next Chapter Chapter 5 : Blackmail

 

EN.jpg.051c0161331fad874abeace2b1116b31.jpg English Version

 

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FR.jpg.fff727ea32633f4ce4a349bcd1398d34.jpg French version

 

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Graphically, this is still a treat in terms of colors and visual identity. Now, scenario wise, inviting someone for a threesome doesn't looks that logical after being shocked by a simple kiss. And it's not obvious that David is in fact answering to himself in his second vignette (I had to crosscheck with the french version). Anyway, I guess the next entry will finally feature some answers regarding the mystery ! :smiley:

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Graphically, this is still a treat in terms of colors and visual identity. Now, scenario wise, inviting someone for a threesome doesn't looks that logical after being shocked by a simple kiss. And it's not obvious that David is in fact answering to himself in his second vignette (I had to crosscheck with the french version). Anyway, I guess the next entry will finally feature some answers regarding the mystery ! :smiley:

That's something I realize after i finish the chapter. That's not illogical for me in my personnal experience, but yea it can be weird. I think i do a will twist in saying that Judith was a bit drunk and/or high and she apologize or something.

 

I will correct for the David dialogue, he is not anwering to himself, but you're right, in english, its not obvious, i will down the bubble a bit. (And maybe correct Alicia dialogue). Its one of the problem when I work in a language and adapt in english after. (I do that because its hard to think in english for me).

 

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