story Chapter 13. nun demon corruption sex lesbian fight lol noone reading this :d Entry posted by Crw0 July 23, 2018 2590 views Followers 0 As usual, I ask you to read and vote ^_^ Thank you =) 20 members have voted 1. How to spend time? Sparring with Gwen. 4 Magic practice with Sinetica. 16 This poll is closed to new votes Please sign in or register to vote in this poll. Hello everyone ? Wow, this time it's very long. (I mean seriously, over 70) I hope you ll enjoy ^_^ Have a nice day and all the delightful week=) Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler 14
Guest Posted July 23, 2018 They not need heretical arts, all they need is a good heretic purger sparring
Alter Native Posted July 23, 2018 Well done, I'd hoped the deadric artifact had more of a deadric effect , but this version works as well :). That red gargoyle thing was just a random demon right? No one special, correct? I'm just asking for a better understanding. 1
Crw0 Posted July 23, 2018 22 minutes ago, Resdayn said: They not need heretical arts, all they need is a good heretic purger sparring Is it possible to expel heretics with a heretical fire? 18 minutes ago, Alter Native said: Well done, I'd hoped the deadric artifact had more of a deadric effect , but this version works as well :). That red gargoyle thing was just a random demon right? No one special, correct? I'm just asking for a better understanding. I'm now wondering how could it be more daedric in your understanding?) Yeap, He(it?) is nothing special. I would rank him in a lieutenant, but I do not want to introduce a new character, who will immediately be killed. This is not a Game of Thrones) But in general, yes. Random Demon ^_^
Guest Posted July 23, 2018 17 minutes ago, Crw said: Is it possible to expel heretics with a heretical fire? What is this heresy?
Alter Native Posted July 23, 2018 2 hours ago, Crw said: I'm now wondering how could it be more daedric in your understanding?) More like they transform into the darker /deadric versions and kill them. They get out of there bad situation, but for the price of their "good" nature or at least parts of it. 1
Crw0 Posted July 23, 2018 10 minutes ago, Alter Native said: More like they transform into the darker /deadric versions and kill them. They get out of there bad situation, but for the price of their "good" nature or at least parts of it. I wanted to put it on later and prolong the process. Spoiler And in general, in her appearance, there are already small permanent changes. ^_^
Jay-Omms Posted July 23, 2018 You know the......illusion where you sucked all their dicks......Yeah that illusion.... Yeah she should train in what she may know more or had more experience with using that way she won't make the same mistakes twice hopefully. ? 1
Crw0 Posted July 23, 2018 29 minutes ago, Jayomms said: You know the......illusion where you sucked all their dicks......Yeah that illusion.... Hah Do not tell her the truth
Guest Posted July 24, 2018 Awesome entry. Didn't have much time to be "fully"into the story but loved it a lot: two things amazed me: effects, fights and girls's kissing. My and Prince's blond is awesome. So, Sinetica will practice magic. that's what I vote for: Would it be sex magic?
Crw0 Posted July 24, 2018 6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said: Awesome entry. Didn't have much time to be "fully"into the story but loved it a lot: two things amazed me: effects, fights and girls's kissing. My and Prince's blond is awesome. So, Sinetica will practice magic. that's what I vote for: Would it be sex magic? Thank you, Eva I'm glad that you liked. I tried to do my best on these moments ^ _ ^ Sex-magic? Ain't sex is magic itself? so maybe ^_^
Tirloque Posted July 24, 2018 Lots of badassery here, the whole pages with your "old wolf" (do we know his name, btw ?) were stylish and punchy. I noticed you modified some of your strikes effects, dunno if the blood was ingame of not but if added it's high quality work. Plus the whereabouts about the amulet's spell were interesting (and the activation effect awesome as well). And you're adding depth to the three heroines relationships... Excellent chapter ! Malicia : « So it's a honey-honey amulet, but it only works in people's minds right ? But I wouldn't like to die from honey-honey, specially if it's not even real, no ! Anyway, you should learn to do magic with your hands, Rose, so that it only does what you want, yes. » 1
Crw0 Posted July 24, 2018 48 minutes ago, Tirloque said: Lots of badassery here, the whole pages with your "old wolf" (do we know his name, btw ?) were stylish and punchy. I noticed you modified some of your strikes effects, dunno if the blood was ingame of not but if added it's high quality work. Thank you ^_^ I tried to make them as much badass as possible. In the scenario, he goes under the name of " Sinus' The gray-dragon '' I was planning to devote a couple of side-stories to him semi-sfw. But it's only a plan and a few idias for now 48 minutes ago, Tirloque said: Plus the whereabouts about the amulet's spell were interesting (and the activation effect awesome as well). And you're adding depth to the three heroines relationships Oh, thank you very much ^ _ ^ I was afraid that I went too far with the effects) 48 minutes ago, Tirloque said: a honey-honey amulet And in ancient scrolls it is written(With the Voice of the Paarthurnax) : Fear to use "The honey-honey amulet" - for its power is great, and the consequences are unbearable for the gaze of the mortal! I can not stop laughing. 1
Tirloque Posted July 24, 2018 1 hour ago, Crw said: Thank you ^_^ I tried to make them as much badass as possible. In the scenario, he goes under the name of " Sinus' The gray-dragon '' I was planning to devote a couple of side-stories to him semi-sfw. But it's only a plan and a few idias for now Oh, thank you very much ^ _ ^ I was afraid that I went too far with the effects) Well you made them more subtle at the same time so despite having more of them it went perfectly ok. About Sinus, I think he'll play a major part in your story anyway, and your have potential for a very interesting interaction with your trio. 1 hour ago, Crw said: And in ancient scrolls it is written(With the Voice of the Paarthurnax) : Fear to use "The honey-honey amulet" - for its power is great, and the consequences are unbearable for the gaze of the mortal! I can not stop laughing. Careful there ! You're talking about one of the most powerful artifacts in the whole Malician mythology. Now, repeat your Paarthurnax speech but as a narrator voice, with music, and while imagining Malicia climbing the steps to the artifact, after having fought for 3 days and nights her way through hordes of monsters : Spoiler And finally, you'll be worthy of the power of... The Honey-honey amulet ! PS : I saw what you did with the tags. 1
Crw0 Posted July 24, 2018 Narrator? Huh In this case, I think this can be applied to her ^_^ Spoiler 46 minutes ago, Tirloque said: PS : I saw what you did with the tags. I was just wondering if anyone is really looking at them :D Thank you, now I know ^ _ ^ 1
wilson99 Posted July 24, 2018 thank you again may i say for me your stories can never be long enough you made my day wow please never stop with them i am eager to look and read every word thank you ? 1
Crw0 Posted July 24, 2018 4 hours ago, wilson99 said: thank you again may i say for me your stories can never be long enough you made my day wow please never stop with them i am eager to look and read every word thank you ? Thank you very much for such kind words Wilson UwU I'm glad if you like it ^_^ 1
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