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A Powerful Admirer


hellonow

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Hey everyone!

 

Finally we arrive at the last fully completed Mai story - detailing what happened when the Jarl of Whiterun decided to thank Mai for her service to the city! There's some pretty heated scenes in this one, so be extra careful! I don't want to be responsible for corrupting your innocent minds!

 

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So now this blog is pretty much bang up to date as far as finished Mai stories are concerned. I'd love to try and get back into Skyrim and start creating some new adventures for her - and also maybe finish off some older ones too. Let me know if you have any suggestions - and thanks once again for all your great support :heart:

 

 

 

 

A Powerful Admirer

 

 

 

Part 1

 

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Dragonsreach. Early afternoon...

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Mai: "Well....I'm here! Hmmm, I hope I'm not too early - wouldn't want to leave a bad impression on my first meeting with a Jarl! I wonder why the Jarl wants to see me anyway?!"

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Mai: "I guess I'll find out very soon. This looks like the Jarl's Housecarl. Okay girl, remember - don't be nervous! You've fought vampires and bandits, you'll survive a meeting with the Jarl!"

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Irileth: "Welcome to Dragonsreach, Mai of the Companions!"

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Irileth: "My name is Irileth, Housecarl to Jarl Balgruuf the Greater. I'm so glad you could make it here at such short notice!"

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Mai: "Nice to meet you, Irileth. I was so excited when I received the invitation from the Jarl himself - how could I refuse!"

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Irileth: "Indeed. Ever since Jarl Balgruuf learned of how you stopped that vampire from reaching him, he's been looking for an opportunity to show his thanks personally. He's quite smitten with you!"

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Mai: "Oh that was nothing really......and I had help too....."

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Irileth: "Hmmm, if you don't mind me saying so you seem to be slighty....well....under-dressed! There are several gowns we could provide you with if you'd like to see them?"

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Mai: "Oh....um....this is kinda what I wear! I hope it's okay.....?"

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Irileth: "Really?! WOW! I'm sure the Jarl won't mind one bit - as long as you are okay with him gazing at your naked body! Anyway, if you'd care to follow me - the Jarl is waiting!"

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Irileth: "So, is this your first visit to Dragonsreach, young lady?"

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Mai: "Pretty much. I gotta say, this place is amazing! The Jarl sure knows how to live..."

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Mai: "I gotta admit - i'm really nervous! Do you know what the Jarl will say? Or what I should do? I don't want to make any mistakes or cause any offence!"

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Irileth: "Hmmm, well I probably shouldn't be telling you this....but I overheard the Jarl talking about granting you some kind of title. If you ask me, I think he's going to make you a Thane!"

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Irileth: "Anyway, the Jarl can tell you himself. Don't worry, girl. You'll be fine!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Well, well, well - so this is the young lady who saved my life! Don't be shy - step up and let me have a closer look at you, Mai of the Companions!"

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Mai: -gulp- "It's an honor to meet you in person your Jarlness.....I mean....Sir Balgruuf......I mean......JARL Balgruuf.........sir!

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Jarl Balgruuf: "What a charming girl. And the reports were true - completely naked! Well now Mai, I'm so very glad you could come today. Because I have something very, VERY, special in mind for you, my dear......"

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To be continued......

 

 

 

 

Part 2

 

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Mai: "Oh! You have something 'special' for me?! That's really kind, your Jarlness. But y'know...I kinda had help with the whole vampire-stopping thing..."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Charming AND modest, I see. But I will not be deterred my lovely."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Oh you'll be rewarded alright. I mean just look at you! Hmmmm, that beautiful body... Those long luscious legs....."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "....That enticing vagina......Those suckable nipples...."

Mai: "Um........"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Yes, you definitely deserve something special. And as such, it is my pleasure to award you the title.......'Mistress of Whiterun'!"

