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Gwynolda's story

Act I

Gwynolda's Daily life(6/)

Chapter 6

 

 

 

Yapi9cmv o

 

It's been a few days since she told me her purpose.

 

Ccpnt0pd o

 

We've been preparing to our departure to Old Hroldan

 

Maslpksb o

 

I spent these days focusing on my martial training and books.

 

Eu44ccyd o

 

My journey will begin tomorrow..

 

79gtqr7j o

 

I had to clear my head a bit, been years since I saw my Father..

 

I have many questions for him about my mother and family.

 

N9bcn5ko o

 

Of course at last, my knighthood, soon we will properly start investigating the temple and Hamal.

 

Khuvv7ou o

 

I wonder what we're gonna find, if there is anything outside her lack of willing to do her duties

 

Dsatbcsu o

 

I hope we can set the Temple to the right path..

 

Maybe we can set Hamal as well.

 

1vrnqoiz o

 

Hopefully we can avoid the worst.

 

Bedotdg3 o

 

Gwynolda!

 

Pju1lofz o

 

I finished the last preparations and packed our food.

 

Undhiso9 o

 

Should be enough for the travels, in old Hroldran we can get more supplies once we are there.

 

F11yofb4 o

 

You can put down that sword, you won't be need it.

 

Tg29tjxw o

 

Is everything alright? You've been quiet in the past days, focusing on martial training alone.

 

You should rest a little..

 

Tomorrow will be a long day and travel.

 

Zhibqizs o

 

I'm alright, Jeanne, just had to clear my head a bit before heading out.

 

Yylxtkv2 o

 

I want meet with my Father in Hroldan, I hope that's not an issue.

 

No, it is fine my dear.

 

24dq9ftc o

 

Come let's rest there, we have a few things to discuss.

 

8gi0rlpu o

 

Sure

 

94so09ht o

 

I feel before we head out, you need a know a few things as a knight

 

Sh1rp4sa o

 

What do you know about the Sybills of Lady Dibella and their role in the House of Dibella?

 

Zymfbkjv o

 

They are the leaders of the House of Lady Dibella?

 

B3pna3mr o

 

And said to be as beautiful as Lady Dibella herself.

 

Zntsbmku o

 

There was nothing else in the library? Did the temple say nothing about them?

 

Tcamhfuq o

 

Nothing as far as I can remember, Hamal banned many books and scrolls and forbade them.

 

Our library was almost empty.

 

Kxkpjfsa o

 

It seems we might have more concerns about the temple, outside what you told me.

 

Gltmo91x o

 

I fear, the Temple in Markarth may seek to erase any knowledge about the Sybills..

 

Fuek1jxo o

 

It seems we have to discuss about them. It is very important as a knight to know their importance.

 

Our Knight order serves the Sybills of Lady Dibella, our duty to protect them, as well as protect the faithful, and guide the lost ones to the right path.

 

And punish those who.. defile or go against our Lady.

 

Hebeg64m o

 

Are you ready to learn?

 

Always.

 

Good.

 

5jrtqut4 o

 

As you said, they are the leaders of the House of Lady Dibella.

 

P6nom1us o

 

Presenting the Will and Guidance of Lady Dibella.

 

Kezwg1ee o

 

They should have a Shrine in your temple right?

 

1kdquk6o o

 

Most Temples have it, even your should too.

 

Yes, I used to pray on those shrines as well..

 

Pleading.. to appear and replace Hamal's.. leadership.

 

You almost used the Shrine correctly then.

 

Did I?

 

Rfxocsaf o

 

Main purpose of the Shrine is to find the Sybill, pray and Lady Dibella guide us to her

 

In normal cases, all temples in the house, should prioritize to seek out the Sybill and send a knight to find her

 

Ee3iatz7 o

 

Why does Lady Dibella choose them to lead?

 

In normal case, this is a secret and only the priestess of the House and Knights know, but..

 

Bkqswfuc o

 

The Sybills of Lady Dibella, are Lady Dibella herself.

 

Cr8w1alo o

 

People know the Sybills as those who hear her voice and guided by her, the High Priestess, not necessary as her avatars in Nirm.

