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The End of Serialization (as we know it)...


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So apologies for A (ripping off a title from South Park) and B...

 

...to any readers/followers of blog who actually liked or wanted to know more of the "serialized" (episode to episode continuous story) Dragon Blessed/Fire Blessed ect. Before reading below know that I feel really bad, especially if you followed blog specifically BECAUSE it was serialized which isn't common on this site.

 

But life changes and just general free time have changed for me...so I unfortunately cannot do them anymore (at least probably not for next few years and after that maybe no point). I did consider just not posting in blog anymore since I failed to keep it consistent so often and now have to abandon even the "meat and potatoes" chapters of blog.

 

But then I thought...maybe if I am not trying to make some big episodic manga...and just do things like the "peril comic" Delias Dance (a few complete one shot stories only per year)...then maybe I can handle blog after all.

 

So then, rather than abandon this whole thing completely...I am going to take blog in that direction. Just a nice big comic that is a few entries and done as a story. And this is easier on free time as I don't have this feeling I have to get chapters out as often. But, I know it's a very different direction and so I understand if some don't like it. Especially, some may not like it because some these comics are more focused on the torments (whippings ect) than tales that just have more "normal" sexual content in them (though they will have that as well). Though...I am not averse to still making an occasional one shot "vanilla" comic (just a wild sex romp I guess)

 

 

I apologize for anyone who was enjoying the tales "Dragon Blessed" ect. I can tell you how it was all going to go if there's any interest (I had a rough plan from beginning to end). See a comment below...but be warned it was a very rough hodgepodge of ideas

 

And I promise that if I am doing peril tales I will at some point bring back characters from prior tales. They will just be short tales in different regions (Delias for instance was "Yokuda"). My next one is in Hammerfell (see a few preview images of chapter covers below). After that...not sure.

 

Anyway...this is just the plan now and again sorry blog has changed so much. 

 

Below are three covers then from upcoming new "peril" comic. It will be a 6 chapter in total story featuring Redguards/Alik'r.

 

Spoiler

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RamasesII

Posted

Liked the "Blessed" blog alot, will miss Dragon the most.  Would've liked to have seen her tear apart the Emperess hehe  <maybe even a lil Gram Rape>

Looking forward to what you find time for in the future.

 

Keep on keeping on.

 

R

hana120

Posted

No worries.
We can understand.

dryuya

Posted (edited)

2 hours ago, RamasesII said:

Liked the "Blessed" blog alot, will miss Dragon the most.  Would've liked to have seen her tear apart the Emperess hehe  <maybe even a lil Gram Rape>

Looking forward to what you find time for in the future.

 

Keep on keeping on.

 

R

 

 

TY, if it helps...

 

Spoiler

Final showdown in Dragon Blessed was going to be in Imperial City (after many things happened first and Skyrim/Whiterun invading the city) Ludi with all powers unlocked stabbing Elisabeth (who gets "consumed" and basically takes Potemas form)....stabbing her right throne the Ruby Throne.

 

But there was going to be a LOT to get to that point. It was all that stuff that was in between I am not able to do anymore lol

 

 

And if you are a glutton for punishment and want to hear all of the ideas I had (its sort of just a stream of consciousness though so most of it nonsensical unless chapters were actually made)...

 

Spoiler

 General plot outline of what I wanted to do in Dragon Blessed (though I wasn't sure if all would even be doable using Skyrim game as my tool)...this was just my smattering of ideas leading up to conclusion. Most of these are just the plot stuff...not about all the sex ect scenes happening during it all.

 

"Windhelm Arc"

 

Spoiler

Was about to end, Ludi would have fought Velrosi and lost, been tortured by Empress ect but left to live (because Empress wants Alduin released first)

 

Vivace taken back to Empire and sends Gram to Hidielle to lock away. Vivace has a peril chapter

 

Ludi decides after this to start rebellion using the will, marrying Edan off to Whiterun and first, getting Gram back and bringing down Hidielle. 

 

Ludi gives up seat of Jarl and gives it temporarily to Eleanor. She and Edan and company leave home behind 

 

 

"Riften Arc"

 

Spoiler

Whiterun story from one year prior gets told (Ludi meeting Vivace, killing Viken finally and meeting her ex boyfriend "Kritsoff")

 

Hidelles minions attack the White Phial but are ran off by Ludi and company...vow to them that Toccata will bleed for Hidielle eventually.

