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[S:S] The Ghostly-Heart #1


Agent Tex

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A Prequel to the Gormaka Ghost-Heart [G.G] Series.

 

Please enjoy

 

Spoiler

 [ Whiterun Jail / Whiterun Hold]

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Guard

Alright, in you go prisoner!

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Lilith

Hey! Be careful!

Guard

Welcome to your new home whore!

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Guard

Now, be a good and behave yourself for the rest of the night, or me and the lads will come pay you a "visit" in the night. Hah!

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Lilith

Damn them to Oblivion!

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Lilith

What's this? Oh just lovely, a dead body in my cell. Can this day get any worse?

???

What did you do to get thrown in here with me?

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Lilith

Huh... who said that?

???

I did. Now, I'm not going to repeat myself!

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Lilith

Ugh... Theft. I was sleeping with a few rich idiots and stealing their jewels while they slept after a awesome night of sex but I guess the Guard caught on to what I was doing. Now I'm in here, for 20 years! 20 damn years!

???

So... your a Thief, or are you a whore?

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Lilith

I mean I'm no good with a lockpick if thats what your asking?

???

So... what your saying is, your useless to me then?

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Lilith

What ? Oh no no I can be useful for sure, trust me I have my talents

???

How so?

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Lilith

You see these two? They can drive men nuts, even some woman too

???

So, you just a whore then?

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Lilith

What, no I just... use my charm to get what I want, its not like they pay for me... ohh.

Okay I guess I sort of am a whore then. Why is that kind of a turn on?

???

And what do you want little whore?

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Lilith

I guess Money, Freedom and well not to end up like him. Friend of yours I take it?

???

Not really. When the Guard threw me in here they took all my gear and weapons, he thought it was funny that I was naked. I demanded his clothes, but he refused to be reasonable. So I killed him, hmm maybe thats three cases of murder then?

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Lilith

So, you got a plan to get out us of here or something? 20 years is a long time

Gormaka

I'm sure I can think of something, I'm Gormaka by the way, and you are?

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Lilith

I'm... call me Lilith.

Gormaka

Very well then Lilith. Listen and listen good, I will not be repeating myself. Betray me and you''ll--

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Lilith

End up like your friend, yeah yeah. I'm no friend to the Guards trust me.

So maybe you'd like to tell me why they threw me in here?

Gormaka

Fine! Like I already said, they stripped me of my armor and weapons.

Tossed me in here naked as the day I was born.

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Lilith

So, how do we.. you know get out?

Gormaka

Theirs a new Guard on duty, a boy no less. He sees your tits and he will be... very distracted... for a decent amount of time.

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Lilith

Oh? Whats he look like, he cute?

Gormaka

Brown hair, shorter then the others and stupid as a scamp

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Lilith

So, I wiggle my titties at him and what?

Gormaka

Try and get him close to us, close enough that you can grab his key

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Lilith

Really? Gormaka you naughty girl

Gormaka

I mean the key to our cell! You harlot!

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Lilith

Right! Of course you do

Gormaka

Then we sneak out of here

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Lilith

But the Guards are everywhere?

Gormaka

Not though there, down the little tunnels under this place. It should lead us outta the city in no time if we hurry though.

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Lilith

Okay, but thats a sewer and we are both naked.

Gormaka

Does the thought of shit turn you off enough to not be able to preform little whore?

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Lilith

No

Gormaka

Good. Now, I've been trying to work out his routine. He checks all the cells before he leaves at 6am for what I guess is a quick wank and bedtime.

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Lilith

And if he does not come by tonight?

Gormaka

Then, I'll improvise!

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Lilith

Oh really? Well I have a better idea

Gormaka

Really? Lets here it, but I doubt it will be as good as mine

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Lilith

You said hes young, about 18 right? Still a boy waiting to become a man. Well, when he comes around he finds me and you naked on top of each other doing--

Gormaka

Not gonna happen!

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Lilith

Just kisses, I promise. Now, you claim I'm attacking you and yell at him to save you from me

Gormaka

Hmm, he comes in and restrains you. I knock him out grab the key and we flee.

Nice, might even work?

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Lilith

It will be so much more fun too

Gormaka

Alright new cellmate. We go with yours if mine fails!

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Lilith

Come on, by the time we grab the key off his belt and escape the Guard will be all over us like--

Gormaka

I like you... you've got more balls then most, me and-- Fine! But no tongue!

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Lilith

As you say, Boss

Gormaka

Boss huh? I like the sounds of that

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Lilith

So, how long till horny teenage boy come by?

Gormaka

A few good hours still. If he even comes by. He should be here around midnight, most of the Guards will be checking on the other sleeping prisoners. So that is when we make the move. 

