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Hi everyone ! During her last trip to Apocrypha, Malicia found another deleted story-blog, kept deep within the daedric prince's realm. Though long lost and probably containing lots of forbidden knowledge, she retrieved it, and managed to load it into her Sigil Sphere. The entertainment was such that she thought it should be "very shared, yes".

 

Allow me to present her last rediscovery :

 

 

 

DREAMGHOSTS

 

 

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I - SYNOPSIS

 

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Some creatures are natural, others magic. But when a daedric prince calls upon one of the nine gods with something else than war in mind, the result of their affair can only be referred as unnatural. Daughter of such forbidden union, Fiona has Hircine's taste for the wild, and Dibella's love for sexual arts. With such appetites, the daedric Hunting Grounds quickly became insufficient for the creature's curiosity. And so she now wanders in the mortals' world, secretly inviting herself into their lives, when their dreams call out to her...

 

 

 

II - DESCRIPTION

 

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A - Summary

 

AriNoir's Dreamghosts (M-H)

Blog type : comic / subtitled — Writing genres : fantasy ; erotism ; adventure.

By : AriNoir.

Status : out of order (02-2019).

 

 

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Everyone has its daemons. Everyone has its lust. But what if the two of them collide into one, while you try to escape the troubles life put you through ? A quite original storyline, with a well cared graphical identity, and a rather dynamic way of inserting text (though excessively dynamic sometimes maybe ^^). Don't miss it !

 

Recommended start : Golden Cage Insight - Part 1.

 

 

 

The blog's image are deleted, preventing newcomers to discover it. It seems they were hosted on a personal server, and so vanished with its shutdown. That's a pity though, but even though LL's tracking system suggest the author is still alright, despite my best effort I couldn't make contact with her. And so, provided the deletion isn't deliberate, didn't have the chance to remind her about her blog. 

 

 

 

B - Critic

 

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Qualities                                                           |                                                           Drawbacks

 

+ Remarkable character design

+ Excellent visual quality and identity, with artistically inviting characters, immersive environments,

and mastered poses/facial expressions

+ Creative comic layout for the remade parts, with a very fluid reading

+ Overall staging and mystery in the remade version

+ Steady with content types

 

 

                                      - Significantly frequent typos and linguistic mistakes, but that's minor and could be easily corrected

                                      - The readability might rarely be decreased by the too original layout

                                      - Not as varied in content types than other blogs

                                      - Messy sorting... and out of order :classic_undecided:
 

 

 

 

Malicia : « That's Adelheit story. She's a gal who keeps dreaming all the time, you see ? Even when lots of things' happening, uh. :classic_ph34r: »

 

 

 

III - RESTORED STORIES

 

 

Golden Cage - Chapter 1 : Insight

 

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Librarian's notes :

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The restored entry is identical to the original, except for :

  • Tweaked image management (compression, resolution). Having 2 MB large images looks nice but is in fact a big hinder for sharing purposes, even though AriNoir's format is in fact closer to A4 than 16/9.
  • Slightly altered title, for clearer presentation.
  • Altered feature image, to fit regular 2k/header formats.

 

I'm also used to receive author's consent before publishing a restoration or a review entry, but as stated before this wasn't possible with AriNoir ; while her work seemed too good to belong in the bin.  

 

 

Edited by Tirloque

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3 hours ago, Alter Native said:

I remember this story from a while back and can only recommend it. Thanks for the reminder Tirloque to read it again!

It has a certain aesthetic research in common with your own stories in fact, so I'm not surprised that you liked it : the backgrounds seems custom, and made with a certain sense of detail. Yet, it differs from the extension of that process to the characters design, the dreamghosts allowing for nearly unbridled creativity which reminds more of Collygon's ; while your works focused more on the lighting and ambiance in the end.

 

As for a reminder to read, sadly this is not a review, but a restoration. This means that unless someone else saved the other chapters, what you see here is nearly all what is left of the story. Smiley_whistle_HFR.gif

2 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you i like what i see nice Girl and great Pictures and the Story Looks good too  ?

Thanks for your comment, Wilson. AriNoir indeed knew how to create quality pictures, and enticing sexiness.  Let's hope she's up for restoring it if she happens to pass nearby !

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20 hours ago, Jessywulfe said:

those screens are beautiful

Indeed. A bit forced on eyes expressions sometimes (which can on the contrary really enforce the effect at other moments, like on the feature image), but the character design is excellent ; and, the outfits, the backgrounds, the viewpoints very good. A pity AriNoir left LL before our little community became a thing. :classic_angel:

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Hey, I missed this entry.

 

Ohh you meant this story, when you talked about it.

 

I remember this one, it was quite a lovely thing, with many lewd and dreamful scenarios.

 

Its sad its lost, thank you for the restoration, so at least we can get a taste from it.

 

 

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50 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Hey, I missed this entry.

 

Ohh you meant this story, when you talked about it.

 

I remember this one, it was quite a lovely thing, with many lewd and dreamful scenarios.

 

Its sad its lost, thank you for the restoration, so at least we can get a taste from it.

Considering how eager you were to know about my next restoration, I was wondering when you would see it. ^^

 

Yeah, AriNoir's work is the one I was referring to as a pretty thing. And as I said, I regret not having foreseen she would somehow put down her imagehost ; otherwise I would've saved more of it. Unless she passes there and is willing to read her private messages restore it, what you can see here is all I have. That's a quite stunning sample though, I find her work quite inspiring in terms of aesthetics. So it's only a taste as you say, but it's an excellent one. :smiley:

On 1/5/2020 at 12:27 AM, Agent Tex said:

Blast from the past!

 

10 outta 10 - Aria

Malicia : « Well that Adelheit gal sure looked very blasted at that moment. I mean, she was very dreaming with her eyes open, you see ? million_dollar_baby.gif »

 

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Damn, seems I completely missed this one. This is just beautiful! 
Many thanks to you, Tirloque, for restoring this one ^_^

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12 hours ago, Crw said:

Damn, seems I completely missed this one. This is just beautiful! 
Many thanks to you, Tirloque, for restoring this one ^_^

Thanks for the good words, Crw ! Well, AriNoir stopped publishing about one year before you started your own blog, hence the miss. It was indeed more than worth the see, and would it not be restored, at least it'll be inspiring for us storytellers. :star:

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Wow that was fantastic, loved everything about the story and the screenshots. Think it was probably a little before my time here on LL so I'm glad I got to see it.

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14 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Wow that was fantastic, loved everything about the story and the screenshots. Think it was probably a little before my time here on LL so I'm glad I got to see it.

Spy is back ! (And possibly with a bag backlog full of stories, ho ho ho ! ) :smiley:

 

Yeah, it's a rather old one and so there are many who didn't know that story in the first place. Yet it's a treat both visually and story-wise. Let's hope AriNoir gets back to LL one day !

14 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Wow that was fantastic, loved everything about the story and the screenshots.

Malicia : « It's a very fantastic story, but the heroine isn't very intelligent and very strong, no. So there are stories which are even more fantastic, you see ? :classic_lightbulb: »

 

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