 

Ludi, Edan, Toccata, Amadeuas and Amilee head to Riften...meet Ludis old lover Kristoff who introduces her to new Grey Fox (a thief girl). Edan goes to claim the will (has sex again with Kate on the way there and the lady who holds the will) Edan gets captured by Hidielle and used as well

 

They steal some Runic Weapons back from Hidielle and save Edan

 

Hidelle captures Toccata...Toccatas full backstory given

 

Final part of Arc, they go to Blackreach and have a series of fights. Toccata and the Grey Fox kill Hidielle with the runic nightingale blade...Amadeus and Amilee fight that doll "Mango" (I showed in chapter 4) but cure her corruption

 

FINAL BATTLE- Ludi fights and kills the weapon of Chaos the "Dunestrider" in Blackreach Depths after learning "Fus Ro Dah"

 

They leave Riften for next stage, Whiterun and marrying Edan off and gaining support of Balgruufs. When she leaves Amadeus warns her of Grams runes...and that Alduin is actually going to break out by consuming/taking over Ludi herself.

 

Final scene of this arc is as Ludi is riding away... saying goodbye to Toccata finally and showing her she learned the symbol for "sisters"

 

 

"Whiterun Arc"

 

Spoiler

Whiterun is plagued by some unseen darkness after death of old Jarl Balgruuf, his daughter Lette Balgruuf is taking the throne but her advisor (Sir Harigold) is being influenced in the shadows by Nocturnals avatar (who is the bar maid "Sciara" shown in prior past chapters... consumed to look different)

 

Edan, Ludi and Kristoff all go to Whiterun, gates are locked while new Jarl being crowned. Sigurn (now full grown) shows up and jumps off building again but still falls on her face. Tells them that Erik (her father) is soon to pass away, but has enough health to get gates open for them tomorrow.

 

They separate and Edan goes off to sleep around before being married off, Ludi and ex do the same. Edan meets back up with his mentor (the werewolf Veruca) and spends the night with her in a werewolf den

 

Ludi meets Sigurn and new companion lover in bar...night where a foursome happens. The next day they go to Whiterun silently.

 

A reunion of Companions...Ludi meets Valka again but loses to her in spar. Valka tells them of a mission for the companions by Lette Balgruuf to investigate darkness taking over Whiterun.

 

They go on mission but its a trap to get them out of Whiterun...Sciara as Nocturnal activates a weapon of chaos (the flip side of Whiteruns Gilderglean) that makes dark thoughts consume any in Whiterun who have them.

 

Ludi and co break out of trap...head to Whiterun to stop Nocturnals avatar. Some series of fights occur. Final showdown Ludi fights her mentor Valka again who Sciara personally consumed with darkness (the strongest warrior in Whiterun vs Ludi).

 

FINAL BATTLE- Ludis battle with Valka her old mentor is intense but Ludi does not use powers, wanting to finally beat Valka as herself. She does and in the process erases the darkness from Valka.

 

Edan and Lette Balgruuf together break Sciaras darkness and reflip the Gilderglean...cutting Sciara with the Sword of Whiterun. Sciara apologies in last moments, recalling her rape by Vikens bandits and how it made her take on Nocturnal and become consumed. She wishes them luck in their quest to kill remaining Daedra


 

"High Hrothgar Arc"

 

Spoiler

Ludi hears call from the mountain. Is given Ulfrics last note from Sister Alice. Describes how Alduin was sealed. Ulfircs plan was that his heir one day take over Alduins powers, not the reverse. And with them lay waste to the Empire.

 

Edan begins to "consummate" planned marriage to Lette Balgruuf

 

Ludi meets last living greybeard... a valkyrie "Wifyr" and the avatar of Jyggalag whose line made it their goal with Ulfric to bring imbalanced Tamriel to order and help end the Empire. Learns more about her powers and how to tame Alduin despite his protestations.

