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AriNoir

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Hi folks,

 

I hope you're feeling better that me. I'm dragging a cold arround for weeks now, but I'm trying to stay healthy as good as possible. Doing something that is fun usually distracts me from feeling sick.
However, I loved to work on the fifth part in comicformat, so much that I decided to bring all the previous parts to the same lvl of quality. Also I screwed up all the links of the pictures in the previous posts, after I organized those pictures on the serverside. It was inevidable at some point but instead of ordering and relinking all of them again, I'm going to do everything from scratch. I see those old posts as a kind of script for the real thing. So, here you have Golden Cage Part 1, with completely new screenshots, new skyrimbuild, redone scenery, rewritten script and in comicformat.
Enjoy!

 

 


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Golden Cage Breakup (part2)

 

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Swiftstep

Yeah, the layout and the story is great. Wow! Can't even guess how long that took.. I dare say that the format of the text is the best I've seen so far (it's a picture story - it may sound superficial, but what good is a story if it's hard to actually read because the letters are too small).

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Tirloque

What you tried to do with the layout is interesting : you managed to create a surprise effect when introducing the vegetal/green woman ; a dizzying effect when she's daydreaming the first time ; and overall it's very fluid. :)

It gets somewhat excessive when you tried to rotate the images as well when she's daydreaming the second time (after Erikur leaving) though IMO, it gets a bit to destructured to be read easily. million_dollar_baby.gif

 

Anyway, great work. :)

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AriNoir

What you tried to do with the layout is interesting : you managed to create a surprise effect when introducing the vegetal/green woman ; a dizzying effect when she's daydreaming the first time ; and overall it's very fluid. :)

It gets somewhat excessive when you tried to rotate the images as well when she's daydreaming the second time (after Erikur leaving) though IMO, it gets a bit to destructured to be read easily. million_dollar_baby.gif

 

Anyway, great work. :)

 

It's hard for me, not to get excessive with that theme :P, but you're right.  Legibility should be first priority.

And to all, thank you for your comments :) Second part is already 12 sites long. I'm looking forward to release it

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AriNoir

I correct myself: first priority = boobs and then comes legibility :P But a good story multiplies the "nosebleedeffect" ;) 

 

So I consider both equally important :)

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Jay-Omms

I correct myself: first priority = boobs and then comes legibility :P But a good story multiplies the "nosebleedeffect" ;)

 

So I consider both equally important :)

That's good just teasing ;) I saw the pic for the first time and thought it be funny to post it :D

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