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Tammie/Luna: Troll Goal 3/4


ongwk733

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Heyo! Part 3!

This one's a bit longer than Part 1 and 2. In fact, it's about the length of both parts together!

If you haven't already, however, I strongly urge you to see the first 2 parts first!

Part 1

Part 2

 

Just so you know where the story is going!

 

Regarding dialogue, in the last part I got some feedback saying how the reading order can get confusing when the dialogue boxes fill up both sides of an image. I initially wanted to indent numbers on the dialogues to indicate the reading order, but also got feedback that that wouldn't look very immersive.

So I decided that, when the dialogue really gets too crowded, I will use a number indentation like 1this to indicate reading order, but besides that, all other pages will remain as per normal with no numbers. Outside of that, I will try my best in future to not overcrowd dialogue on single images!

 

And without further ado, part three~

I'll put it in a spoiler so it doesn't lag on those with weaker internets!

And of course, direct link here for those that have problems seeing the images here on LL

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I hope you guys enjoyed it! And look forward to part 4!

As a little bonus, here's the link to the sexy end card!: https://imgur.com/a/b4u02if for anyone who wants them on their desktop, or their phone(I salute you,if you do that)!

I've got a few versions; With Title, Without Title, Further Away, and Further Away with higher FOV so you guys can choose whichever one you want!

They're all in 2376x1486 resolution. Funny, I know. But I'm using a 16:10 monitor with 1680x1050 so... ?

Have a nice day ya'll! ?

 

 

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Things normally end up going Tammie's way!  I don't think Luna has anything to worry about.  Besides, they paid double for lingerie!  Nice Work!  

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11 hours ago, djregs said:

Things normally end up going Tammie's way!  I don't think Luna has anything to worry about.  Besides, they paid double for lingerie!  Nice Work!  

No doubt! The question is how traumatized Luna's gonna get coming out of this haha! ?

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1 hour ago, ongwk733 said:

No doubt! The question is how traumatized Luna's gonna get coming out of this haha! ?

 

Nothing a little counseling can't help!  OK... fine...a lot of counseling, self-medication, and years of mistrust.  

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Wonderful episode. Enjoyed reading it.

Let me say my personal opinion about your cute girls. They are so sweet and speak like teenagers which I like very much. You picked the language perfectly. :)

But, reading them swearing: "Fuck" somehow doesn't fit into their characters. I think that some substitute words that express swears would be more appropriate for them. :)

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I had a good laugh. Tammie is hilarious and manipulative. Poor Luna. The best scene I liked was when she gave her the piece of meet asking her to lure the troll. :)

Also, agree with Eva. ;)

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22 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Wonderful episode. Enjoyed reading it.

Let me say my personal opinion about your cute girls. They are so sweet and speak like teenagers which I like very much. You picked the language perfectly. :)

But, reading them swearing: "Fuck" somehow doesn't fit into their characters. I think that some substitute words that express swears would be more appropriate for them. :)

I may have gone overboard in expressing Luna's frustration at her situation haha!

Will have to get more creative in future!

My intention was to convey how upset Luna was at Tammie, with her being very direct in her language because we all know that there's no way Tammie's not gonna joke around like again(which you all already can tell from her other stories ?)

Unlike Tammie, I haven't fleshed out Luna's character as much yet, but she supposed to be the Yin to Tammie's Yang.

Where Tammie is always open with her feelings regardless of situation, Luna will keep to herself wherever it is appropriate to do so.

Luna's also more duty-minded, where she focuses on her studies and craft(sometimes to the point where she lacks in sleep, which I tried to express with her 'panda eyes') while Tammie is obviously very hedonistic.

 

I intend to show this in a story in the future, but I want to show how despite Luna's character as a polite and soft-spoken scholar because of her more noble status, Tammie's presence causes a bit of Luna's quiet facade to break away, simply because of how infuriating influential she can be. And that they're best friends because Luna just has to be blunt with Tammie, or she won't pay attention. Essentially Luna can vent herself at Tammie, and Tammie won't mind because she got what she wanted anyway. ?

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I can understand using "fuck" as her frustration expression and teens in our country swears a lot. What Eva and I wanted to say is that your girls are so cute and we adore them. For some reason very bad language doesn't suite them. That's how we see Tammie and Luna. Eva loves Luna a lot and Tammie captured my heart. I always chuckle when seeing her. :)

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And just when they thought things couldn't go wronger,

As it turns out, that troll has a donger.

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Malicia : « Poor Luna got all alone with only a steak of salmon to defend herself ! That's meany, Tammie, very meany ! :'( »

 

Hilarious entry, as usual. Funniest part was Luna discovering she's alone with the salmon steak. ^^

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3 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Poor Luna got all alone with only a steak of salmon to defend herself ! That's meany, Tammie, very meany ! :'( »

 

Hilarious entry, as usual. Funniest part was Luna discovering she's alone with the salmon steak. ^^

It's actually a Horker Steak haha!

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On 6/18/2018 at 7:15 PM, ongwk733 said:

I may have gone overboard in expressing Luna's frustration at her situation haha!

Will have to get more creative in future!

My intention was to convey how upset Luna was at Tammie, with her being very direct in her language because we all know that there's no way Tammie's not gonna joke around like again(which you all already can tell from her other stories ?)

Unlike Tammie, I haven't fleshed out Luna's character as much yet, but she supposed to be the Yin to Tammie's Yang.

Where Tammie is always open with her feelings regardless of situation, Luna will keep to herself wherever it is appropriate to do so.

Luna's also more duty-minded, where she focuses on her studies and craft(sometimes to the point where she lacks in sleep, which I tried to express with her 'panda eyes') while Tammie is obviously very hedonistic.

 

I intend to show this in a story in the future, but I want to show how despite Luna's character as a polite and soft-spoken scholar because of her more noble status, Tammie's presence causes a bit of Luna's quiet facade to break away, simply because of how infuriating influential she can be. And that they're best friends because Luna just has to be blunt with Tammie, or she won't pay attention. Essentially Luna can vent herself at Tammie, and Tammie won't mind because she got what she wanted anyway. ?

 

Yes, these two girls are totally opposite. Like my Ivy and me. In real life I'm more like Luna and my Ivy is more like Tammie. LOL. But, we love your girls very much. Can't wait to see the forth part. :)

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