Lilith

So plenty of time for us to... get closer.

 

 

 

A few hours later...pVKvIYdo_o.png

Lilith

Funny. So, who did you kill then to get thrown in here?

Gormaka

Just some drunken ass, no wait thats wrong. I killed two drunken asses. Fuck! Three!

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Lilith

Why did you kill them?

Gormaka

They thought my armor was funny

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Lilith

Your armor?

Gormaka

Yes, my armor!

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Lilith

Okay then.

Gormaka

So, what rich slob were you fucking?

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Lilith

Some Breton noble from High Rock. An easy mark really, I would be far away from here with a lot of fancy items by now if the damn Guard did not set me up!

Gormaka

So you do sleep with men for coin?

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Lilith

I thought we agreed that I sleep with them to steal from them? Not the other way round?

Gormaka

You ever been with a woman?

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Lilith

Oh a lot of times, I prefer them to men, well most men.

Gormaka

Woman know what other woman like I guess.

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Lilith

Yeah, I guess. What about you?

Gormaka

Men, Woman, matters not as long as 

long as they please me I do not care about whats between their legs

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Lilith

That sounds a little like rape to me

Gormaka

And? That a problem for you?

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Lilith

No, no not at all.

Gormaka

Good. And you can relax, I won't do anything to you.

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Lilith

Just say the magic word and I'll spreed my legs for you... I mean other then now of course haha

Gormaka

Heh, funny. When we are free of this cell I'm heading off to the Rift.

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Lilith

Why?

Gormaka

The Rift is the most corrupted part of Skyrim, plus my bounty here wont cross over to the Rift. Fresh start for me, us maybe. If you prove you really do have the balls Lilith

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Lilith

You know Bounty Hunters will come after us right?

Gormaka

Of course they will. Our bounty will be pretty--

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Lilith

Shh, you hear that?

Gormaka

Yeah, I do. Its showtime Lilith

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Strevus - Thane of Whiterun Hold

Alright men, gather up and listen good.

Some of these very low life's will be transported to either another holds jail or to face justice in the morning. Tonight is their last night, keep an eye on them. I doubt it will be a quiet night tonight. Just keep your guard up for a few more hours lads. TvF8Jpih_o.png

 

Strevus - Thane of Whiterun Hold

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Lilith

Its now or never Gormaka

Gormaka

You ready?

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Lilith

Yes, now <gasping for air>

Gormaka

I forgot to mention, I changed the plan a tiny bit

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Lilith

Hmm, this works too I guess

Gormaka

I've gotta make this look real, so I'm gonna choke you real hard! But you'll live, maybe

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Lilith

Ye.... Boss!

Gormaka

Alright, start screaming for help

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Lilith

GUARD! HELP ME!

Gormaka

YOUR GONNA DIE YOU LITTLE BITCH!

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Whiterun Guard

Whats going on in-- JiEw62b3_o.png

Whiterun Guard

Shit!

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Whiterun Guard

What happen in here? Gods! bzR0cl3T_o.png

 

Gormaka

I happend.9to1u5Kb_o.png

<Sounds of a Heavy Object Hitting the ground> 

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Lilith

Fuck... it worked!

Gormaka

Of course it worked, now hurryziqFZyjm_o.png

Lilith

I'm going I'm going DkJX7ucd_o.png

Lilith

We have about 5 minutes before the Guard take notice that one of them is missing

Gormaka

Yeah I know, hurry your ass up! kx0nv9Tf_o.png

 

Lilith

Your a pretty good leader, Boss

Gormaka

Shit! TYTxTpiw_o.png

Lilith

Well, I did mention I suck at lockpicking

Gormaka

Yeah yeah, I can pick this. I just need- PqWupIjd_o.png

Lilith

What?

Gormaka

I had some lockpicks on me when I was arrested, but those would be in the Guard's lockup. Shit! IqJAzNYl_o.png

 

Lilith

Maybe we could head back, try another way out?

Gormaka

No point, that one will be locked as well.

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Lilith

Hmm

Gormaka

Think... come on! NIzjxCuo_o.png

Lilith

Would our belongings help?

Gormaka

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Lilith

This chest has our stuff in it. Your armor, my... oh well this is all yours.

Gormaka

Quick, get down here with them hurry!

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Lilith

Yeah Boss

Gormaka

Quiet! zZsMqNqm_o.png

Lilith

Sorry, here you go

Gormaka

Shit, that seems like everything. Okay, watch my back ed2TPGTM_o.png

Lilith

Gladly... Hmmm, Nice armor

Gormaka

Your not making fun of it are you now? siRUmzM3_o.png

 

Lilith

I look like I'm dumb enough to be murdered by my new friend?