 

She pick a Mortal girl, each cycles

 

L7vmsiq4 o

 

Who ends up the most beautiful woman in all Tamriel, blessed by the goddess herself.

 

3xao4ibp o

 

Wielding the Divine power of Lady Dibella

 

Eispe56p o

 

And Lady Dibella.. present herself by them.

 

Dxsy3i45 o

 

Manifest, Speak her House and servants, to her worshipers and guide them in their life.

 

Hyjlv6sx o

 

As you understand now, they are the most important part of the House's worship and for all worshipers of Lady Dibella.

 

Lqohymfe o

 

Sl4jxlw0 o

 

Yvavq8ly o

 

Tsduzhyn o

 

We are the servants of Lady Dibella and by her extent, the servants of her Sybills.

 

Serving her is our duty.

 

Opqnjskh o

 

The Sybills are also politically important for the stability of the realms in the Empire.

 

Qi1dzo7r o

 

The House of Lady Dibella, is only allowed interfere or influence politics if Lady Dibella's Sybills wishes it

 

Up4vynmn o

 

They often guide the rulers, advise them.

 

Usi3gxgo o

 

And stop them committing atrocities and sins in the eyes of Lady Dibella.

 

0rwbz2bk o

 

They also rise up, along with their knights against any Evil and Threat, in order to protect the faithful of Nirm.

 

Bdqjarbg o

 

And we worship the Sybill, as she is our Lady's physical presence in Nirm.

 

Isn't worshipping her.. blasmephy?

 

She is our Lady's chosen, but.. Lady Dibella don't present by them all the time?

 

Worshipping the Shrine and statues of Lady Dibella is blasmphepy as well?


No.. I don't believe that, are you claiming the Sybills.. are like a shrine?

 

If you want say that way, yes. Just like making love with your lovers and practice her art.. is worshipping our Lady my dear.
 

Ijdkzhes o

 

They are our Lady's blessed avatar in the physical realms and her presence, thus worshipping them are the closest we can get to our Goddess.

 

Vmvae2k6 o

 

And we do our rituals through her, as she is one of, if not the most important part of the House's rituals.

 

Jf7kzroo o

 

O4ekjauu o

 

Wo6vmkwr o

 

Icterogw o

 

One of the most important rituals of our is

 

Pleasing her by the arts of our Lady.

 

Embracing her physical aspects.

 

Overwhelming her with our love for our Lady.

 

As you noticed, Priestess of Lady Dibella rarely marry or have relationship outside of the Temple.

 

All Priestess are brides of Lady Dibella's Sybills.

 

The most Devout ones at least.

 

L3bzuuvr o

 

Do you have any questions?

 

Are you one of the brides of the Sybill?

 

I'm single Gwynolda if this is the most important question.

 

My dear please let us finish the basics of your training, before moving forward with our relationship.

 

I..

 

Oixtaxkn o

 

If there's no more questions then about this.

 

In that case, allow me to move on to the history of the House of our Lady.

 

Bnbgnz9c o

 

And the worships of her Sybills.

 

I will use illusion magic to present it as an illustration for both of us

 

6ctoi5pg o

 

I assume Markarth worships Dibella in the official Imperial way, let's call it Modern Dibella worship.

 

I expect you to be aware of the origins right?

 

Cagj9ruv o

 

Ky63yuqc o

 

From what I could find in the books you gave me and the library in the Temple.

 

Today's ways originates from Cyrodiil. 

 

Lady Dibella originally was a goddess in the early societies of nords and nedes, before the Empire was founded.

 

Right?

 

That is correct.

 

Hl7jnjjr o

 

Les3czoy o

 

However, the current day of our Lady's worship originates from much more controversial beginnings.

 

From the Ayleids..

 

As many things for the imperial ways of life and for the Eight Divines. 

 

C3wbtaxb o

 

From the Ayleids?

 

Yes. Let me show you.

 

Kecc458l o

 

Kyjdvruh o

 

Qh3mlkgk o

 

Rogrm1bj o

 

Did they worshiped Lady Dibella?

 

I thought the elves don't worship her, outside of the Empire, by those time.. there wasn't even an empire.

 

Wr36o4dp o

 

 Were those slaves? Did they take Lady Dibella from them as a cruel joke?

No.

