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Dark Ascension - Book 1: Chapter 1


devious-Drunna

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Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows

Hey everyone!
This will be my first time ever that I have posted on the internet of my own written stories. IN addition, this is my first time doing a comic book as well. I do not consider myself much a writer, but I was inspired by the Picture Book "The Story Teller" Thread that was around from 2015-2016.  Hope you guys enjoy this story. Feedback is welcomed.

 

 

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Dark Ascension Chapter Contents

 

Book 1

Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows

Chapter 2: Reaper's Covenant

Chapter 3: Journey's Shadowed Path

Chapter 4: Essence Awakenings

Chapter 5:Secrets Under the Stairs

Chapter 6: Vestal's Order

Chapter 7: Veracity’s Twilight

Chapter 8: Pawns in Portension’s Shadow

Chapter 9: Hath Thee in Thrall

Chapter 10: No Tomorrow

Chapter 11: In the Mouth of Chaos and Lust

Chapter 12: The Laconic Pathway

Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence

Chapter 14: Lascivious Connections

Chapter 15: Cross the Rubikon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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For a first try this is impressive : comic layout, balanced screens, poses and expressions... And the plot itself feels developed enough to be interesting. It'll be up to you to confirm those ! Now just one thing, I think the color changes for the sex dialogues might be too bright, distracting too much the eye from the action. And at the contrary the narratives lack a bit of contrast. But that's minor.

Also, technically you could choose to display your images full-width (check tutorial's part III), which might increase the overall impact and readability of the scenes. Smiley_henri_gaud-belin_HFR.gif



Awaiting for part 2 ! ?

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