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Chapter 42: Bonds (3/3)


ther1pper

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"The weak Parish"
Authors note: I'm sorry if you disliked this story, i don't really like it either, but i couldn't think of a better way to bring this element back in.

 

(Riften Meanwhile)

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*talking inside*

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*heavy breathing*
*sucking sounds*
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Shyvana: Oh Eletta.
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Shyvana: Suck harder.
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Shyvana: Ahhh.
*Eletta fingering her*
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Shyvana: Yes, yes.
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Shyvana: keep sucking.
*sucking sounds*
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Shyvana: So good.
Eletta: Like this huh?
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Eletta: How about i go a little lower.
Shyvana: Please do.

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Shyvana: Ahhhh.
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Shyvana: Yes yes yes.
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Eletta: You really love this huh?
Shyvana: Yes!
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*licking sounds*
Shyvana: Ahhh!
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Shyvana: Yes yes.
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*licking sounds*
Shyvana: Mmmm.
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Shyvana: Gods yes!
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*licking sounds*
Shyvana: Ahhh!!
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Shyvana: yes, keep going!
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Shyvana: Almost there!

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Shyvana: Yes, yes, YES!
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Shyvana: Gods Yes!
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Shyvana: YES, YES!!!
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Shyvana: AHHH!!!
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Shyvana: *panting*Fuck Eletta, you're great at this.
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Shyvana: That felt great.
Eletta: No time to rest yet Shyvana.
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*fingering sounds*
Eletta: You still haven't made me cum yet.
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Shyvana: Oh, don't worry, i'll make you cum.
Eletta: That won't do.
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Eletta: I wanna ride your face.
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Eletta: As you lick m-

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*slice*

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Shyvana: ELETTA!!!
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Shyvana: WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!!!
Red: Nothing fun yet.
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Red: But i'm about to.
Shyvana: Wait, stop undressing!
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Shyvana: No get away!
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Shyvana: LET GO OF ME!
Red: Oh come on, you know you want it.
Shyvana: SOMEONE HELP!
Red: No point in yelling by the way.
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Red: I'm made sure to set something up to keep the sound confined to this room.

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Red: Now lets have some fun together.
Shyvana: AHHHH!!!
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Red: Damn, for a mage, you've got a really nice pussy.

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Red: Nice and tight.
Shyvana: STOOOP!!
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Shyvana: GET OUT!
Red: No can do sweetie, Not till i get my fill!
Shyvana: AAHHH!!!
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Shyvana: Let go!
Red: Stop struggling.
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Red: Actually, keep struggling, you seem to be getting tighter.
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Shyvana: Why are, AHH!!
Red: Because its fun.
*thrusting harder*
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Shyvana: AHHH!!!
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Shyvana: Let go!
Red: stop struggling and
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Red: SUCK!!!
Shyvana: MMMMM!!!
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Shyvana: MMMM!!!
Red: Mmm, don't bite, not unless you want me to break your neck.
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Red: Ahhh, yes, so good, now that i'm lubbed up.

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Shyvana: AHHH!!!
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Shyvana: Sto-Mmmm
Red: Be quiet!
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Red: You're screaming is getting annoying.
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Red: Ahhh, 4th time feels just as good.
Shyvana: Mmmmm!
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Shyvana: Please, stop, Not my ass again!
Red: Stop struggling.
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Red: Actually fuck it keep struggling, i only got a few shots in me anyways.
Shyvana: No-
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Shyvana: AHHHH!!!
Red: Ahhh, tightest ass i've had in awhile.
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Shyvana: *sobbing* please....stop
Red: Awww, no more struggling.
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Shyvana: Just do whatever you want.
Red: Okay then.
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Shyvana: Ahhh, stop!
Red: Hey, you said i can do whatever i want.
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Red: SO LET ME COME IN YOUR ASS!!!
Shyvana: Ahhh!!!
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(2 hours later)
*panting*

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*panting*
Red: Welp its been fun.
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Red: But i must be off, business to do.
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*stepping sounds*
Shyvana: *panting* Why......
Red: Why.
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Red: Well i just needed your friendship and trust.
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Red: and i thank you very much for that.
Shyvana: No, WAI-

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*slicing sound*
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*footsteps*
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*stabbing soul gem*

