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Hey guys, as I'm not good enough in English to write a story, feel free to write your own in the comments ! 

Practice makes perfect : no one is good at foreign languages at the start, and most of us not being native english speakers. So if you want to get good at it, start by making small ones, you'll learn in the process, progressively.

26 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Practice makes perfect : no one is good at foreign languages at the start, and most of us not being native english speakers. So if you want to get good at it, start by making small ones, you'll learn in the process, progressively.

You are right, but I don't want to make public my poor written stories I feel like it may be disrespectful for the reader

What do you think about the blur on this one, by the way ?

Hey I missed this.

Nice one, but have no idea what the heck is that monster.

Also do not fear wrtie stories to your pictures, it is best way to imporve the language.

3 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Hey I missed this.

 

Nice one, but have no idea what the heck is that monster.

 

Also do not fear wrtie stories to your pictures, it is best way to imporve the language.

Glad you like it ! 

Don't know either but surely one of its parent is pig related  

Be warned, if you guys keep asking for bad written stories you shall have bad written stories ! XD 

31 minutes ago, Pharazith said:

 

Be warned, if you guys keep asking for bad written stories you shall have bad written stories ! XD

Well they are one of the most entertaining medias accessible to non professionals, so tiny stories, revolving around a couple of images could be an interesting evolution in your case. Double check them with translators, and make sure to take your time to get your style right. But even if they're not, be assured most storytellers willing to improve eventually do. ?

40 minutes ago, Pharazith said:

You are right, but I don't want to make public my poor written stories I feel like it may be disrespectful for the reader

 

What do you think about the blur on this one, by the way ?

It's alright for the woman as we've got both clear textures and some very detailed contrasting parts (the eyes, the hair for example). The creature however has less contrasting elements, so appears less defined. And finally the background blur kinda recreates DoF effects, so it's not a problem.

46 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Well they are one of the most entertaining medias accessible to non professionals, so tiny stories, revolving around a couple of images could be an interesting evolution in your case. Double check them with translators, and make sure to take your time to get your style right. But even if they're not, be assured most storytellers willing to improve eventually do. ?

It's alright for the woman as we've got both clear textures and some very detailed contrasting parts (the eyes, the hair for example). The creature however has less contrasting elements, so appears less defined. And finally the background blur kinda recreates DoF effects, so it's not a problem.

Ok maybe I will give it a try then, even if it will be hard to overcome the shame :x

Thank you for the feed back

The DoF effect was intended, however messing up the monster wasn't ^^'

Awesome!!

1 hour ago, WANOBI12 said:

Awesome!!

 Glad you like it !