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Shea's Story-Act 2- Chapter 10


BoLtStEr2002

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(I'm moving to JPEGs now, so loading times for my chapters should be quicker now)

 

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Molag Bal: You are just a thing to be broken, even you must know that!

 

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Shea: My lord I...

 

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Shea: (Crying)

 

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Molag Bal: Stop your bitching mortal!

 

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Molag Bal: You are nothing, something to be broken, and used!

 

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Molag Bal: Now stop your fucking crying and get used to it!

 

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Shea: (Crying)

 

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In Draconham...

 

Solomia: I'm sorry.

 

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Solomia: Gods how did we get here? What happened to us?

 

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Solomia: I know I didn't do much for you when we were children.

 

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Solomia: I didn't stop father

 

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Solomia: I didn't stop mother

 

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Solomia: I stopped none of it, but you...you mean too much to be gone now...its already been days.

 

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Solomia: I just want you back, I've lived without you for months, but totally without you, I don't think I can.

 

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Solomia: Just give me a sign, give me anything.

 

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Solomia: Just the slightest movement...please.

 

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Solomia: Well...I'll come and see you tomorrow, I'm sorry.

 

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Solomia: See you tomorrow sis.

 

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Shea: Oh wow, leaving that quick?

 

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Solomia: What?!

 

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Moments later...

 

Solomia: How long were you listening to me?

 

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Shea: Oh not long.

 

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Shea: But enough that I had to wake up.

 

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Shea: Long enough to hear your voice and long enough for me to love it again.

 

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Solomia: That still doesn't answer my question.

 

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Shea: A few minutes, that's all.

 

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Solomia: Hmmm, I thought you were listening longer, you were fidgeting quite a bit.

 

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Solomia: Maybe I was imagining it, but they said there would be some movements.

 

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Shea: No I doubt it. (Kisses)

 

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Solomia: Thank you, for coming back.

 

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Shea: I never really had a choice, I don't choose when I die.

 

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Solomia: Well this is nice and all, but I have a castle to run.

 

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Shea: Really? Going to cut this all off for work? Fine.

 

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Shea: Now what should I wear?

 

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An hour or so later...

 

Solomia: Oh for fuck's sake!

 

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Shea: Uh oh, she's not in a good mood.

 

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Shea: Sis, do you mind not wrecking the chamber?

 

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Solomia: I'm not in the mood Shea.

 

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Solomia: In fact I'm in a shit mood, so don't try and start anything, please.

 

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Shea: Hey! I'm not the one throwing things around.

 

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Solomia: Fine...but there's a huge pile of work to do and I don't think you can help me with it.

 

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Shea: Are you sure, I don't know about ruling, but I know a few things?

 

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Solomia: As I said, I doubt it, so just go before I lose my temper again.

 

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Shea: You sound like you're about to anyway, besides yours can't be much worse than mine.

 

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Solomia: Oh they're lot worse than yours, trust me.

 

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Shea: I think I might take your word for it then.

 

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Solomia: Yeah do it, because dealings with lords and ladies is very frustrating.

 

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Solomia: I all of a sudden have a lot more respect for monarchs and rulers.

 

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Shea: First of all, you still don't have any respect for them and second, they have people to do it for them.

 

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Solomia: True, but really go. Because you don't want to be sat here, I can tell on your face. You have that look of false enthusiasm.

 

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Solomia: Why not take the door?

 

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Shea: Because anyone can survive this fall clearly, it's 'only two metres' at most.

 

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Shea: I mean this type of fall never harms anyone right?

 

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An hour later...

 

Shea: Huh? An unsent scroll. Maybe I'll take a read.

 

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Shea: Can't be that top secret right?

 

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Shea: "Dear Queen Orianna of Raven Castle, due to your many threats against us we are going to make ours. In fact we made ours long ago."

 

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Shea: "I Solomia Lannisdayne now of Draconham Castle declare war on House Draconham and all of its vassals and holdings. I shall see you on the battlefield- Solomia Lannisdayne."

 

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Shea: What the fuck is she thinking?!

 

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Shea: Is she looking to kill us all?!

 

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Solomia: Hey, what's wrong?

 

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Solomia: You look like shit, really.

 

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Shea: When were you going to tell me?

 

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Solomia: Tell you what?

 

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Shea: Oh you're trying to play the innocent game. How amusing?

 

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Shea: Were you going to tell me when the Queen was at our door and hollering for us?!

 

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Shea: Or were you going to tell me tomorrow, or when I felt better?

 

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Solomia: I know what you're thinking but-

 

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Shea: But what? You wanted me out of the picture before you sent this?

