Those pictures are pretty sharp. 

1 hour ago, The Gauntman said:

Those pictures are pretty sharp. 

Trying out Anko ENB. Might need to tweak a few things, indoor is too saturated for me.

Actually outdoors felt quite desaturated to me, and I'm not using a particularly flashy ENB (Rudy). Funny story ; though a bit unsettling I must say. The lockpicking pose and the (added ?) effects were quite good, that being said ; always curious to know how watery effect were done.

Malicia : « Hey you ! You forgot to free her !! She's gonna have a baby now, you can't leave her ! »

Lol  , this was good I like it.

Agree with Triloque. the guy shouldn't leave her after sex. I know you want to to make it funny and probably sarcastic but I hated the guy at the end. Wish she will get out of the cell and kill the bastard.

11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Actually outdoors felt quite desaturated to me, and I'm not using a particularly flashy ENB (Rudy). Funny story ; though a bit unsettling I must say. The lockpicking pose and the (added ?) effects were quite good, that being said ; always curious to know how watery effect were done.

 

Malicia : « Hey you ! You forgot to free her !! She's gonna have a baby now, you can't leave her ! »

The lock is nearly picked, plus he did leave a lockpick in her vag O_O.

10 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Lol  , this was good I like it.

Thanks, another one should be up today if I'm in the mood.

1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

Agree with Triloque. the guy shouldn't leave her after sex. I know you want to to make it funny and probably sarcastic but I hated the guy at the end. Wish she will get out of the cell and kill the bastard.

Well, the title is "No Hero" he is suppose to be an asshole.

1 hour ago, noobshi said:

The lock is nearly picked, plus he did leave a lockpick in her vag O_O.

And what if there's no keyhole at the otherside of the door ?

Anyway I must confess I failed to identify the object he left at the end. Still, don't think Malicia is gonna like him very much ; but it's kinda original to have an anti-hero on the spotlight for once.

51 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

And what if there's no keyhole at the otherside of the door ?

 

Anyway I must confess I failed to identify the object he left at the end. Still, don't think Malicia is gonna like him very much ; but it's kinda original to have an anti-hero on the spotlight for once.

What if he unlock it already, but pretend like it still lock ?

now i get it!

Thats what "Civil War Neutrality" is all about =D

Best Helgen start ever ^^

10 hours ago, noobshi said:

What if he unlock it already, but pretend like it still lock ?

Malicia : « Then he needs to confess his true feelings to her and acknowledge the child, yes.  »

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Well, the title is "No Hero" he is suppose to be an asshole.

I understand that and you did a great job. I just shared my feelings about his behaving. Didn't criticized the story at all

This entry was a true story fragment from my life before I met Prince. You did a good job showing how some guys are real assholes who uses their dicks rather then brain (if they it). Compliments for the story and I hope that certain males will learn a lesson from it that we aren't sex dolls for their pleasure. We are human beings too and have feelings.

Malicia: « Exactly. We're Ladies, yes. »

5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

This entry was a true story fragment from my life before I met Prince. You did a good job showing how some guys are real assholes who uses their dicks rather then brain (if they it). Compliments for the story and I hope that certain males will learn a lesson from it that we aren't sex dolls for their pleasure. We are human beings too and have feelings.

I'm not entirely sure this is the message the story does conveys, Eva, but I could be wrong.

7 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia: « Exactly. We're Ladies, yes. »

I'm not entirely sure this is the message the story does conveys, Eva, but I could be wrong.

I'm sure you have heard the story of the blind men and the elephant. There is the answer

9 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

This entry was a true story fragment from my life before I met Prince. You did a good job showing how some guys are real assholes who uses their dicks rather then brain (if they it). Compliments for the story and I hope that certain males will learn a lesson from it that we aren't sex dolls for their pleasure. We are human beings too and have feelings.

I do have something in mind for later on, but you're not going to like it though

56 minutes ago, noobshi said:

I do have something in mind for later on, but you're not going to like it though

Thank you for notification in advance and for your honesty. Highly appreciated. In that case, with all respect, I will not read your next entry for I don't like such stuff.

Wish you all the best and success in your story making.

Huh! I like the twists you've introduced to the traditional Skyrim story we've all played through before. Interesting stuff, heading over to Parts 2 and 3 right now.