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Omi City Heat Part 2


The Gauntman

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This happens shortly after the arrest of the drug dealers. Carrie and Tigh heading to their hotel to stay the night before they head back to Omi City. And it all goes downhill from there.

 

 

 

 

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The Gauntman

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I hope the pictures are opening this time.

Guest

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Yea, this time it opened. I had a god laugh. Very well done. The scene in which they are arguing is awesome. I love the face expressions and body gesticulations. Excellent work.

The Gauntman

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Yea, this time it opened. I had a god laugh. Very well done. The scene in which they are arguing is awesome. I love the face expressions and body gesticulations. Excellent work.

 

That's good. Thank you for telling me. I know what happened, I messed up the post with the wrong size pictures. It was fun trying to find the right poses for the argument.

Guest

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And you did wonderful job. BTW - I like your new avatar but I loved your previous one form the "Priest" movie much better. It suited you somehow. :)

ther1pper

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Very nice, can't wait for the next part.

Tirloque

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Nicely brought, you're good for dialogs and setups. Can't wait for the rest too ! ^^

Swiftstep

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The size of the letters is a bit small. It's okay when opening them in a separate tab, on the page of the hosts, but here, by expanding the spoiler, I find them too small. But my eyesight is lacking. Nevertheless, just thought to give an opinion.

 

It is a nice work, as always. The new guy is a bit lacking of character. She is feisty and bossy. That's fine. He could use a bit more profile, unless you already considered that, and put it in the next part.

The Gauntman

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Thank you all, it is always good to hear from you. I am working on the last part and hope to have it out soon.

The Gauntman

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The size of the letters is a bit small. It's okay when opening them in a separate tab, on the page of the hosts, but here, by expanding the spoiler, I find them too small. But my eyesight is lacking. Nevertheless, just thought to give an opinion.

 

It is a nice work, as always. The new guy is a bit lacking of character. She is feisty and bossy. That's fine. He could use a bit more profile, unless you already considered that, and put it in the next part.

 

I am still working with the text part. I do need to play around with it more to find a good size for the bubbles. One thing that can help is use CTRL+ mouse wheel  to make the screen bigger for now. Tigh is mainly the embodiment of sexual frustration, and you are right he is more low-key than Carrie. This was done because I wanted him to explode in a big way.   

Guest

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Wow this is so cool, I know its in Skyrim but wow great wokr. Looking forward to next part

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