 

Lb8aq3fz o

 

Where did you found these sources?

 

From the Cyrodiil, Anvil, Temple of Lady Dibella.

 

This is almost heresy.. by the Eight..

 

Ajwyxuqe o

 

Ayleids were daedric worshippers.

 

B2ml6koo o

 

Decadent society.. fueled by cruelty.. and dark pleasures.

 

Soyo4cmr o

 

And slavers..

 

Fjvhajos o

 

Ruczt1vo o

 

1gksvudq o

 

They enslaved our ancestors, used them as toys.. for pleasure and twisted entertainment.

 

B32yiutt o

 

And their fall brought the birth of the Empire and freedom for humans.

 

Ilizkbvh o

 

I'm glad to see your historical knowledge on an almost extinct civilization is quite good.

 

However my dear, you missed a few details, and it seems..

 

N1ehlnmv o

 

The ayleids you saw with the nede priestesses, were the ones who joined to Saint-Alessia in her revolt.

 

Rest of the history has forgotten them, but our House didn't, for a simple reason.

 

Cxjqq5od o

 

She was a Sybill of Lady Dibella. 

 

Jea8zhbw o

 

And many of the allies converted to the Eight Divines, including lady Dibella.

 

U9lqscxs o

 

Wglfkks2 o

 

H5394fwf o

 

She, with her people along with the Nedes, set down the basics of the House of our Lady

 

Under the guidance of Lady Dibella herself.

 

 Many things you know about our Lady, her rituals and worship, come from her

 

Even the Knight order.

 

J7obain5 o

 

Of course the Ayleids are no longer around, they are extinct, but the knight order remembers the beginnings.

 

Like all Arts, they tell an emotion and story.

 

We preserved what we could in the name of our Lady.

 

F0gkh0pn o

 

We remember all of the Sybills.

 

Hksv3z1x o

 

Hekvurhm o

 

Urfzrbtl o

 

Nghsekok o

 

From the Humble beginnings of the nede tribes and their ancient rites and worship.

 

Wutpnr5z o

 

To the old Nordic ways and primitive ways.

 

Nqfmbbff o

 

Iq4296mn o

 

And their Sybills.

 

Dkhqnnjj o

 

To the Ayleids and their descendants.

 

0erjckkb o

 

Zzdpbqqy o

 

As well as the elven Sybills who value art and poetry above all.

 

Zx800cyw o

 

Outside protecting and serving the Sybills, being their sword.

 

Our other duty is to keep all Sybills of our lady remembered and recorded.

 

Ml3isv6y o

 

So you are here as well to record all Sybills from the Reach?

 

D3yvlwle o

 

That is correct.

 

From Saoirse, who we don't know anything, yet to the old forgotten Reachmen Sybills from the tribes.

 

Our order wishes to preserve their honor.

 

Ankcgyni o

 

What about Hammerfell?

 

They worship our Lady as well?

 

2f1zl93b o

 

Dsur7w52 o

 

Some parts of them, worship the Eight divines, including Dibella.

 

I never was in Hammerfell, but in the recordings, their Sybills usually contact with us.

 

Their way is no different than the one you know.

 

Xxf5lpuw o

 

My my, someone wanna visit Hammerfell one day?

 

Who knows maybe we do one day.

 

Xc8pndgt o

 

0e3mrzap o

 

You would look absolutely delightful in their Priestess's ways.

 

Uzmwvtbi o

 

I wonder, who knows, maybe you are our Lady's next Sybill.

 

Khwmpcyg o

 

Qfbvwsvt o

 

Nxn060we o

 

You are certainly blessed, and your heart on the right way.

 

7bniuxfz o

 

Maybe you hear her soon.

 

6i1h2xtt o

 

Should I leave you alone with her?

 

Stop teasing me..

 

(giggles) Fine fine.. 

 

Yc1gpe25 o

 

I should prepare for my night prayer, you should get ready for it as well.

 

 

Ce0gnnx4 o

 

Tomorrow we have a long day my dear.

 

Goodnight to you as well Jeanne.

 

Lyjzpsc0 o

 

If Lady Dibella had a Sybill..

 

it probably wouldn't be me

 

Maybe Jeanne? She is great..

