Slowly turning to the story side I see. You played well over that « forbidden » nobility vs servant setting, enough to get the right atmosphere at least. And kudos for the effort of integrating your subtitles (and onomatopoeia) directly in the image. Now once the act is engaged the story aspect falls off a bit, yet recovers in the end, after a quite developped sensual sequence. Technically speaking, I would advice going for well compressed jpegs instead of pngs, so that you can post full size images. That would avoid both lessening the onscreen presence, and getting unintended double rows of images (which completely messes up the reading order).

It would end up looking like this :

More info on the storytellers tutorials if you want to. Anyway, nice share.

EDIT : if you wish to avoid bumping your entry when editing it, you can do so by unticking the "Publish now" checkbox, before clicking on the "save changes" button. ?

Great stuff!
Hope to see more story content like this.

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Yeah, that's a great stuff! And great technical implementation! 

I'll definitely ll wait for continuation ^_^

This is cool! I can only imagine the amount of work needed for the party scenes with that many NPCs. I especially like the editing for the text, motion blur effects, and I see you might've touched up the Countess's mouth to fit the blowjob perfectly too. Great work!

That was so Exquisite

Making a story with nobles in it can be such a blast. I could use a bottle of some of that 3E 420 vintage myself.

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Oh what's this ah.... Boner Chapter? ?

Bonus chapter was great! Thank you!

On 9/12/2022 at 11:47 AM, Tirloque said:

Slowly turning to the story side I see. You played well over that « forbidden » nobility vs servant setting, enough to get the right atmosphere at least. And kudos for the effort of integrating your subtitles (and onomatopoeia) directly in the image. Now once the act is engaged the story aspect falls off a bit, yet recovers in the end, after a quite developped sensual sequence. Technically speaking, I would advice going for well compressed jpegs instead of pngs, so that you can post full size images. That would avoid both lessening the onscreen presence, and getting unintended double rows of images (which completely messes up the reading order).

 

It would end up looking like this :

 

 

 

 

More info on the storytellers tutorials if you want to. Anyway, nice share.

EDIT : if you wish to avoid bumping your entry when editing it, you can do so by unticking the "Publish now" checkbox, before clicking on the "save changes" button. ?

Thanks for the advice! I really appreciate any feedback I can get, especially when it's technical stuff I didn't know about.

Speaking of which, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by posting full size images. Are you talking about resolution or aspect ratio?

On 9/13/2022 at 7:21 AM, Rattlesnark said:

This is cool! I can only imagine the amount of work needed for the party scenes with that many NPCs. I especially like the editing for the text, motion blur effects, and I see you might've touched up the Countess's mouth to fit the blowjob perfectly too. Great work!

Yeah, that entire sequence destroyed my wrist(from typing commands). Editing those effects was pretty damn fun as well. I'm pretty happy with the effect on the countess's mouth, honestly the only way to pull off a convincing SUCC in skyrim. At least until someone makes an HDT mouth mod.

On 9/13/2022 at 7:00 AM, Crw said:

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Yeah, that's a great stuff! And great technical implementation! 

I'll definitely ll wait for continuation ^_^

We'll see. I have something planned for Spooktober!?

the Bonus chapter was damn funny ? 

And hot ?

3 hours ago, SeirneSlab said:

Thanks for the advice! I really appreciate any feedback I can get, especially when it's technical stuff I didn't know about.

 

Speaking of which, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by posting full size images. Are you talking about resolution or aspect ratio?

Not exactly, I'm talking about the forum engine not resizing your images to something smaller than they are. You can still click them one by one to get a larger display, but having them match to the width of your browser seems better to me (and is done using the bbcode, more info in the part III of the Storytellers' tutorial).