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Territorial Orc

WhatTheElf

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It started off as a pretty peaceful evening...

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But it looks like Aerina decided to setup camp too close to an Orc stronghold... And she wasn't to be alone for long

 

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Caught off guard... it didn't take much for her to black out

 

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By the time she comes around... she won't know what's hit her.

 

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He takes off (Having had his fun) with some of her coin from the tent as toll payment for using Orc lands.

 

But I think when she comes round... she will have got the message.

 

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Agent Tex

Agent Tex

Posted

Aria: Hey we all gotta pay the price to become "blood of kin" right?

 

Amazing work

WhatTheElf

WhatTheElf

Posted

12 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Hey we all gotta pay the price to become "blood of kin" right?

 

Amazing work

Aerina: I mean... They could've just asked...

 

Thanks alot ?

Agent Tex

Agent Tex

Posted

19 minutes ago, WhatTheElf said:

Aerina: I mean... They could've just asked...

Aria: I know the feeling Sister, you should come hang out with me, I get into all sorts of trouble ;) 

19 minutes ago, WhatTheElf said:

 

Thanks alot ?

No worries, loved the entry can not wait till see more

Tirloque

Tirloque

Posted

Interesting start for a first try at storytelling. The basic concept, which is narrating unfolding events is here, though the story aspect could be refined. Purely from a formatting point of view, putting the text inbetween the images but into the spoilers could allow more surprises  for the reader, as currently you could read the whole script with only one glance. Don't hesitate to develop more the setting and the characters as well. Technically, your grammar is acceptable, and the images are vivid and crispy, with good expressions, good alignment, and fluid GIFs. Awaiting to see what direction you'll go towards in the future. ?

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