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Mai: "I'm sorry - 'Mistress of Whiterun'?! I'm not really familiar with that particular title, sir."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "That's probably because I made it up just for you! Allow me to explain: as 'Mistress of Whiterun' you will be responsible for sexually pleasuring the high-ranking officials of Dragonsreach! Naturally, this includes me. To this end I hereby make it Whiterun law that you are to be fucked at least five times per day, and we will provide you with all the semen that can possibly fit inside that little body of yours!"

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Mai: "WHAT?! Are you joking?!"

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Irileth: "BY THE DIVINES!"

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Hrongar/Proventus Avenicci: "JARL?!"

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Mai: "Um....your royal jarlness....that's a really amazing gift and all....but I'm not sure I'm really the best fit for such a......responsible role!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Nonsense! You're a perfect fit, my dear. I can't think of anyone else I'd rather have sex with over and over again. Am I not right, Proventus?"

Proventus: "Oh......eh.......of course you're right, sir! She'll be perfect!"

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Mai: "Um.....Irileth......could you maybe help me? Please?!"

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Irileth: "Mai....I had no idea that THIS was the Jarl's plan. I...I'm sorry. He's the Jarl! There's not much I can do...."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Now then, as it's officially Whiterun law to have sex with you, I guess we better get started! Hrongar, Proventus - let's show this young lady our appreciation for all her hard work protecting the city! To my private chambers, gentlemen!"

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Mai: "Jarl Balgruuf.....sir.......you really don't want to have sex with me! I....um.....I have terrible stamina! And....I'm really not very experienced! Please!"

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Irileth: "Farengar, please tell me you are seeing this too?!"

Farengar: "Oh I'm seeing it, Irileth. I'm seeing it....."

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To be continued....

 

 

 

Part 3

 

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Now, my dear. If you'll be so kind as to follow us. Pure pleasure awaits - I guarantee it!"

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Mai: "Irileth, please! You've got to do something!"

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Irileth: "This feels all wrong, Farengar. I know he's the Jarl, and I'm sworn to obey and support him..."

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Irileth: "...but can I really just stand here and do nothing as they have their wicked way with that poor young lady?"

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Farengar: "I know how you feel, but calm yourself for just a moment. Follow me - there's something I think you should see..."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Welcome to my humble chambers, Mai. I'd like to introduce you to my bed. You and it are going to get to know each other very well!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "As Mistress of Whiterun, you will be free to roam about Dragonsreach. However this room, or more specifically this bed, is going to be your new home!"

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Mai: "Okay, guys, just a second. I'm soooooooo so honored that you have decided to grant me this amazing title. Really! But I don't think I can accept it...."

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Mai: "You see, I'm actually a highly-trained warrior and a member of the Companions. If I don't return to assist them right away, there's no telling what horrors may befall the city of Whiterun!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "The Companions? HA! I think you'll find yourself much better off here, my darling. The only thing those incompetent mead-swilling bear-botherers are good for is keeping half the city awake thanks to their bizarre midnight howling sessions!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Now be a good girl...and take a load off!"

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Mai: "Oh no.......this is getting worse by the second!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Alright gentlemen, let's show this lucky lady a good time - Dragonsreach style!"

Hrongar: "Sounds good to me!"

Proventus: "A most excellent idea, Jarl!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Just relax, Mai. There's nothing to worry about. We'll be gentle.......at first!"

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Mai: "Oh, why me?! There's gotta be a way out of this. But I can't fight them - it's the Jarl and his top advisers. Think, Mai, think!"

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Proventus: "Here you are, little girl. I've got something for you, don't be shy!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "That's it, honey. Keep your eyes on Proventus..."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "I've waited so very long for this opportunity. And in the end it was all too easy!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "CAUGHT YOU!"

Mai: "By the divines! Jarl....please!!!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Now just lie down, girl. Get comfortable. Because I intend to savor every last moment of this!"

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To be continued.....