 

Maybe someone like her.

 

L5tnmwtk o

 

V6f3tjov o

 

8vihnlea o

 

I would serve the Sybill just like how I serve my goddess and worship her.

 

Utpkuexx o

 

Starting from her feet.

 

Fdogryt6 o

 

Ndpdz0xp o

 

Hkrzrbnc o

 

Aydmmq0s o

 

To slowly going up.

 

5lwvjk9c o

 

Lf7xm1vq o

 

Then do the most important part.

 

Ulnwukq4 o

 

Zxifaa8p o

 

P4sdeqsk o

 

Bdj58aky o

 

Avzzq5k2 o

 

Giving all love to her, and please.

 

Kearzewc o

 

How cute..

 

I forgot to dispel the illusion magic..

 

B7pfun5r o

 

I should do it now, I feel like seeing things, I shouldn't.

 

X03pllbx o

 

Dispelled.

 

Cmuqogch o

 

Did you saw everything?

 

Ohh you noticed me?

 

Yes.

 

Yes, I saw the images, I didn't meant to.

 

R5hmbljh o

 

My apologies, I didn't mean to invade your privacy

 

4upmz156 o

 

It's alright, don't worry about it.

 

We are both devout Dibellan and it's not uncommon that priestess of Lady Dibella have a more intimitate way of worshipping or thinking about her goddess..

 

I feel a bit embrassed.

 

R1i4k9er o

 

You don't have to be embarassed.

 

Oushzegc o

 

Jeanne.. I would like to be alone for tonight.

 

Of course

 

Goodnight Gwynolda.

 

Hqtngpkz o

 

I have to dispel everything by myself next time..

 

Qru2qnad o

 

What an embarrassing way to end the day..

 

Gjlcisiw o

 

Tg4o84bp o

 

Zwabdcui o

 

Ukqi5ckd o

 

E5vcfafi o

 

Fd9lfn7w o

 

1owtmwc1 o

 

You called High priestess Hamal?

 

Yes Camelia..

 

A0vqalcu o

 

What is this High Priestess?

 

3wbqctoy o

 

The old Temple, in the past used for Saoirse.

 

Sybilla Saoirse?

 

Yes.

 

Wbzp6vd8 o

 

But she is in the past, she is not revelant.

 

Reason, I called you in, is because I have a task for you.

 

Wqigjgjb o

 

Gwynolda left the city..

 

I want you to hire a low life scum to drag her back..

 

Pick the worst..

 

Yes High Priestess..

 

37qkfwuh o

 

End

 

Author's notes

Spoiler

Ohhhh dear, this was a hefty mess to make ?

 

I decided to go in a bit more exotic direction to make the lore and background aspect more exciting, but admitelly I had more fun than intended, thus went a bit overboard with scenes and difficulty than planned.

 

I do enjoyed making this chapter.

 

Hope you all enjoying it and had fun reading it ?

 

ps. for storytelling reasons, I heretically modify some things in the lore to tell a story ?

 

Edited by Resdayn

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Abandoner

Abandoner

Posted

Absolutely wonderful!

 

Amazing scenes and imagery, so much work went into all of it. The eroticism was beautifully done throughout. The 5-way worship was spectacularly hot. And Gwynolda's own worship vision was so well done, even if it was embarrassing for her. 

 

A really visually varied and expansive chapter too, lore wise. It flowed perfectly and I can't wait to see what's next. ^^ even though the end was very foreboding <,< 

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wilson99

wilson99

Posted

thank you a cool chapter for me and lovely ladies again super .

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Resdayn

Resdayn

Posted

2 hours ago, Abandoner said:

Absolutely wonderful!

 

Amazing scenes and imagery, so much work went into all of it. The eroticism was beautifully done throughout. The 5-way worship was spectacularly hot. And Gwynolda's own worship vision was so well done, even if it was embarrassing for her. 

 

A really visually varied and expansive chapter too, lore wise. It flowed perfectly and I can't wait to see what's next. ^^ even though the end was very foreboding <,< 

 

Thank you ?

 

:classic_ph34r:This chapter definitely had the hardest scenes, I ever done,  that 5-some definitely, but I think one of the best erotic scene, I ever made, so I'm happy with it ?

