to be slightly nitpicky on grammar I've seen in other entries you use the word "depence" when it should be "depends." Not a big deal at all, but thought I'd mention it so you know for the future since it seems to be one of the recurring words that get lost in translation.

Very clever way to get rid of harry's curse by the way. Didn't see that cumming at all.

43 minutes ago, yorpers said:

to be slightly nitpicky on grammar I've seen in other entries you use the word "depence" when it should be "depends." Not a big deal at all, but thought I'd mention it so you know for the future since it seems to be one of the recurring words that get lost in translation.

FML

Noted, thank you =o

44 minutes ago, yorpers said:

Very clever way to get rid of harry's curse by the way. Didn't see that cumming at all.

Right?

To extend the nitpicking:

Not really sure what that sentence is meant to tell us: "Once we found it, we can out an and to this together."?

Also, why the plural? Harry is the only friend that could be tagging along.

All in all, the proofreading paid dividends though (not sure a native speaker will agree 100%, OTOH many native speakers are the worst offenders. 😛)

That being dealt with. Appears like you intend to make A. from the biggest A-hole on Nirn into the typical, somewhat relatable anti-hero. I don't buy it yet, nor do I like it. Being not relatable was the one thing that made his escapades sufferable, also made him kinda unique.

Harald is definitely a Dork, remains to be seen how long it takes for his new girlfriend to take advantage of him. That said I kinda like her, might actually like her if not for those atrocious ears (yes I know could be way, way worse, still ... at that size they should be moveable and/or more towards the top of the head). Given that cropping ears isn't vogue any longer, I doubt it will be easy to find a vet that can take care of that. 😛 

Oh boy, oh boy! Chapter was amazing! There was a few reference i recognized there

Sarah is so lucky having a redguard beauty as her servant....also she enjoys teasing the men (and women) around her!

Lapis is one cute altmer, i'm personally glad she did "that" with Harrald, also glad Arlan didn't corrupted her. (Are they gonna be a couple as lovers or friends with benefits?)

Silas seemed a bad guy from the beginning (He gave me that Sauron vibes with the whole deceiving act and that sacrifice stuff)

I like how Maari and Harrald has this "brother-sister" bond. (Speaking of him, damn he's packin there!)

I saw some "grammar problem" but for me -who is not a native english speaker- it looks like a funny accent!

BTW every time kitten says: "You are a wizard Harry!" my mind thinking about Harrald receiving an invitation letter from the College of Winterhold, with Tolfdir as his master and becoming the Arch-mage. (Hmm....how does the mage ladies of the college would treat Harrald there? Faralda maybe tease him a little, Nyria would use her beauty to do her some favor etc.)

Okay one last thing, this is my overall ratings of all your chapters:

Oh, damn, we got everything in here:

Hagride lines, session lex, Kitty getting raild and Arlan going SkullsForTheSkullThrone mode. 

Classic Gukahn. Great job! 

15 hours ago, Talesien said:

Not really sure what that sentence is meant to tell us: "Once we found it, we can out an and to this together."?

god damn it.. See? This is what I was talking about. there are always some things you just blurr out x.x it was supposed to be "Once we found it, we can put an END to this together."
Meaning the whole ordeal would be solved once they got what Silas was mentioning.

15 hours ago, Talesien said:

Also, why the plural? Harry is the only friend that could be tagging along.

This is not a spell error, tho maybe a grammatic fail?

He is supposed to mean both of them. Maybe I should've wrote "Are you two frends coming" Or "Are both of you coming?" x,x

15 hours ago, Talesien said:

All in all, the proofreading paid dividends though (not sure a native speaker will agree 100%, OTOH many native speakers are the worst offenders. 😛)

Yeah if they do it themselves that's true xD but we are not better in that regard. At least I am not. I very, very often missuse the Comma >_>

15 hours ago, Talesien said:

That being dealt with. Appears like you intend to make A. from the biggest A-hole on Nirn into the typical, somewhat relatable anti-hero. I don't buy it yet, nor do I like it. Being not relatable was the one thing that made his escapades sufferable, also made him kinda unique.

Naah not really. I just try to implement the idea that he is less "Arlan" when he is near his family also not to lewding every helpless Woman with a pulse is something that won't happen very often. But I try to make it count for the important chars I intend to use like Lapis for example. I wanted to have her a thing for Harald and disliked the idea of Harald getting Daddys sloppy seconds >_>

So apart from his motive changing slightly he will still act as horny as ever in most scenarios 🤔 Maybe with a bit more trying to be nicer at times

15 hours ago, Talesien said:

Harald is definitely a Dork, remains to be seen how long it takes for his new girlfriend to take advantage of him.

I believe everyone around him always will take advantage in some way.. He is that kind of a guy people stop realizing they do it because it will become a habit to relly on him bringing out the trash >_> poor dude.

At least he gets a few nice views out of it

15 hours ago, Talesien said:

might actually like her if not for those atrocious ears (yes I know could be way, way worse, still ... at that size they should be moveable and/or more towards the top of the head). Given that cropping ears isn't vogue any longer, I doubt it will be easy to find a vet that can take care of that. 😛 

How often did you criizes my poor elven girls by their ears now? Q_Q leave my knife ears alone! (xP)

2 hours ago, bdmt said:

Oh boy, oh boy! Chapter was amazing! There was a few reference i recognized there

Thank you ^^

2 hours ago, bdmt said:

Sarah is so lucky having a redguard beauty as her servant....also she enjoys teasing the men (and women) around her!

mind you, this maid is only one of them.. Imagine her to have a harem of her own and now imagine Ulfric being totally oblivious of it o_o

2 hours ago, bdmt said:

Lapis is one cute altmer, i'm personally glad she did "that" with Harrald, also glad Arlan didn't corrupted her. (Are they gonna be a couple as lovers or friends with benefits?)