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*closing door*
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*walking sounds*
*sword making a hissing noise*
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*sword transforms*
Red: Finally.
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Red: I'm another step closer to my revenge.
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Red: Shame i had to kill those two, they would have made great slaves.
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Red: But master said the sword needs to be charged like that, so whatever.
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Red: I can always find two others.
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Red: I only need two more.
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Red: Then the sword will be charged.
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Red: and finally.
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Red: I can have my revenge.
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Red: That bitch.
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*struggling grunts*
Red: She killed my crew.
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Red: All of them.
*struggling grunts*
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Red: She nearly crippled me.
Red: Agh!
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Red: Beat me until i was down.
Red: *Panting*

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Red: I was a king, there was no way i should lose.
Red/Agnar: I'll*pant*
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Agnar: There was no way i should have fallen to a mere Archer.
Agnar: kill *pant* you
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Agnar: Cunt!
Agnar: Damn you Lily Sondu, you ruined me!
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Agnar: and your whore of a daughter.
*gagging sounds*
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Agnar: She killed me!
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Agnar: But now i'm back.
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Agnar: Brace yourself daughter of Lily, because in only a few days, it will be you who's gasping for air after i slit your throat.
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If for some reason you decided to start this series with this chapter and don't know who that was at the end or why he is important, please read Chapters 25 and 35. See you guys next time. Also i apologize for how long this took, i really didn't want to fucking do this chapter but it was required so.

 

Part 1: http://www.loverslab.com/blog/407/entry-5278-chapter-42-bonds-13/
Part 2: http://www.loverslab.com/blog/407/entry-5510-chapter-42-bonds-23/

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Aria: Wow.... fuck me.... wow... note to self: Make sure my enemies ant still breathing after I kill them.

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Aria: Wow.... fuck me.... wow... note to self: Make sure my enemies ant still breathing after I kill them.

Oh he was 100% dead, but someone brought him back.

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What part about the story (or creation of) that's bugging you? I thought it wasn't bad at all, but am curious as to the impression you have of it!

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Definitely turned out darker and with a twist I hadn't expected!

 

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What part about the story (or creation of) that's bugging you? I thought it wasn't bad at all, but am curious as to the impression you have of it!

 

EDIT:

 

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Definitely turned out darker and with a twist I hadn't expected!

 

 

I didn't really want to make a chapter about this guy, but i had to because i need to reintroduce him now rather than suddenly dropping him into the story later when i need him, which is gonna be pretty soon.

Talk about a shocking return. 

 

 

nice!

 

 

Nice! I wasn't expecting that turn of events at all. Very well done, ther1pper.

Thanks guys.

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SALFJBSIDUG HRNWIKHFGVINKGBC UJSFGXIKSJ <- that is the best way to express my reaction to this chapter because, like, holy shit! Seriously, great job! I know you weren't too excited about making this chapter, but it certainly didn't show. This was just as awesome and thrilling as usual, perhaps even more so! Keep it up!

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SALFJBSIDUG HRNWIKHFGVINKGBC UJSFGXIKSJ <- that is the best way to express my reaction to this chapter because, like, holy shit! Seriously, great job! I know you weren't too excited about making this chapter, but it certainly didn't show. This was just as awesome and thrilling as usual, perhaps even more so! Keep it up!

It looks like that stream of letters is either a seizure of happiness or surprise, either way, glad you liked it.

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I have to say this chapter was great! I don't know why you didn't like to write it but I didn't recognize a loss of quality. 

Keep doing those great chapters! :D

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I have to say this chapter was great! I don't know why you didn't like to write it but I didn't recognize a loss of quality. 

Keep doing those great chapters! :D

My heart wasn't truely in this chapter.....i think, i don't know anymore. Also thanks.

 

can i sugest one thing?

make Shyvana ressurect like him, of couse looking for revenge

Even if i did bring her back, she would not be able to take him on. Also i already got a plan, so you'll see him again quite soon.

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True, the chapter as a whole was very good ; in particular the way you setup twists, you surprise the reader a few times and that's excellent (the end of Eletta's sexual performance was completely unexpected O_o).

 

Now your antagonist character has a lot of consistency : we've seen what he can do, and why. Can't wait to read the confrontation with Emily ! ;)

 

PS : and Lily, Emily's mother is quite pretty, nice job.

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True, the chapter as a whole was very good ; in particular the way you setup twists, you surprise the reader a few times and that's excellent (the end of Eletta's sexual performance was completely unexpected O_o).

 

Now your antagonist character has a lot of consistency : we've seen what he can do, and why. Can't wait to read the confrontation with Emily ! ;)

 

PS : and Lily, Emily's mother is quite pretty, nice job.

Thanks, also yeah i actually made Lily's preset awhile back, glad you like her though.

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