Wow nice one..

For a first try this is impressive : comic layout, balanced screens, poses and expressions... And the plot itself feels developed enough to be interesting. It'll be up to you to confirm those ! Now just one thing, I think the color changes for the sex dialogues might be too bright, distracting too much the eye from the action. And at the contrary the narratives lack a bit of contrast. But that's minor.

Also, technically you could choose to display your images full-width (check tutorial's part III), which might increase the overall impact and readability of the scenes.

Awaiting for part 2 ! ?

Well done, I'm looking forward for your next entry.  

Bloody good. ❤️❤️

Like the story.