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Guest

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First episode was great and this one is even better.

Rock&Rule

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Poor Sylvia even when it goes well someone still messes with her clothes. It was a nice tie in with the sister though. I can't wait to see what comes of that reunion.

 

A great read as always and the action with Sylvia breaking bones was fun.

Agent Tex

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Woo woo! New Chapter where are you?

 

Aria: Boy am I glad I do not live in that Relm of Skyrim, its freezing cold, their are lustful things everywhere and the not to mention all the slooty men and woman!  Its a good thing I brought my blindfold to save me from all that sexiness

 

wilson99

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thank you 2 very good stories much excitement i am always glad when the bad ones loose out , very well done ?

Rattlesnark

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This was an especially fun chapter to read. Thank you!

SpyVsPie

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Nice tie in with the main story at the end there!

 

Great action shots as usual!

Tirloque

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Yep, I agree you've got the hang about advertising the next chapters with an ending cliffhanger. ^^ As for the chapter itself, the boost mechanics were quite shounen like ; but that didn't prevent the fight in itself to be interesting, and percussive. Though it sometimes lacked a bit in clarity, the antagonist's concept was great.  An so was the integration in a consistent universe. Awaiting for the next story ! :D

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