 

I do enjoyed making both scene.

 

Tho I went bit overboard with the show instead of tell :classic_unsure:, I think in the end it worked out, making it flow perfectly and fit was my biggest challenge ?.

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes things gonna have next :classic_ph34r:?

 

2 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you a cool chapter for me and lovely ladies again super .

 

Thank you ?

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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VFB

VFB

Posted

A really good chapter with a lot of good stuff going on. You can see all the work you put in and how much fun you must have had being able to explore the world of the story. It adds a lot of nice backstory and world building which is fun to see.

 

Also a nice tease of future action at the end :3

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Jay-Omms

Jay-Omms

Posted (edited)

My my you really expanded with the screenshots of many npcs together in the form of different places on the map and timeline of Elder Scrolls lore. Very good improvement overall. Did you get to use Rigmor of Cyrodiil mod for screenshots? You did really well I almost couldn't believe it. :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup:

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Master Roshi: I have seen the LIGHT!

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Master Roshi: Look at mother looking so mean! Eeehh oooooO!

37QkFwuH_o.jpg

 

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TactusAuValiiRath

TactusAuValiiRath

Posted

This has been my favorite chapter so far. I really like sexy history lessons ? Besides, the scenery, the outfits and the overall mood of the illusion scenes is just chefs kiss. Loved seeing the work in progress and I'm so stocked after seeing the whole chapter.

 

ALSO I didn't expect Hamal to show up in the end!! I hope our girl is going to be okay...

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worik

worik

Posted

That's a very beautiful temple mod :classic_happy:

And did a mention, that I looove flowers in the hair? :classic_blush:

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Resdayn

Resdayn

Posted

10 hours ago, VFB said:

A really good chapter with a lot of good stuff going on. You can see all the work you put in and how much fun you must have had being able to explore the world of the story. It adds a lot of nice backstory and world building which is fun to see.

 

Also a nice tease of future action at the end :3

 

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it ?

 

 I did enjoying making it, and world building is important ?

 

:classic_unsure:Little tease might turn out something quite soon.

 

9 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

My my you really expanded with the screenshots of many npcs together in the form of different places on the map and timeline of Elder Scrolls lore. Very good improvement overall. Did you get to use Rigmor of Cyrodiil mod for screenshots? You did really well I almost couldn't believe it. :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup:

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Master Roshi: I have seen the LIGHT!

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dxSY3i45_o.jpg

Master Roshi: Look at mother looking so mean! Eeehh oooooO!

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Thank you ?

 

I feel, I went a bit overboard, but I wanted make sure my exposition is a bit more exciting ?.

 

It also helps give more characters to our girls, since it's mix of their imagination on the events.

 

No, I didn't, but it sound interesting to have access to Cyrodiil. ? I check it out sometimes.

 

As for mr Roshi, I'm glad he sees the light of Dibella ?

 

8 hours ago, EphraimTiHorny said:

This has been my favorite chapter so far. I really like sexy history lessons ? Besides, the scenery, the outfits and the overall mood of the illusion scenes is just chefs kiss. Loved seeing the work in progress and I'm so stocked after seeing the whole chapter.

 

ALSO I didn't expect Hamal to show up in the end!! I hope our girl is going to be okay...

 

I'm enjoyed you liked it ?, favorite chapter huh ?

 

I really had a lot fun making all those shots, even if they were incredibly hard and setting them up for the flow.

 

It seems she did, we might have a few turn of events in the next chapters :classic_ph34r:

 

3 hours ago, worik said:

That's a very beautiful temple mod :classic_happy:

And did a mention, that I looove flowers in the hair? :classic_blush:

 

?I like flowers in hair as well.

 

Mod is really add the missing parts of the temple ?

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Evaloves4

Evaloves4

Posted (edited)

> I agree on this one with Trilog (@Tirloque, what is the meaning of talking being naked if they aren't in sauna and had no /will not have sex?

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> Just joking :classic_smile:

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worik

worik

Posted

3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Mod is really add the missing parts of the temple ?

It's lovely :classic_happy:

 

3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

:classic_unsure:Little tease might turn out something quite soon.

:classic_ph34r: ?