Gormaka

Friend? Cwzm9yyI_o.png

 

Lilith

Yeah, you need me and I need you.

Gormaka

That does not make us friends Lilith UdmI4aiN_o.png

 

Lilith

Have I not proven my trust? You almost choked me to death.

Gormaka

Yeah, I did. Your tougher then you look, I'll give ya that SUEZ2OkF_o.png

 

Lilith

So, partners in crime then?

Gormaka

Hmm, alright. That works for me, partner wVAVoqMO_o.png

 

Lilith

Thanks, Boss.

Gormaka

Come on, we steal a horse and be in the Rift by the end of the week 30nFzWnj_o.png

 

Lilith

Then the Rift is where we headed to.

Gormaka

You know, I think we could be maybe friends after all, but give it time. I'm hard to trust new people but something about you says I can trust you.  eNJF1AuU_o.png QW97qmVm_o.png 0ZnveFnx_o.png

 

 

 

 

Sometime later... 

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Lilith

You okay Boss? You were shivering--

Gormaka

I'm fine! This fire will dry and warm me right back up.

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Lilith

Damn rain

Gormaka

Well, on the bright side it will hide our escape and make finding us near impossible. fbQqB4xO_o.png

 

Lilith

And the sleeping Giants outside will keep any pests away

Gormaka

Yeah. Good job sneaking past them, its such a rare thing to meet someone who knows how to move with her armor. Most people I meet in heavy armor are brutes  ohwBhoSK_o.png

 

Lilith

I've spent most of my existence in heavy armor. Its like a second layer of skin to me

Gormaka

Not creepy at all Lilith. But, you have my respect at least.

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Lilith

We should spend the night in here, the rain is not going to let up anytime soon.

And you need to rest

Gormaka

And if the Giants wake up? x2flkbcd_o.png

 

Lilith

I'll fight them off, you run for the exit. We can meet up somewhere later, down stream

Gormaka

Fight them? We have no weapons, thats madness... but its better then us both dying I guess.arQf6Dr2_o.png

 

Lilith

Okay, so we get into the Rift, then what?

Gormaka

We sign up with a Gang, maybe at Mistwatch or with Lost Knife.

Either way, we need their protection 

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Lilith

From who?

Gormaka

Told you the bounty on our head will be big. Bounty Hunters will chase us all the way to Vardenfell unless we join up.  That or we go back to jail.oYovxWdQ_o.png

 

Lilith

Alright, I'm with you. Partner

Gormaka

I'll admit, Its so weird to have someone watching my back for once. I can trust you right? CKXGI0rz_o.png

 

Lilith

Gormaka, if was going to hurt you or kill you I would have done it by now, you think I just let random woman strangle me?

Gormaka

Well you are a whore?

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Lilith

Funny. You can trust me

Gormaka

I thought so. Sp2IPjJW_o.png

 

Lilith

You should catch some shut eye, I'll watch over you

Gormaka

Fine... wake me in 4 hours. I'll do the same for you, oh! And if I don't wake up then I'll come back and haunt your ass till the end of time

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Lilith

If your ghost wears that outfit, I'd be happy to have you haunt me.

Gormaka

Funny, just make sure no Giant rapes my ass alright 8oEdzsco_o.png

 

Lilith

You got it Boss.

Gormaka

Thanks..... Zzz MygfatiT_o.png

Lilith

I'll protect you. My Sweet little.... mortal.

Gormaka

Zzz...  

 

 

 

Edited by Agent Tex

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Nice job! Glad you found some energy to do stories again!

Let's hope for the best and see how your new blog develops. Might also be a chance to do something new or tell the Aria Pheonix story from the beginning. I really like the pitch of that story.  

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13 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Nice job! Glad you found some energy to do stories again!

Yep!

13 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Let's hope for the best and see how your new blog develops.

Fingers crossed.

13 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Might also be a chance to do something new or tell the Aria Pheonix story from the beginning. I really like the pitch of that story.  

Which one? The one where Aria was dying, how Aria and Phe meet ? I failed every time, for 4 years now.

 

Plus the story I wanna tell will take years to finish. 

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6 minutes ago, Nuka Raider69 said:

Which one? The one where Aria was dying, how Aria and Phe meet ? I failed every time, for 4 years now.

Plus the story I wanna tell will take years to finish. 

So as far as I understood your vision for these characters and for your story, it would be something like Aria is a regular daedra, coming to skyrim to do something evil, meets Pheonix, falls in love with her and eventually turns against her own kind to do the right thing. 

