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Chapter 23


renferal

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Time to start acting like a Captain. You'd be forgiven amongst all the celebrations that she still has a job to do.

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Damn, that dichotomy between the surviving slaves' fates punches pretty hard. Pretty clear how twisted Sirrae is at this point.
One detail, comparing this chapter to the previous one: The pink text bleeds over from fantasy to reality in the previous chapter but here there's a hard cut. I can't imagine it means anything but I'm pointing it out in case that aspect was forgotten.

Keep em coming.

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pretty much only visit the site to see if renferal posted today lol

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Damn good stuff!

I don't know it its a slave mark, psychological trauma or both, but I do love how you showed that. 

Sirrae changed pretty strong from the beginning of her story, and I love how you showing a "broken" side of her.

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