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Resdayn

Resdayn

Posted

14 minutes ago, Evaloves4 said:

> I agree on this one with Trilog (@Tirloque, what is the meaning of talking being naked if they aren't in sauna and had no /will not have sex?

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> Just joking :classic_smile:

 

But we have 5some in the chapter and other sex, so you can't complain ?

 

14 minutes ago, worik said:

It's lovely :classic_happy:

 

 

I think one of my favorite place mod ^^, tho there is many good, as I try look for them.

 

14 minutes ago, worik said:

 

:classic_ph34r: ?

 

?

worik

worik

Posted

15 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

I think one of my favorite place mod ^^, tho there is many good, as I try look for them.

? Did I already ask which mod iit is? This one: https://www.nexusmods.com/skyrimspecialedition/mods/56371 ?

 

18 hours ago, Resdayn said:

:classic_ph34r:This chapter definitely had the hardest scenes, I ever done,  that 5-some definitely, but I think one of the best erotic scene, I ever made, so I'm happy with it ?

? :classic_smile:

16 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

But we have 5some in the chapter and other sex, so you can't complain ?

Eva is hard to satisfy. Maybe, you try a 6-some for Eva or you try to drift into Sanguine's style of sex.  :classic_tongue:

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Resdayn

Resdayn

Posted (edited)

20 minutes ago, worik said:

? Did I already ask which mod iit is? This one: https://www.nexusmods.com/skyrimspecialedition/mods/56371 ?

 

? :classic_smile:

Eva is hard to satisfy. Maybe, you try a 6-some for Eva or you try to drift into Sanguine's style of sex.  :classic_tongue:

 

I don't use jk, cause the lights are bit too dark, and not sure how to try fix it :classic_unsure:

Spoiler

It's the Dibellan bath house btw

 

:classic_ph34r: Maybe she will be happier once our knights, actually deal with heretics, Gwynolda has to finish her trainings first 

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worik

worik

Posted

44 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

:classic_ph34r: Maybe she will be happier once our knights, actually deal with heretics, Gwynolda has to finish her trainings first 

? I doubt that @Evaloves4 is interested into that many aspects of Gywn's training.

I guess she only cares about the lections: "How to pleasure my female trainer" ?

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Evaloves4

Evaloves4

Posted

6 minutes ago, worik said:

? I doubt that @Evaloves4 is interested into that many aspects of Gywn's training.

I guess she only cares about the lections: "How to pleasure my female trainer" ?

exactly GIF

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Tirloque

Tirloque

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Well, for an exposition chapter, that was quite the exposition ! I must say that your graphical skills are reaching a certain mastery in the composition area, you know how to setup scenery, actors and camera to get breathtaking shots. And so we went from the contrasting yet colored temple shots, to two more exotic ambiances, all of that for the pleasure of our viewing eyes ! The grammar and thus meaning of some sentences was a bit unclear however, but though that was sporadic, when being in doubt I could advice to double check on online translators (for example you paste your english sentence in Google translate so that it translates it back in your language). And it wasn't that eventful, though we got major added historical twists regarding Dibella's lore (the link with Ayleids in particular was as your Breton said certainly heretical ^^). Regardless, stunning visuals, and a plot that closes in on Gwynolda ! :D?

 

 

KhWmpCyg_o.jpg

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I'm not sure about what that Jeanne says uh. To me it's very obvious that they're very craving, as they're walking naked all the time.

                  But, they have no guy, no. ❌

                 And so they made up a story about the prettiest gal being the sybil, so that they could pee-pee kiss her all together. :classic_ph34r:

 

                 Anyway, I very understand why Gwynolda wanted to meet me so badly : she thought I was the sybil gal. :classic_sleepy: »

 

 

On 5/16/2023 at 3:40 PM, Evaloves4 said:

> I agree on this one with Trilog (@Tirloque, what is the meaning of talking being naked if they aren't in sauna and had no /will not have sex?

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Even so, I must confess that might've been the most charming sauna I was ever told about. :classic_biggrin:

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Evaloves4

Evaloves4

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4 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I'm not sure about what that Jeanne says uh. To me it's very obvious that they're very craving, as they're walking naked all the time.

