Oh Nice Work 

Interesting work indeed. First your ENB and textures make your Skyrim-Witcher continent world to have quite the contrasted and colored visual identity. Nice special effects as well. Second, you clearly worked upon your layout to go for something more original than the usual, better filling the screen ; and the integrated subtitles are a commendable effort as well.

Now, your reading order seems off.

- Your layouts incites the reader to read each column from top to bottom, before going for the second column and the next page afterwards. The problem being here that there is nothing to signal when a page ends, so it's up to the reader to guess when he went too far below (and is already on the next page) and should go for the second column instead. If you want to stay on that reading order, i would advise to separate each page from each other.

- If you wish to avoid any visual break between your boards (no lines, no space), then you should opt for the classical occidental comics reading order, which is by rows (left to right, and then top to bottom).

So :

           ❌                but     ✔️      

Anyway, a hot reading moment, with even some combat action, and some humor to go on the top of that. So pleasant read overall !

« I wanna say, that gal is very lucky. In my missions, the guys aren't that interested in me, and they haven't got pee-pees that big.

                  I didn't get any boobs surgery though. »

Man you're good at this, 10/10 stuff.