 

 

 

 

Part 4

 

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Irileth: "I can't believe we just let them take that poor girl, Farengar. I feel responsible for her..."

Farengar: "Come here, Irileth. Look at this!"

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Irileth: "What is it? What are you reading?!"

Farengar: "The Jarl just began talking about that girl Mai a few days ago. Ever since then his behaviour has been VERY unusual. It reminded me of something I read once about Daedric Lords. If I could just find it.....yes, here it is......"

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Farengar: "Oh no! This can't be right.... Irileth - we've got to rescue that girl immediately!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Don't just stand there, gentleman. I'm looking after her rear - make yourselves useful and keep her occupied up front!"

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Hrongar: "Heh heh....sounds good to me! Here, little girl. We've got something nice and juicy for you to suck on!"

Mai: "Please....guys.....can't we talk about this?!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Talk is so boring, Mai. I much prefer action!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Hmmmm, you have NO IDEA how long I've waited to get you into this position, girl. To feel myself pushing against the lips of your vagina....."

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Jarl Balgruuf: "...and then slowly forcing them open as I start to slide inside you!"

Mai: "UUUGH......OOOOH GODS!!!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Proventus, Hrongar - if this girl's beautiful face isn't dripping with cum within the next 60 seconds, you'll both be spending the rest of your lives in Whiterun's dungeon!"

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Proventus: "Better open wide, girl. Here it comes!"

Mai: "I can't believe this is happening! It's like my encounter with the Bandit, Talon, all over again!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Ha! Talon was a stupid amateur. He deserved what you dished out to him. I have to admit...I quite enjoyed watching you making him suffer!"

Mai: "Ugh.......hang on a second....."

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Mai: "....how could the Jarl of Whiterun have possibly watched that?! You weren't there!"

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Irileth: "Because that's NOT the Jarl of Whiterun, Mai! It's an impostor!"

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Hrongar: "Eh....Irileth? Farengar? What in Oblivion are you two doing here?!"

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Mai: "Irileth! Thank goodness you came! Please, HELP ME!!!"

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Irileth: "Unhand that girl this instant! That's an order!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "How DARE you barge into my private chambers and order me around! I am the Jarl of Whiterun!"

Mai: "Ow, my hair!"

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Irileth: "You can give up the act now. We know you are not the Jarl. Mai, that man is not real - he's just a projection!"

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Mai: "UGH......What do you mean, not real?! I can feel him tugging on my hair and.....UUUUUGH.....pushing inside me!!!"

Jarl Balgruuf: "Don't listen to these troublemakers, Mai. They are clearly insane!"

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Farengar: "Mai, the sensations you are feeling are also not real. They are being projected into your mind by someone extremely power.......The Daedric Prince, SANGUINE!"

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Mai: "DAEDRIC PRINCE?!"

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Jarl Balgruuf: "Hmmmm....I'm impressed. I guess I know now why the Jarl keeps you two around. Note to self: next time, remember to put the Housecarl and Court Wizard to death!"

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Proventus: "Eh....Daedric Prince Sanguine?! Did you know that he wa----"

Hrongar: "Of course not, you idiot! Now just follow my lead before we get into trouble..."

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Hrongar: "Thank you for saving us, Farengar and Irileth. Sanguine was.....um......controlling our minds! Yes, that's it....he was controlling our minds!"

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Jarl Balgruuf Projection: "Please forgive me for tricking you, darling. Now...where were we...?"

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Jarl Balgruuf Projection: "Ah yes! Just relax while I push this cock deeper inside of you!"

Mai: "OOOOOH......OOOH GODS! I CAN FEEL IT!!!"

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To be concluded......

 

 

 

 

Part 5

 

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Irileth: "Not so fast, Impostor! You're going to release that girl immediately! Farengar....."

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Farengar: "You heard her, Sanguine. Release Mai from your magical grip - or we'll destroy your projection ourselves!"

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Jarl Balgruuf Projection: "Damn you, wizard! I was SO close! Fine....you want me to reveal myself? So be it...."