 

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Solomia: I know you're thinking it's a terrible idea, but we have to.

 

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Solomia: We have to fight if we want to survive!

 

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Shea: I'm tired of fighting.

 

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Solomia: But we have to we-

 

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Shea: Fighting is all I've done since I've left home!

 

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Solomia: No matter what we'll have to do more!

 

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Solomia: If that isn't to your liking, go!

 

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Shea: Then maybe I should! Because I'm not fighting anybody else's war for any longer!

 

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Solomia: Really? You're just going to give up?!

 

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Shea: Yes! Because I...I can't fight for this any longer. I'm hurting too many just so I can get vengeance that doesn't even belong to me!

 

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Later that night...

 

Shea: C'mon are you going to even talk to me?

 

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Solomia: Zzz

 

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Shea: I'll take that means no, because you aren't breathing right to be actually asleep.

 

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Solomia: Just let me go to sleep.

 

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Solomia: I don't want to talk about today.

 

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Shea: Are you sure you don't want to?

 

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Solomia: Just stop trying.

 

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Shea: Well I guess I can't force you to.

 

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Solomia: Zzz

 

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Shea: Well at least she's actually asleep now.

 

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Shea: God, what am I supposed to do now?

 

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Shea: Leave Solomia, try to start a new life somewhere else.

 

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Shea: Or stay and fight a battle we can't win.

 

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Thanks for reading!

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Well done, I like the chemistry between Shea and Solomia!

 

As a suggestion, maybe try to avoid pictures like these



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There are so many images where nothing substantial is shown, but only a fraction of your images actually shows the talking characters from the front or their faces. I think the outdoor dialogue between Shea and Solomia is much nicer to read than other scenes, because we see a lot more of the characters. 

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Aria: Hmm, I say.... you need a badass, just so happens I'm available for hire and since Shae is a friend she gets the friends and family price, so what do u say hon, want to win that battle? You need me ;) or you could like convince your sister not to fight a battle. Up to you ;) 

 

 

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35 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Well done, I like the chemistry between Shea and Solomia!

 

There are so many images where nothing substantial is shown, but only a fraction of your images actually shows the talking characters from the front or their faces. I think the outdoor dialogue between Shea and Solomia is much nicer to read than other scenes, because we see a lot more of the characters. 

Completely understood, I'll take that into account.

 

25 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Hmm, I say.... you need a badass, just so happens I'm available for hire and since Shae is a friend she gets the friends and family price, so what do u say hon, want to win that battle? You need me ;) or you could like convince your sister not to fight a battle. Up to you ;) 

 

 

Shea: My sister give up? You must be joking, right? Also I don't care how many of you I hire, you couldn't slaughter an army of angry vampires.

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1 hour ago, BoLtStEr2002 said:

Shea: My sister give up? You must be joking, right? Also I don't care how many of you I hire, you couldn't slaughter an army of angry vampires.

Aria: Uhg... hello Badass Daedra for hire, you know I'm worth my price Shae but if you all duke it out yourself its cool, I have other customers

 

- Just RP BTW haha not asking for a crossover ;) 

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Shea's getting up all of a sudden after seeming deeply asleep was a funny part, classic but never gets old. And we're getting the dimension of Shea's and Solomia's dilemmas. Interesting. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

 

 

Malicia : « Hi Mr. Bolster ! I just wanted to ask you : why does everyone look like a potato in this episode ? :classic_lightbulb: Thank you ! 

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I was just kidding, yes ! :classic_happy: Here, take a cookie. cookies-aux-pepites-de-chocolat.jpeg »

 

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Malicia's joke put aside, there was an improvement in loading times indeed. Not as spectacular as I expected (#preset100? ^^) , but enough to ease the reading experience. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

 

@Elf Prince might appreciate it. :classic_wink:

 

 

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8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Shea's getting up all of a sudden after seeming deeply asleep was a funny part, classic but never gets old. And we're getting the dimension of Shea's and Solomia's dilemmas. Interesting. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

 

 

Malicia : « Hi Mr. Bolster ! I just wanted to ask you : why does everyone look like a potato in this episode ? :classic_lightbulb: Thank you ! 

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I was just kidding, yes ! :classic_happy: Here, take a cookie. cookies-aux-pepites-de-chocolat.jpeg »

 

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Malicia's joke put aside, there was an improvement in loading times indeed. Not as spectacular as I expected (#preset100? ^^) , but enough to ease the reading experience. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

 

@Elf Prince might appreciate it. :classic_wink:

 

 

Thank you, also any decrease in loading times is a good thing

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I don't think Shea wants to loose her sister. So she will stay otherwise regrets will run wild if she dies. ?

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