> Lot of nudity and no sex in Dibella's temple? It worries me, thou.

1 minute ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Lot of nudity and no sex in Dibella's temple? It worries me, thou.

? Sadly Gwynolda here is only getting punished instead of being allowed to take in those rituals.

Is "Mu Joint Fix" installed to fix the knees collision?

A very emotional episode

Another nice chapter ! Digging the new length again, it's good to have enough content to enjoy. The choice of using flashbacks (introduced by the nightmare) describing her punishments and daily life at the temple was also a clever one, as it allowed you to perform an ellipsis about uninteresting parts, and show only the significant moments. Great screens as usual btw, with the combination of some backgrounds with your deep yet colored setup being a pleasure to the eye. All that while providing us more character development about the roots of Gwynolda's revengeful fits, being only a consequence of the mistreatments she received. Nice entry ! 

« So when you're a Dibella artist, you get locked in a house, where you can either kiss other's pee-pees, or get whipped on the back.

                No wonder they've gotten crazy in the head, uh.  »

2 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Lot of nudity and no sex in Dibella's temple? It worries me, thou.

« I know you were only looking for the honey-honey parts. But I thought about you.

                 Here    l

                            v

                I hope you very feel better now.  »

39 minutes ago, =IceScream= said:

Is "Mu Joint Fix" installed to fix the knees collision?

Just highlights how painful it is

But you're right the knees do look like bendy straws gone wrong.

4 hours ago, =IceScream= said:

Is "Mu Joint Fix" installed to fix the knees collision?

No, I didn't even know this was a thing?

I do check it, thanks for suggestion and test it if actually works with poses

Tho a question does it work with unp?

3 hours ago, Darkpig said:

Just highlights how painful it is

 

But you're right the knees do look like bendy straws gone wrong.

?certainly highlights it

4 hours ago, worik said:

A very emotional episode

Yeah, it has to be done ^^, so this part was coming since the start

I'm glad you enjoyed it

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Another nice chapter ! Digging the new length again, it's good to have enough content to enjoy. The choice of using flashbacks (introduced by the nightmare) describing her punishments and daily life at the temple was also a clever one, as it allowed you to perform an ellipsis about uninteresting parts, and show only the significant moments. Great screens as usual btw, with the combination of some backgrounds with your deep yet colored setup being a pleasure to the eye. All that while providing us more character development about the roots of Gwynolda's revengeful fits, being only a consequence of the mistreatments she received. Nice entry ! 

 

 

Thank you ?

I do admit, this chapter was lot lot longer than intended, content wise, had two story part on going, past vs preset.

Original idea was to showcase the more bad side of her life in the temple, continuing or showing the things she described in chapter 2, so the idea what was introduced get the show part, instead of tell.

I also decided to do a lot more show, instead of tell, even if sometimes we get more pictures than text ?

Uninteresting parts, depends and also a bit subjective what is interesting for who ?, but chapter itself focused on the negativity of our current antagonist.

Unless you mean the preset? ? In that case those part meant to showcase a contrast of things and showcase Jeanne's rather soft and friendly treatment toward Gwynolda.

Either way, we see as much I feel fit for the chapter's point, so if we only saw a certain portion, there is a reason, I do not skip things ?

I felt it's been a few chapter, so maybe time to check Gwynolda's background more and motivation ?

Having a little bit knowledge of photography do payed off then ?, but I see you picked the Temple's shot as favorite here.

This chapter was quite visually strong ^^ as I have a lot favorite here.

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

 

« So when you're a Dibella artist, you get locked in a house, where you can either kiss other's pee-pees, or get whipped on the back.

                No wonder they've gotten crazy in the head, uh.  »

 

Normally you are not locked anywhere, Gwynolda got punished and locked up for not following, whatever agenda the current leadership seeks.

It's very sweet and wholesome of Jeanne at the end which counteracts the quite sad and emotional backstory for Gwyn that we have more details of.

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Another nice chapter ! Digging the new length again, it's good to have enough content to enjoy. The choice of using flashbacks (introduced by the nightmare) describing her punishments and daily life at the temple was also a clever one, as it allowed you to perform an ellipsis about uninteresting parts, and show only the significant moments. Great screens as usual btw, with the combination of some backgrounds with your deep yet colored setup being a pleasure to the eye. All that while providing us more character development about the roots of Gwynolda's revengeful fits, being only a consequence of the mistreatments she received. Nice entry ! 

 

 

« So when you're a Dibella artist, you get locked in a house, where you can either kiss other's pee-pees, or get whipped on the back.

                No wonder they've gotten crazy in the head, uh.  »

 

 

« I know you were only looking for the honey-honey parts. But I thought about you.

                 Here    l

                            v

 

 

                I hope you very feel better now.  »

 

> Well Mr. Trilog, thank you for very hot video of fish kissing You see, it only proves that every living creature in the world (even Skyrim) needs and love sex. Why Malicija doesn't like it, maybe Resdayn have answer

That flashback was brutal!! It's so interesting to see the harsh reality of the sisterhood, the whipping scenes with the wounds and the Dibellan bath shots are so well done ? But I know you've always been good with photography.

Jeanne letting Gwynolda be in the end is... interesting ? Can't wait for more of my favorite girls

8 hours ago, VFB said:

It's very sweet and wholesome of Jeanne at the end which counteracts the quite sad and emotional backstory for Gwyn that we have more details of.

