Jump to content
  • entries
    29
  • comments
    159
  • views
    17,005

Omi City Heat Part 1


The Gauntman

902 views

Going to give text a try, thank you to whom it was that recommended Faststone. Let me know if the text is too small or should try something different. This is inspired by a movie I saw when I was a teenager called Arizona Heat. Thank you to dwcool62 for his amazing follower Carrie that was a dead ringer for Denise Crosby. A big thank you to Sinius for all the resources I used for this.

 

 

 

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

image.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

7 Comments


Recommended Comments

Awesome work! I liked the captions. The story flowed really well with them, yet you didn't use so many as to take away from your style. A solid improvement overall in my opinion. Hope to see more! 

Link to comment

Good work. Although you didn't need to put the dialogue balloons, thanks for adding them. Nice story even without sex.

Link to comment

Thank you all. I did not want to use too much text and overdo it. Sometimes I feel the creator can get very wordy, but I can understand why we all want to tell the story as much as possible.

Link to comment

Nice work indeed, and great « night bar » ambiance. :)

Good work. Although you didn't need to put the dialogue balloons, thanks for adding them. Nice story even without sex.

Translation : he is utterly disappointed but will forgive you if there is sex in the next  arrest operation. :D

Link to comment

Nice work indeed, and great « night bar » ambiance. :)

Good work. Although you didn't need to put the dialogue balloons, thanks for adding them. Nice story even without sex.

Translation : he is utterly disappointed but will forgive you if there is sex in the next  arrest operation. :D

 

That goes without saying :)

Link to comment
×
×
  • Create New...