 

Valka is captured by the Dre'aal/Velrosi...word gets to Ludi. Ludi battles Queen of Dre'aal Vayne (shown briefly in a prior chapter) but Vayne runs off when fight becomes too difficult). Vayne reveals she is avatar of Sheogorath and in her madness consumed form kills the last greybeard when escaping. Ludi is sent to Solstheim to save Valka

 

FINAL BATTLE - Ludi vs Vayne the queen of the Dre'aal and vatar of Sheogorath

 

 

"Solsthiem Arc"

 

Spoiler

Rough ideas here...Ludi goes to save Valka...fight Vayne (Velrosis sister and queen of the Dre'aal). Saves Valka after accessing next Dragon shout. But is trapped at end, Valka is killed by Velrosi...Ludi captured and brought to capital

 

Ludi spends many chapters in Imperial dungeon and even witnesses Vivaces execution...tortured ect in an attempt to break her and make Ulfrics last heir publically claim obedience to Elisabeth. Also...the tortures are there to get her to call out Alduin...who Elisbaeth wants to be released as her own "Weapon of Chaos"

 

Ludi is eventually freed by allies...has a final showdown with Velrosi, in her anger almost releases last shout. Hair turns black and she kills Velrosi once and for all.

 

FINAL BATTLE - Ludi vs Velrosi avatar of Molag Bal

 

 

"Imperial City Arc"

 

Spoiler

More rough notes...Ludi while recovering from the experience in the Dre'aal dungeons comes to terms with Alduin. Knowing the way to beat Elisabeth/Potema is together...she finally convinces him to give up old goals of eating the world and help her fix it instead. She releases last shout and Alduin flies free in the Prison realm...vowing to finally work with her.

 

During this time, Elisabeth kills the true Emperor (her father) and declares herself god queen of Nirn

 

Together with all the resources they gained (the will bought them a new army...Skyrim unites after all other tales complete) The foprces of Ludi/Whiterun ect storm Imperial City together.

 

Elisabeth decides to let Potema consume her when they are at her gates. Final showdown is her with all of the powers Potema holds vs Ludi with her Alduin powers now fully controlled. Ludi stabs her on her throne. Elisabeth asks her at the end if she will really make Nirn better, or just become the monster she was...subjugating the Imperials.

 

FINAL BATTLE - Ludi/Alduin vs Elsiabeth/Potema

 

Ludi and co decide at end to make final truce with Imperials and the Imperial/Stormcloak conflict officially ends.

 

Edan goes on to stay married to Jarl Lette Balgruuf. Thier union keeps Skyrim stronger for years to come

 

Toccata spends rest of days with Grey Fox of Riften, doing missions together (and...being lesbian lovers I guess)

 

Amilee and Amadeus go back to White Phial, Amilee one day takes over shop

 

Sigurn and Companions go back to Whiterun, Sigurn remains Harbinger. Valka is memorialized as the "Mother of Skyrims High Queen"

 

Ludi and Kristoff stay together...Ludi returns to Windhelm to take the seat as Jarl and new "High Queen of Skyrim". Ludi spends her years after studying the blade Gram...and trying to find a way to allow Alduin true freedom from it in his own form...neither consuming the other. On her death bed as an old woman in epilogue, she does this and Alduin flies free in the real world at the end, vowing to become a protector of Nirn from then on.

 

 

 

"Fill in Arcs"

 

 

Spoiler

I had not made ideas here yet or where I would insert these arcs...but was going to find a way to get arcs in Winterhold (mages Melia Hyla ect), Solitude (finish Cybele and Secundas tales) and Markarth (resolve the forsworn stuff and Shandars full backstory)...possibly get each place to unite with Whiterun and as well in each arc kill off the Daedra and Weapons of Chaos plaguing each (Mephala, Sanguine, Vaermina, Hermaeus Mora)

 

The necromancers of Winterhold were going to free none other than Serana (a weapon of Chaso)...locked away by Hyla in WInterholds new Midden. Melia would be revealed as a Youkda herself but possessing their most ancient fire magic. Hyla would agree to train her to use it as best she could. Mephala would kill Caretaker Bell and break all of Seranas restrains. In last battle, Melia would pilot bring the Aedra Sphere (a runic weapon itself of sorts) down upon Morgana/Mephala (foreshadowed in early chapters of Fire Blessed)

 

Secundas mom Anja would be freed and even kill Vaerminas avatar herself (Vaerminas avatar was actually the court wizard of Solitude, Not Delia)...and freeze Solitude again. Would have been brought down by Secunda, Delia and a ballad from Cybele that induces an eternal dream state.