?Ohh someone noticed it

I'm glad you enjoyed it ?

6 hours ago, EphraimTiHorny said:

That flashback was brutal!! It's so interesting to see the harsh reality of the sisterhood, the whipping scenes with the wounds and the Dibellan bath shots are so well done ? But I know you've always been good with photography.

 

Jeanne letting Gwynolda be in the end is... interesting ? Can't wait for more of my favorite girls

Thank you ?, I'm glad you liked it.

Yeah, my intention was to showcase, despite everything the sisterhood is still a religious, zealous organisation with flaws.. as the leadership changing ?

Whipping scene was really hard ?, and other temple shots are my favorites from the chapter ^^.

? It is certainly interesting, I'm glad people noticing it.

Wow, the Dibellan temple is intense. I've never seen that side of the temple exposed before, it really paints them in an entirely different light. I hope Gwynolda gets her chance at redemption. Beautiful screenshots as well!! The bath scenes look incredible.

53 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Wow, the Dibellan temple is intense. I've never seen that side of the temple exposed before, it really paints them in an entirely different light. I hope Gwynolda gets her chance at redemption. Beautiful screenshots as well!! The bath scenes look incredible.

Thank you ?

I'm glad things went as I intended for the chapter, yes it supposed to be pretty intense as any religious organisation, tho this time their motivation is more complicated ?, they lack a sybill after all.

Also Gwynolda technicly.. didn't done anything to need a redemption ?

Bath scenes my favorite too, it is really a lovely place and very atmospheric part of the temple

On 3/18/2023 at 3:19 PM, =IceScream= said:

Is "Mu Joint Fix" installed to fix the knees collision?

On 3/18/2023 at 4:04 PM, Darkpig said:

Just highlights how painful it is

 

But you're right the knees do look like bendy straws gone wrong.

 It don't really.. fixed it, after my testing I concluded.. the fix itself makes things look even worser ?, since her knees dissapeared or bended in worser way.

I might give another go for it later, but I don't know.

I think it's probably the pose being the issue here, since some Halo/pinup poses are old as skyrim modding itself

Edit: I can try see what I can do with niopa, in theory that should be fine and work ?, I guess for future chapters.

On 3/18/2023 at 5:57 PM, Resdayn said:

Tho a question does it work with unp?

.dll file, should work with any type of bodies. There are some complaints (personally I have), but still better than sharp knees

1 minute ago, =IceScream= said:

.dll file, should work with any type of bodies. There are some complaints (personally I have), but still better than sharp knees

 

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Sadly my results weren't like this.

I had similar results with various poses ?, I feel leaving default might be better.. it's bit closer to your fixed version.

I don't remember seeing that sharp knees in my game.

I thought you meant the kneeling poses in the temple.

16 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

 

Sadly my results weren't like this.

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I had similar results with various poses ?, I feel leaving default might be better.. it's bit closer to your fixed version.

 

I don't remember seeing that sharp knees in my game.

 

I thought you meant the kneeling poses in the temple.

8 minutes ago, =IceScream= said:

 

 

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it's just that some of the images confused me a little, that's why I asked, nothing more. And no, temple scenes dont show that kind of problem

 

 

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Ahh first person ones, yeah they were a bit crocked.. angle, fov was also altered to try fit the view.. yeah can look worser than it is

I admit, I thought you meant something else ?

Still thanks, I tried the fix, tho it's mixed for me,  I see if I can do something with niopa for future shots where it's weirder. ?

Quite a lot for me to catch up on and let's just ignore how late this comment it

As many readers mentioned before, this was quite the brutal chapter, but I also find it very important in terms of explaining Gwynolda's character and personality development.  It is clear that the temple is no longer following Dibella's tenets and it is interesting to note that mother Hamal really enjoys her full authority there. In a way she almost places herself on the same level as the goddess by setting up her own rules (who can receive the blessing and who cannot, how the sisters are punished for disobedience and so on). 

I am going to guess these events and the unjust punishment were some of the first seeds of hatred that were planted into our protagonist, making her want to seek vengeance and justice for herself (and probably for all the poor people that couldn't receive healing and blessing because of temple's policies).

This particular screenshot is rather interesting as, if I am not mistaken, that's a fire spell that Gwyn is holding when talking about her determination to become the knight of the Lily? If so, then that's a really big contrast with her previous healing spell scene and shows the change in her mental state.
 

Screenshots are as beautiful as ever and they manage to convey the atmosphere perfectly.

Chapter length is very enjoyable as well (we can never have to much Gwynolda, after all).

Wonderful work, Res! ?

Gwynolda got the Belmont treatment ?

Something tells me that would be more of a crushed skull kind of whip than a slash mark kind of whip ?

18 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Gwynolda got the Belmont treatment ?

 

Something tells me that would be more of a crushed skull kind of whip than a slash mark kind of whip ?

?Jeez, I spit out of my drink, when I saw this.

?Now explanation wise, we already had the idea of alteration magic changing the material, weight and power of the items in the previous chapter.

So let's assume Hamal did it too ?

5 hours ago, Resdayn said:

So let's assume Hamal did it too ?

?applying and mastering the alteration school in such a devious way.... that could become a complete chapter itself ?

1 hour ago, worik said:

?applying and mastering the alteration school in such a devious way.... that could become a complete chapter itself ?

Gwynolda do that in a way, from 3rd chapter