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Nice implementation of the comic bubbles to turn this into some kind of story. It feels kinda short however, but as long as the humor/punchlines are there (and you concluded on that ^^), some comic strips did successfully adopt that format. I would advice adjusting a bit more the position of the bubbles though, (closer to the talker's mouth) on the second shot it's closer to the listener than the talker. Nice read ! 🙂

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Hah! Thats good!
The idea of using a third-party drawing to detail what was happening also crossed my mind, but I was afraid that it would be a knock out of immersion. Guided by your experience, I see that it looks good.
And yes, a separate plus for bestial content.

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Thanks ! 

Yep, I lack experience at comic language, and for the second panel, I didn't want to hide the character's body, I probably should have moved the bubble's tail in that one.

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