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Vamp's Night Out


The Gauntman

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Here is another standalone tale in Omi City. Some background- in the world deadra are another magic sensitive race like elves. But few know how to use it. Both the Mer and deadra have very small populations so that is why I don’t use them too much. A big thank you to Pajiman for making the face of Lynx. One of the cutest I have seen.

 

I think I’ve got the speech bubbles a better size and I made the sound effects bigger too. Let me know if that is about right or still needs to be worked on.

 

 

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It's an interesting universe you're building, similar to Blade's one in fact but with Skyrim's elements. And good job for the expressions (plus Lynx has a pretty face indeed), fights and ambience. Regarding the sound effects, I found that while they're rarely intruding in fighting scenes, their numbers can make them more intrusive in sex scenes.. so personally if there are a lot of them in one image if scale them down a bit : they complement the action, but the eternal problem is not to overlap it too significantly. :)

 

Anyway, great episode in all aspects ! Hope there will be more ! :D

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It's an interesting universe you're building, similar to Blade's one in fact but with Skyrim's elements. And good job for the expressions (plus Lynx has a pretty face indeed), fights and ambience. Regarding the sound effects, I found that while they're rarely intruding in fighting scenes, their numbers can make them more intrusive in sex scenes.. so personally if there are a lot of them in one image if scale them down a bit : they complement the action, but the eternal problem is not to overlap it too significantly. :)

 

Anyway, great episode in all aspects ! Hope there will be more ! :D

 

Thanks for your input. You always have good suggestions on these. I will work on the balance of the two on the next one. And you are right this one came from Blade for sure and a twist on the rescue.   

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Another great chapter, nice job.

 

Thanks Ripper, I hope to see Mrs. Iron soon. It was cool to see her in Tex's story. 

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Thanks for your input. You always have good suggestions on these. I will work on the balance of the two on the next one. And you are right this one came from Blade for sure and a twist on the rescue.

I had another though about it. You previously said using Fastone for your effects, which is primarily an image viewer if I'm not wrong.

 

I think you could go further with a real image editor. Photoshop isn't free, but Gimp is, and I suspect would have even more functionalities than the Photoshop I've got. Using Gimp would have allowed you to create a layer to hide the green box on the final screen, for example ; and the possibilities are endless. Just thought I would mention it to you. :)

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Thanks for your input. You always have good suggestions on these. I will work on the balance of the two on the next one. And you are right this one came from Blade for sure and a twist on the rescue.

I had another though about it. You previously said using Fastone for your effects, which is primarily an image viewer if I'm not wrong.

 

I think you could go further with a real image editor. Photoshop isn't free, but Gimp is, and I suspect would have even more functionalities than the Photoshop I've got. Using Gimp would have allowed you to create a layer to hide the green box on the final screen, for example ; and the possibilities are endless. Just thought I would mention it to you. :)

 

 

I will look at that. If it is easy pick up like FastStone I will give that a try.   

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