Seems fun first try ?

Curious how you will twist the vanilla quest to something more interesting.

Your ptotags look rugged and quite good as ever.

Maybe try use more expression on the actors, especially in the protag.

2 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Seems fun first try ?

 

Curious how you will twist the vanilla quest to something more interesting.

 

Your ptotags look rugged and quite good as ever.

 

Maybe try use more expression on the actors, especially in the protag.

I was actually wondering about that how do you change the emotion on a skyrim characters face?

Just now, Jessywulfe said:

I was actually wondering about that how do you change the emotion on a skyrim characters face?

There is mod what lets you pick emotions via rip, i think its called Fep.

You can also use ngf console for it? Or racemenu

Just now, Resdayn said:

There is mod what lets you pick emotions via rip, i think its called Fep.

 

You can also use ngf console for it? Or racemenu

I'll have to see if thats avaliable on SE 

I've been handling my pc's facial expressions through race menu, and I've just started using mfg console for NPC's. I haven't been super impressed with the actual expressions, but it's been better than not using it, and I can actually make their mouths look a bit lobbie they're actually talking. 

I'm with Resdayn, a nice first effort and beginning to the story. I'll definitely be watching for more!  ?

12 hours ago, LexiAJ82 said:

I've been handling my pc's facial expressions through race menu, and I've just started using mfg console for NPC's. I haven't been super impressed with the actual expressions, but it's been better than not using it, and I can actually make their mouths look a bit lobbie they're actually talking. 

 

I'm with Resdayn, a nice first effort and beginning to the story. I'll definitely be watching for more!  ?

thankssss

So we finally get to have a taste of the promised story ! Nice ambiance, with spicy dialogues building simultaneously the characters and the atmosphere. The screenshots are actually quite contrasted, with a protagonist radiating with sensuality (despite only chatting so far), and expressive poses. The writing style is good, specially the dialogues, but I think the narrative parts could be improved, by smoothing out the transitions between scenes and adding a bit of spaces to better show which image is currently associated with the text. Also, don't forget to make her lips move when she's talking (MFG being the reference mod in that regard). Anyway, interesting start !

Malicia : « Lelliana looks very pretty, and very intelligent, yes.  Plus she talks a lot with the hands, so she could get very good at teleshopping too. »

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

So we finally get to have a taste of the promised story ! Nice ambiance, with spicy dialogues building simultaneously the characters and the atmosphere. The screenshots are actually quite contrasted, with a protagonist radiating with sensuality (despite only chatting so far), and expressive poses. The writing style is good, specially the dialogues, but I think the narrative parts could be improved, by smoothing out the transitions between scenes and adding a bit of spaces to better show which image is currently associated with the text. Also, don't forget to make her lips move when she's talking (MFG being the reference mod in that regard). Anyway, interesting start !

 

Malicia : « Lelliana looks very pretty, and very intelligent, yes.  Plus she talks a lot with the hands, so she could get very good at teleshopping too. »

thanks I'm thinking of doing speech bubbles for my next post as well as better poses/ trying to work on facial animations

Nice start. I usually prefer comic bubbles but it's also nice to see actual prose (as opposed to the screenplay sort of layout most folks seem to use as an alternative to comics).

Hope you decide to continue.

On 3/4/2020 at 3:09 AM, SpyVsPie said:

Nice start. I usually prefer comic bubbles but it's also nice to see actual prose (as opposed to the screenplay sort of layout most folks seem to use as an alternative to comics).

 

Hope you decide to continue.

Life got a smidge busy but I'm currently working on more and I plan on doing speech bubbles this time I love your stories

Aria: I look forward to seeing more and more