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D.A.T - Dangerous Adult Tales 18+

 

A  journey of Feris The Red, famous bounty hunter in a world full of adult dangers.

 

Young gun for sale type - bounty hunter, dedicated to get any profitable contract.

Wondering from city to city, shes experiencing life at it's best and worst.

She knows that ultimately all of us will be dead, that why she's so open minded, ready for new challenges -

 

              all the time.

 

 

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My first comic ever,..... Hope You like it, i did for sure,

 

the gray / white / black episode was due my 10 hours of work lost, 400 screenshots got corrupted, so i made it into a  ,, dream ".

 

 

All the best, and part 2 is for future !

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Tirloque

Well, for a first try this is interesting. The plot revolving around the dream isn't easy to catch though, the combination of the blurry aspect of the dream + the small size of the images decreasing the readability. However the idea in itself was original, and introduced some mystery to the plot. And effects plus the inscreen subtitles make things more pleasant. ?

 

Anyway, I'd suggest to use the direct links for the images (to display them full width), and to switch to jpeg (to avoid long loading times) ; 'cause the thumbnails feel too small to create the immersion.

sss63.png

You'll find more info about how to do this on this tutorial (part I and III). smiley_sorcer_HFR.gif

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nobis
8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, for a first try this is interesting. The plot revolving around the dream isn't easy to catch though, the combination of the blurry aspect of the dream + the small size of the images decreasing the readability. However the idea in itself was original, and introduced some mystery to the plot. And effects plus the inscreen subtitles make things more pleasant. ?

 

Anyway, I'd suggest to use the direct links for the images (to display them full width), and to switch to jpeg (to avoid long loading times) ; 'cause the thumbnails feel to small to create the immersion.

sss63.png

You'll find more info about how to do this on this tutorial (part I and III). smiley_sorcer_HFR.gif

Thank you for the tip Tir !

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