Oh oh, I must say what I thought started like a predictable ensnaring ended up in a completely unexpected way ! And by there putting more emphasis on the story itself. I would recommend using caution about the bubbles placement though : the correct US/EU reading order is left to right, top to bottom. So if you place one top left, then one mid right, and another one bottom left, the reader might be confused in trying to guess which one is the second to be read.

Compliments on the outfits, models and crispy graphics, as usual. 🙂