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NeoSato

Entry posted by NeoSato in Visual Novel / Doujinshi / Manga

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Hey guys, I know it has been a very long time since the last "The Paladin's Daughter" update on that novel but life happens and I needed to not focus on it. I finally got the time to come back to my writing and to be honest, I completely lost where I was going with the whole story. So instead while I try to scrounge up what I can to make it up to you guys, I instead made a short story about a voluntarily abducted Nord protagonist 🤣

 

I also went with a different approach on how I design the panels! lmk if I should go back to the normal design or if you guys like the new design more! :3

 

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As always I hope you enjoyed this very short story of my Nordic character!!

Thank you all for sticking around and if there are any suggestions or characters you'd like me to use, just lmk :))

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RamasesII

RamasesII

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Overall I found it very good, only thing I would say in the negative is the text font/colors made it a little hard to read, but not impossible. Looking forward to more of your work :)

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NeoSato

NeoSato

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2 hours ago, RamasesII said:

Overall I found it very good, only thing I would say in the negative is the text font/colors made it a little hard to read, but not impossible. Looking forward to more of your work :)

yea! i read it AFTER i freaking rendered all of the pages and realised it.... but it was TOO LATE T.T

but thank you for your feedback!

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Rattlesnark

Rattlesnark

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Welcome back and thank you for the chapter! Same sentiment as Ramases above, the font for the narration text is really tough to read, especially when it's against a black background. Fun story!

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NeoSato

NeoSato

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3 hours ago, Rattlesnark said:

Welcome back and thank you for the chapter! Same sentiment as Ramases above, the font for the narration text is really tough to read, especially when it's against a black background. Fun story!

I will definently do better for the next one! Thank you for your suggestion and advice ^^

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Vexing Vixen

Vexing Vixen

Posted

Quite hard to read but still was yummy. Lucky girl she is >;3

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NeoSato

NeoSato

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2 hours ago, Vexing Rabbit said:

Quite hard to read but still was yummy. Lucky girl she is >;3

I know I'm so sorry! It was MUCH easier to read during editing. I guess when it rendered the transition from 1080p to 4k messed up the pixels QQ

NeoSato

NeoSato

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2 hours ago, TheNooboosimmer said:

Nice comic ♡

Thank you! Working on a new one currently! 

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