Of course with many twists etc. and a process with would take a lot of entries as this transformation is impossible to happen over night. 

 

You're right, it would take a year or longer to finish, it takes commitment and focus, but you had a consistent overarching story with a clear progression bath and character development.  Maybe a new blog is the right time to do that.

But of course you have to do and want that sincerely. It is just a suggestion. 

 

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Oh, this was very interesting! The screenshots were pleasant and the story twist with Sanguine and Sheogorath looks curious.

I have to admit, Gormaka's armor is certainly unusual. ?

Hope to see more of this tale. ☺️

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Well, the read was rather pleasant, with one or two twists worth of that name, not bad dialogues and rather good graphics (though... You know what I think but I won't say it ^^). Now the pace at the start was slow, and in the end only three events do really happen (Gormaka and the seducer meet, they associate and escape), so the rhythm could be improved somehow. Yet an entertaining read overall, and a nice return for a blog we though vanished. ?

On 8/21/2019 at 1:35 PM, Nuka Raider69 said:

Which one? The one where Aria was dying, how Aria and Phe meet ? I failed every time, for 4 years now.

 

Plus the story I wanna tell will take years to finish. 

Then why don't you resume at the point where you were before ? That way you don't go in circles doing the same thing over and over, and it stills allows you to get where you want.

 

And then, should your blog survive long enough for you to reach its end, I could give your what I saved for you to publish as a prequel/beginning, allowing to have a nearly complete story. :classic_smile:

 

If I may, what are the 219 unpublished entries btw ? Remnants of your previous versions of your blogs ?

 

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On 8/21/2019 at 12:49 PM, Alter Native said:

So as far as I understood your vision for these characters and for your story, it would be something like Aria is a regular daedra, coming to skyrim to do something evil, meets Pheonix, falls in love with her and eventually turns against her own kind to do the right thing. 

The Story of Aria a little more complex, Aria is not a normal Daedra, shes one the Daughter of the most evil Princes. 

 

She was created to become the ultimate weapon against the mortals of Tamriel. Aria was a vert powerful and promising Daedra until her fall thanks to her Brother Saren plotted against her and caused her downfall and later slavery to him. After that another Daedra named Erica still saw the potential Aria had and took her from Saren, over years in Coldharbour Aria once again become what she was meant to be, but Saren again caused her downfall by wiggling his way and thinking that he was a friend to Aria. Well, things went to shit after that. Saren betrayed Aria and killed Erica. After that her life was hell (again)

 

Jump to the 4th Era, Aria is assigned by Saren to find and locate a rouge Daedra. Aria spends 5 years on Tamriel doing this (5 Years is maybe 5 weeks or 5 days in Oblivion) Either way she finally locates this "rouge Daedra" Who she thinks is Phoenix. She considers turning her over to her Master but the kindness shown to Aria by Phoenix makes her care for her in a way no one has ever care for her before and thats when Aria decides to betray Saren and choose her own fate for once.

On 8/21/2019 at 12:49 PM, Alter Native said:

Of course with many twists etc. and a process with would take a lot of entries as this transformation is impossible to happen over night. 

Well yeah, like the fact Athena is her Mom, or how Angelika and Cortana are clones of Aria who were Sarens play things before Aria took them from him.

On 8/21/2019 at 12:49 PM, Alter Native said:

You're right, it would take a year or longer to finish, it takes commitment and focus, but you had a consistent overarching story with a clear progression bath and character development.  Maybe a new blog is the right time to do that.

I'm thinking... 10 years, NO! 20

On 8/21/2019 at 12:49 PM, Alter Native said:

But of course you have to do and want that sincerely. It is just a suggestion. 

In all due time

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6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, the read was rather pleasant, with one or two twists worth of that name, not bad dialogues and rather good graphics (though... You know what I think but I won't say it ^^). Now the pace at the start was slow, and in the end only three events do really happen (Gormaka and the seducer meet, they associate and escape), so the rhythm could be improved somehow. Yet an entertaining read overall, and a nice return for a blog we though vanished.

Thank you, I'm doing this in stages.

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

?

Then why don't you resume at the point where you were before ? That way you don't go in circles doing the same thing over and over, and it stills allows you to get where you want.

Too busy, too confusing. Too boring

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

And then, should your blog survive long enough for you to reach its end, I could give your what I saved for you to publish as a prequel/beginning, allowing to have a nearly complete story. :classic_smile:

Only the Gods know

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

If I may, what are the 219 unpublished entries btw ? Remnants of your previous versions of your blogs ?

 

Stuff, thangs. ;) G.G is almost done. I'm building this one around that to fill in the gaps. you'll know when you read G.G

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