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Here is an experiment with better speech bubbles I hope and sound effects to see if that adds anything. With only Faststone the effects are limited but workable I think. I also played around with changing my OC Pandora’s name to Lilly being I am liking the model Lilly 4k at the moment, she kind of looked like her anyway. But I think I will stick to Pandora. It’s a total sex romp, so nothing much more than that.

 

 

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I agree, the text is a little small. But I was able to read it.  That ending was funny.  Good job! 

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I could read it without problems.

Very good story. I had a good laugh at the end. :)

P.S. I'm glad to see your old avatar back.

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Text's a bit small for comfort but still readable without problems from my side. It's entertaining though, and I noticed quite a lot of sound effects compared to last time. ;)

Malicia : I'm very sorry, but those actresses aren't gaunt ! Not gaunt at all ! There is only one gaunt man there, and he isn't gaunt everywhere ; I want my cash refund !! =p

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There is a golden rule in doing comic shots: the speech bubbles need to be 15 % bigger than the applicants bewbs.... nah, just kidding.

 

Great work, thanks for sharing :P

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I agree, the text is a little small. But I was able to read it.  That ending was funny.  Good job! 

 

I am glad you liked it. Yes, I need to work on the bubbles more. I did not want to overpower the picture with big speech bubbles but I guess it just needs to be done.

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I could read it without problems.

Very good story. I had a good laugh at the end. :)

P.S. I'm glad to see your old avatar back.

 

I was hoping it would get a laugh, I thought it was a good way to end it.

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Text's a bit small for comfort but still readable without problems from my side. It's entertaining though, and I noticed quite a lot of sound effects compared to last time. ;)

 

Malicia : I'm very sorry, but those actresses aren't gaunt ! Not gaunt at all ! There is only one gaunt man there, and he isn't gaunt everywhere ; I want my cash refund !! =p

 

That is good you can read it but I agree it needs to be bigger for people overall. I tried sound effects to see if it adds anything, I saw other comic authors using them. And I am sorry Malicia I am the only gaunt one around here :)

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There is a golden rule in doing comic shots: the speech bubbles need to be 15 % bigger than the applicants bewbs.... nah, just kidding.

 

Great work, thanks for sharing :P

 

LOL, if I did that all you would see is a speech bubble. 

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