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Mai: "What the......?! You were right - he wasn't real! But then....where is Sanguine?!"

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Sanguine: "I'm right here, my pretty. And might I add that it's a pleasure to finally meet you in person. This is quite the big moment for me!"

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Irileth: "You vile fiend! What have you done with the real Jarl Balgruuf?! If you've hurt him......"

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Sanguine: "Relax, Housecarl. The Jarl is quite unharmed. You can find him in the stables outside the city. He might not remember who he is though....but that will come back to him in time!"

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Mai: "And what about me, you twisted freak?!"

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Mai: "Why was I chosen to be dragged up here and tormented?! Or was I just in the wrong place at the wrong time?!"

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Sanguine: "Far from it, my dear. Though I guess I do owe you an explanation. There was nothing random about any of this, Mai. You see.....you are my chosen one!"

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Sanguine: "I have watched you for years, Mai. I have studied you....obsessed over you! After what seems like an eternity of searching - I have finally found my Princess, and it is you!"

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Mai: "No.......NO! I don't want to be your Princess..."

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Sanguine: "Ha ha - cute! What you want is irrelevant. I have made my decision. From this day forth, you will be the subject of my lust and hedonism! The focus of my sex and debauchery! I will steer your fate - and it is a destiny drenched in semen!!!

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Mai: "Whatever you say, monster. But maybe you don't know me as well as you thought. Because the next time I see you I'm going to kick your ass! "

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Sanguine: "Playing hard to get, eh? You're turning me on already! But alas it seems I've outstayed my welcome in this place....time to go."

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Sanguine: "I'll see you very soon, Mai. And this time there'll be no projections....I want to fuck you myself! And hey, maybe invite your sister - I'm sure she'd love a threesome!"

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Mai: "Wait.....what did you just say? I have a sister?!"

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Sanguine: "Oooops! Have I said too much?! So long, losers of Whiterun!"

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Irileth: "Are you okay, Mai? It's not everyday you get to meet a Daedric Prince! It seems you have a powerful admirer..."

Mai: "He mentioned....my sister......? Oh....I'm fine Irileth. Thanks for saving me in the nick of time! I guess you guys better go find the Jarl. As for me....."

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Mai: "I've just got one more thing to attend to here......"

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Proventus: "Eh....why is is she looking at us like that, Hrongar?"

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Mai: "Thanks for trying to help me, you useless slimeballs!!!"

Proventus: "AAARRGHHH......"

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Farengar: "Should we stop her?"

Irileth: "Eventually, Farengar........"

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Irileth: ".............eventually."

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The END!

 

 

 

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How on earth did you make it look like he was vanishing into the wall like that!? I must have missed this set while I took a break from Skyrim

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Brilliant. I love your idea of placing imposer into the story. To bad that there wasn't a group sex ;). Poor guys got beaten for "nothing", - hahahhaa

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Guest Mogie56

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I'm glad you put this up here, I remember reading it long ago but it is another one of your classic stories that can be read over and over. which reminds me I have to try and find me Lucy Character again. :)

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Nice story as always! At first i was very afraid about her (honestly, i always feel really sorry for her, when her pure uncovered beauty attracts various perverted troubles to her), but the last images (where she kicked them two) makes me laugh very loudly :))). And i like that o_O expression on Farengar's face when he reads the book - brilliant emotion. Also i think i can guess who are her sister, but i will wait the next stories - this will be very interesting when they will meet.

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Constantly in awe of your amazing stories and photos. So glad Mai is safe, although I never really doubted she'd come through in the end. She's so awesome, and so damn hot. God this was such a great set!! Bravo sir, bravo :)

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Guest ...failure

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Haia, you nailed it in this story hellonow, well that guy will get his red-black butt kicked eventually someday, aaand, hellonow, I'm looking forward to see Syne, love that spoilt fire cracker...

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