                  But, they have no guy, no. ❌

                 And so they made up a story about the prettiest gal being the sybil, so that they could pee-pee kiss her all together. :classic_ph34r:

 

         

 

 

Emilia Clarke Laughing GIF Agree about excuses to do certain oral sex :classic_biggrin:

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Resdayn

Resdayn

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37 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Well, for an exposition chapter, that was quite the exposition ! I must say that your graphical skills are reaching a certain mastery in the composition area, you know how to setup scenery, actors and camera to get breathtaking shots. And so we went from the contrasting yet colored temple shots, to two more exotic ambiances, all of that for the pleasure of our viewing eyes ! The grammar and thus meaning of some sentences was a bit unclear however, but though that was sporadic, when being in doubt I could advice to double check on online translators (for example you paste your english sentence in Google translate so that it translates it back in your language). And it wasn't that eventful, though we got major added historical twists regarding Dibella's lore (the link with Ayleids in particular was as your Breton said certainly heretical ^^). Regardless, stunning visuals, and a plot that closes in on Gwynolda ! :D?

 

 

KhWmpCyg_o.jpg

 

Thank you ?

 

Admittedly this chapter as technically the hardest, it really took out a lot of me :classic_unsure:, I will take a small break before resuming my projects and distract with other things in skyrim, etc ?

 

I'm glad everyone enjoyed, my more exotic direction for the chapter ?, I thought making a good use for the show aspect, so we could see all the images of our cast.

 

I personally think, the shots of this chapter may one of my bests, visually and theme wise ??, and sexually, I did tried present ^^ the Dibella faith a bit more ^^ explicit.

 

I believe we had some events still, as you know while I can do action and horror, my works is less action intense ?, mostly due technical reasons.

 

:classic_ph34r:I slowly tap back to my old ways for darker vibes, as the end scene suggested the story slowly uncover it's plot.

 

I just take the slowburn approach and do everything, I plan ?

 

I asked a british friend to check my grammar here tho :classic_unsure:

 

37 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I'm not sure about what that Jeanne says uh. To me it's very obvious that they're very craving, as they're walking naked all the time.

                  But, they have no guy, no. ❌

                 And so they made up a story about the prettiest gal being the sybil, so that they could pee-pee kiss her all together. :classic_ph34r:

 

                 Anyway, I very understand why Gwynolda wanted to meet me so badly : she thought I was the sybil gal. :classic_sleepy: »

 

 

Even so, I must confess that might've been the most charming sauna I was ever told about. :classic_biggrin:

 

I don't think they need a guy?

 

Malicia, I believe Gwynolda never meet you or saw you :classic_ph34r:.

 

What Sauna? ?

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Tirloque

Tirloque

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39 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

I don't think they need a guy?

 

Malicia, I believe Gwynolda never meet you or saw you :classic_ph34r:.

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « You're very informed. But we wrote letters to each other, and that's very none of your concern, you see ? ? »

 

39 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

 

Thank you ?

 

Admittedly this chapter as technically the hardest, it really took out a lot of me :classic_unsure:, I will take a small break before resuming my projects and distract with other things in skyrim, etc ?

 

I'm glad everyone enjoyed, my more exotic direction for the chapter ?, I thought making a good use for the show aspect, so we could see all the images of our cast.

 

I personally think, the shots of this chapter may one of my bests, visually and theme wise ??, and sexually, I did tried present ^^ the Dibella faith a bit more ^^ explicit.

 

I believe we had some events still, as you know while I can do action and horror, my works is less action intense ?, mostly due technical reasons.

 

:classic_ph34r:I slowly tap back to my old ways for darker vibes, as the end scene suggested the story slowly uncover it's plot.

 

I just take the slowburn approach and do everything, I plan ?

 

I asked a british friend to check my grammar here tho :classic_unsure:

Let's take a few examples then. The way I see it those sentences are grammatically incorrect :

 

I expect you be aware of the origins right?

-> You are aware of the origins, right?

-> I can expect you to be aware of the origins, right?

-> You are aware of the origins I presume?


depending on the exact meaning you intended to, IMO.

 

However my dear, you missed a few details, and it seems..

-> However my dear, it seems you missed a few details...

 

Maybe there was a lot to correct and some mistakes were missed ? Or maybe your friend got distracted by the images halfway ? ^^

39 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

What Sauna? ?