 

In Markarth, the Jarl was a genius girl (Hermaues Moras avatar) who was subjugating the Forsworn...using them as laborers to dig beneath Cidna Mine and help free the "Black Numidian" (giant dwemer machine). Unsure how final battle would go for this

 

An Arc with Dark Brotherhood and some Akavir girls, Mehrunes Dagon involved. He somehow is using his razor of pain (another weapon of Chaos) to inflict pain upon skyrim.

 

An Arc with Wood Elves in Falkreath...Jarl of Falkreath is Avatar of Hircine and torments the Bosmer. Y'fres lost land is in this and a fight with queen of wood elves who unleashes the roots of the lost land (another weapon of Chaos) upon Skyrim

 

An Arc on Kates ship...to Summerset Isles. A treasure hunt arc with them being guided by a High Elf who is avatar of Meridia. Avatar of Perytite somehow involved.

 

 

 

 

But now...rather than all that epic/crazy mess above...just going to show women in peril...yeah

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dryuya

Posted

1 hour ago, hana120 said:

No worries.
We can understand.

 

TY and I know you had some questions during blog... if you feel like it all are answered in above rough outline of what I had planned.

hana120

Posted

9 hours ago, dryuya said:

 

TY and I know you had some questions during blog... if you feel like it all are answered in above rough outline of what I had planned.

I read the spoilers you posted.

That would have been a hell of a job indeed.

RamasesII

Posted

Holy crap that was alot of stuff you had planned.  I can see how it would look pretty daunting.

 

 

WhatTheElf

Posted

Completely understand,

 

There needs to be more hours in the day!

dryuya

Posted

6 hours ago, hana120 said:

I read the spoilers you posted.

That would have been a hell of a job indeed.

 

4 hours ago, RamasesII said:

Holy crap that was alot of stuff you had planned.  I can see how it would look pretty daunting.

 

 

 

4 hours ago, WhatTheElf said:

Completely understand,

 

There needs to be more hours in the day!

 

 

Yep... And would have done it all over course of a few years. But just too much to sink time into now. 

 

In a way... Maybe the one shot/short stories will be better. No huge plot to follow and a focus more on sexual content. Depending on tastes this may be preferable. And when I can release them (maybe every few months or so) more time can be spent tweaking them to be better. 

Jay-Omms

Posted

Yeah time is a hard thing to come by these days many of us got work, kids and elderly to take care of that's why I've been too hesitant on continuing my own blog. :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup: 

dryuya

Posted

1 hour ago, Jay-Omms said:

Yeah time is a hard thing to come by these days many of us got work, kids and elderly to take care of that's why I've been too hesitant on continuing my own blog. :sweat_smile::heart:;):thumbsup: 

 

 

yeah my work has now started to suck. It was cool before so much downtime and so I just churned out Skyrim porn comics lol. And daughter starting to homeschool. It sucks because I kind of did want to complete it...but that last chapter where I made the fight scene and it took forever and all the time restraints were happening kind of ruined what was even fun about it.

 

But maybe now I just think smaller...an occasional comic every few months or so only.

Rattlesnark

Posted (edited)

I'm sad to see the saga end abruptly, but I wholly understand the amount of commitment needed to see it to its end - considering how much content goes into each episode, how much we've had to get to this point, and more so from your planned rest-of-the-story. Alas life happens and it comes first!

I'm happy we get to know what comes next up until the very end at least, rather than be left with the cliffhanger forever. It's impressive just how well thought out the whole story is, all the way to the conclusion.

 

Thank you for sharing with us all this while. Looking forward to the standalone short stories. Happy to hear that we may well see more of your work still in this capacity! I'm a bit of a happy-ending fan myself, so Delia's Dance was a tad bit harsh for me story-wise, but I do still enjoy reading the story and enjoying the screenshots. I know for sure there are many fans of the niche that absolutely would adore seeing more of it!

Best wishes always.

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dryuya

Posted

1 hour ago, Rattlesnark said:

I'm sad to see the saga end abruptly, but I wholly understand the amount of commitment needed to see it to its end - considering how much content goes into each episode, how much we've had to get to this point, and more so from your planned rest-of-the-story. Alas life happens and it comes first!

I'm happy we get to know what comes next up until the very end at least, rather than be left with the cliffhanger forever. It's impressive just how well thought out the whole story is, all the way to the conclusion.