Same. Arlan can't corrupt everyone around him. this is one big thing I wanted to change >_>

And yeah, Lapis' last sentence foreshadows it a bit that they will end up in a serious relationship, as to show the big differences between Harald and Arlan.

That she dislikes Arlan quite a bit makes it even better for me xD

(And their relationships makes way for Arlan snacking Ella >_>)

2 hours ago, bdmt said:

Silas seemed a bad guy from the beginning (He gave me that Sauron vibes with the whole deceiving act and that sacrifice stuff)

I like how Maari and Harrald has this "brother-sister" bond. (Speaking of him, damn he's packin there!)

Eye. I liked to use a Follower mod for a change tho. Probably will try to find a few more male followers for these purposes, since I like making the girls myself for various reasons.

And Maari and Harald are a match made in heaven xD

2 hours ago, bdmt said:

I saw some "grammar problem" but for me -who is not a native english speaker- it looks like a funny accent!

thanks ^^ But if you ever see something very big that annoys you, just say it. i can only get better if people point stuff out ^^

And your idea with winterhold is actually pretty funny 🤔 He won't get laid there intentionally but I really like to tease him. We might get something like that sometimes even if just as a small side gig^^

And yes, Boobies my friend.. Wait till we meet Zuri and her extended family again.. I made a fourth redguard.. Arlan will be living in paradies >_>

Riften going to be lewd as fuck!

39 minutes ago, Crw0 said:

Oh, damn, we got everything in here:

Hagride lines, session lex, Kitty getting raild and Arlan going SkullsForTheSkullThrone mode. 

Classic Gukahn. Great job! 

thank you

Nice work my boy you sure know how to run a fountain of nosebleed...

Nice work with effects and stuff you know sexaffects.  Speaking of which.... What's this one with the daedric symbols? 

Lewdness, check. Kitty doing the Sexy, check. Harry bashing, check. Gore, check. Decapitations (aka Gore++), check. Sofia doing Sofia-things, check. Arlan being Arlan, check.

Chapter approved!

8 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Yeah if they do it themselves that's true xD but we are not better in that regard. At least I am not. I very, very often missuse the Comma >_>

Aye, I'm guilty of creating German style multi-clause sentences in English all the time. Anyway, at least we got a legit excuse.

8 hours ago, Gukahn said:

How often did you criizes my poor elven girls by their ears now? Q_Q leave my knife ears alone! (xP)

Not, until you stop offending my sense of aesthetics!

19 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Nice work with effects and stuff you know sexaffects.  Speaking of which.... What's this one with the daedric symbols? 

Thanks^^

Its from https://www.nexusmods.com/skyrimspecialedition/mods/42167

the Rune rings, they take the textures of your enchantments on. So depending on what you are using it will look different

18 hours ago, myriad said:

Chapter approved!

glad you liked it

14 hours ago, Talesien said:

Aye, I'm guilty of creating German style multi-clause sentences in English all the time. Anyway, at least we got a legit excuse.

That is true.. xD

14 hours ago, Talesien said:

Not, until you stop offending my sense of aesthetics!

Never!!! 🧐 

2 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Never!!! 🧐 

Fine! 😈
(Oh, und Satzzeichen sind keine Rudeltiere. 😛)

1 minute ago, Talesien said:

Fine! 😈

I made something today for you, to appeas the Talesien xD

2 minutes ago, Talesien said:

(Oh, und Satzzeichen sind keine Rudeltiere. 😛)

Aber sie fühlen sich im rudel doch so wohl 😮 

2 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

I made something today for you, to appeas the Talesien xD

Hmm, peace offering accepted. Although for a second I thought you are trolling me, the hand looked like she is holding a smoke. Luckily she does not, nobody likes kissing an ashtray after all.

22 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Hmm, peace offering accepted. Although for a second I thought you are trolling me, the hand looked like she is holding a smoke. Luckily she does not, nobody likes kissing an ashtray after all.

*Smokes in sadness* xD

Good Ghukan Quality work
Good Stuff!

Need more

14 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Thanks^^

Its from https://www.nexusmods.com/skyrimspecialedition/mods/42167

the Rune rings, they take the textures of your enchantments on. So depending on what you are using it will look different

What the hell?... I have it already installed. I wonder how I missed this.  

On 3/12/2024 at 10:57 PM, Nonseen said:

Good Ghukan Quality work
Good Stuff!

Need more

thank you^^

I am working on it 🫡

On 3/13/2024 at 5:00 AM, Jay-Omms said:

 

What the hell?... I have it already installed. I wonder how I missed this.  

I had this mod for a long time but had enchantments invisible in my former modlist. I actually thought the rune rings where bugged 😅

by the way, what is vagr re relating to ypur previous story with vagr as MC ? a full redone ?

13 hours ago, Delzaron said:

by the way, what is vagr re relating to ypur previous story with vagr as MC ? a full redone ?

The later, it is a complete redo of the story, many Characters from the older One will be making apperances or getting similiar roles from the original story but apart from the characters, some world rules have changed too like I try to explain in the small Kitten and Harry scenes at the end of the start of the chapters ^^

So everything that happened in Vargr until Re isn't relevant to the story anymore and never happened in Vargr Re^^

See it as me rebooting things I regret a lot doing. 😅 Like Maari and Arlans relationship for example that is entirely different in the reboot