 

Tsduzhyn o

 

It looks much better than the Winking Skeever, isn't it ? :classic_biggrin:

 

 

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Resdayn

Resdayn

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Let's take a few examples then. The way I see it those sentences are grammatically incorrect :

 

Maybe there was a lot to correct and some mistakes were missed ? Or maybe your friend got distracted by the images halfway ? ^^

 

 

There were no pictures.

 

She saw no issues on it and asked me about the meanings of sentences, so I take her word.  ?

 

In my experience the british are the most serious on their grammar, cause a lot of them spent great deal to correct everything I said to them gramatically. ?

 

Either way ?, I guess one can say the same thing in few different ways in the English language ?

 

However, the context is important, while those may correct as well, I don't think it suits Jeanne's tone for the scene ?

 

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The second example sentence continues in the other scene, it supposed to be this ? 

 

However my dear, you missed a few details, and it seems the ayleids you saw with the nede priestesses, were the ones who joined to Saint-Alessia in her revolt.

 

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

 

It looks so much better than the Winking Skeever, isn't it ? :classic_biggrin:

 

 

It's a temple ??, not a Sauna.

 

And winking Skeever don't have a bath part, I think ?

 

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « You're very informed. But we wrote letters to each other, and that's very none of your concern, you see ? ? »

 

 

I think those letters may not canon anymore ?, you may have to send them again.

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Tirloque

Tirloque

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47 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

 

There were no pictures.

 

She saw no issues on it and asked me about the meanings of sentences, so I take her word.  ?

 

In my experience the british are the most serious on their grammar, cause a lot of them spent great deal to correct everything I said to them gramatically. ?

Well I'm not the native english speaker here. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

47 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

It's a temple , not a Sauna.

 

And winking Skeever don't have a bath part, I think ?

 

 

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It's been here since so long I forgot it was a part of a mod (Northern Bathouses probably). My bad. :classic_biggrin:

47 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

I think those letters may not canon anymore ?, you may have to send them again.

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « You're telling me to send them again, so they can get very lost again, and so Gwynolda can burn down a whole city like Frankfort sausage again ? :classic_angry:

                  VERY NO, THANK YOU. 3Zcs.gif »

 

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Resdayn

Resdayn

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3 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Well I'm not the native english speaker here. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

 

? I appreciate the feedback and the help as always, cause I fixed a missing to from the first sentence, sometimes with this language :classic_unsure: things can sound better, than other ways of saying things, even if it the less better sounding still correct.

 

:classic_ph34r:I try to check everything alright before publish lately, that's why I ask help for grammar check.

 

5 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

tumblr_ot37czy7fy1vjeamqo3_1280.jpg

 

It's been here since so long I forgot it was a part of a mod (Northern Bathouses probably). My bad. :classic_biggrin:

 

 

It's a nice bathhouse mod tho, fancy one, but in vanilla we all know, nords only bath in rain ?

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Collygon

Collygon

Posted

Amazing!

 

The screenshots in this chapter are some of your best. They capture so much story just by themselves. The Dibellan lore and history was portrayed beautifully in text and imagery. The grammar mistakes were minor and didn't affect my understanding or enjoyment. I'm very excited for the next chapter!

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Resdayn

Resdayn

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7 hours ago, Collygon said:

Amazing!

 

The screenshots in this chapter are some of your best. They capture so much story just by themselves. The Dibellan lore and history was portrayed beautifully in text and imagery. The grammar mistakes were minor and didn't affect my understanding or enjoyment. I'm very excited for the next chapter!

 

Thank you ?

 

I'm glad you and others feel that way on the shots ?, they were.. quite hard and difficult.

 

I try make my picture also tell the events and story by themselves ?

 

:classic_ph34r:It seems we have a lot to unpack in the coming chapters.

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D3vilizeR

D3vilizeR

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Belegondolni sem merek, hogy mennyi munka lehetett ez a sok beállítás, de kiváló lett a végeredmény! Külön tetszik, ahogy érzékletesen illusztrálod a történetben elhangzottakat, és az erotika is igen érzékien jelenik meg, nincs az arcunkba tolva! Csak így tovább!

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