 

Thank you for sharing with us all this while. Looking forward to the standalone short stories. Happy to hear that we may well see more of your work still in this capacity! I'm a bit of a happy-ending fan myself, so Delia's Dance was a tad bit harsh for me story-wise, but I do still enjoy reading the story and enjoying the screenshots. I know for sure there are many fans of the niche that absolutely would adore seeing more of it!

Best wishes always.

 

 

Thank you. In truth I liked the big long chapter to chapter story more myself. The story is always more fun to tell that way and imo even the porn scenes are better (with characters followed more long term... I just find it more impactful idk)

 

And maybe if the situation ever changes I bring it back (with a recap on what's happened so far). But I just think maybe it's not practical for me right now. 

 

As for the short stories. I guess they are really only required to A. be short stories/less of a time commitment and B. Tickle my fancy. They don't always have to have a bad end. In fact next one (Lash of the Alikr) I am planning a "good end"... Eventually after much suffering lol. 

hana120

Posted

Your blog is great and your story of Dragon blessed was very good.
Your only big concerns are that:
1) One moment you were all over the place. You wanted to create several stories in a single blog. And that's hard to forgive, as it's very hard to manage.
In the beginning, you started out with a nice story. That of Ludi and the Empress Elisabeth.
The avatar story was enough. You created the Counts of the 4th Era right afterwards, with Secunda and her mother Anja, the dancer and so on. 
Which started to lose you.
2) You bit off more than you could chew (I don't know if that's the right expression), in short. You set out on too big a long-term project.
As a result, you started to get bored with it and totally lost the desire to continue, all the while running out of time.

 

I made the same mistake with one of my blogs and characters, Agarmir. I started out with something simple and ended up with a blog where you follow all your adventures with several mods. I was able to finish it....except that there were a lot of things I'd planned in chapters that I didn't put in.

When you're writing a Skyrim story on a blog, you need to set yourself a goal or two, but not too big, and stick to it and not go off on several things at once.
Otherwise, you run out of time and end up giving up.
That's what I'm doing with my blog on Luxia.

 

I started with a simple story on Dawnguard, innovating a little, then on Coldharbour with the Dawnguard mod.
Adding a few simple things at the end.
Then I took a break. And later, I chose to do a story on Akavir without doing the mod quests.

dryuya

Posted (edited)

3 hours ago, hana120 said:

Your blog is great and your story of Dragon blessed was very good.
Your only big concerns are that:
1) One moment you were all over the place. You wanted to create several stories in a single blog. And that's hard to forgive, as it's very hard to manage.
In the beginning, you started out with a nice story. That of Ludi and the Empress Elisabeth.
The avatar story was enough. You created the Counts of the 4th Era right afterwards, with Secunda and her mother Anja, the dancer and so on. 
Which started to lose you.
2) You bit off more than you could chew (I don't know if that's the right expression), in short. You set out on too big a long-term project.
As a result, you started to get bored with it and totally lost the desire to continue, all the while running out of time.

 

I made the same mistake with one of my blogs and characters, Agarmir. I started out with something simple and ended up with a blog where you follow all your adventures with several mods. I was able to finish it....except that there were a lot of things I'd planned in chapters that I didn't put in.

When you're writing a Skyrim story on a blog, you need to set yourself a goal or two, but not too big, and stick to it and not go off on several things at once.
Otherwise, you run out of time and end up giving up.
That's what I'm doing with my blog on Luxia.

 

I started with a simple story on Dawnguard, innovating a little, then on Coldharbour with the Dawnguard mod.
Adding a few simple things at the end.
Then I took a break. And later, I chose to do a story on Akavir without doing the mod quests.

 

 

I can agree with all...the other tales were a bad idea. But more...trying to get a bunch of interweaved stuff together like that was (unknown to me at the time) just a bad idea.

 

I created a mess and so maybe this is also a chance to reboot.

 

I think in that regard...the short stories just being simpler one shots is best. Still set in 6th era so I don't have to worry about using current lore as much.

 

Definitely never will get complicated or have continuity or character consistency issues. Whole thing told and done in 2-3 blog entries then move on. Backstory and character delivered in opening, peril/lewd/sex scenario plays out and concludes. Done. And after "Lash of the Alikr" I can get a short story featuring Ludi...because I know I didn't showcase her in much lewd stuff in the attempted Tale.

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ElderOGCS

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What are the outfits used for the girls if you don't mind me asking, mainly the open side leather armor/outfit.

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