Wow, Faendal gave up so easily. Did you intentionally make him such a jerk, or did you just not want to be repetitive and have him offer several times?

I hope something goes right for Sirrae ?

(Also the quote function in comments looks like two eyes, hehe)

thank you nice story again , very well done , i hope you keep going with your stories  ?

Hmmm. Faendal taking of two draugrs in one blow felt a bit far fetched, but the whole fight was much more developed than in previous entries, which was appreciable. Sirrae claiming to be able to take care of herself while just being rescued also felt odd, but I guess she was mad and people don't always act rationally in that regard. Yet, the troubled relationship between Sirrae and Faendal made an interesting and surprising entertainment, since both seem to have the same impulsivity. Careful about having too many bubbles without tails to confirm the reading order : keep in mind that while comic makers might know how it's supposed to be read, readers might not always do. Still, nice entry overall. ?

« Ooh, the draugr sure want to honey-honey a lot out there.

               Those I've met only wanted to stab me with knives and hit me with maces.

                Though there was this guy of the Thieves guild, who didn't know how to sneak. He got done in the poo-poo once.  »

On 5/9/2021 at 7:25 AM, Tirloque said:

Hmmm. Faendal taking of two draugrs in one blow felt a bit far fetched, but the whole fight was much more developed than in previous entries, which was appreciable. Sirrae claiming to be able to take care of herself while just being rescued also felt odd, but I guess she was mad and people don't always act rationally in that regard. Yet, the troubled relationship between Sirrae and Faendal made an interesting and surprising entertainment, since both seem to have the same impulsivity. Careful about having too many bubbles without tails to confirm the reading order : keep in mind that while comic makers might know how it's supposed to be read, readers might not always do. Still, nice entry overall. ?

 

« Ooh, the draugr sure want to honey-honey a lot out there.

               Those I've met only wanted to stab me with knives and hit me with maces.

 

                Though there was this guy of the Thieves guild, who didn't know how to sneak. He got done in the poo-poo once.  »

Impulsiveness is a running theme for the characters in this story ?

And  yeah, there's a few pages here with far too many bubbles in retrospect, as there were in previous chapters. It's definitely been a learning process, and something I've gotten better at as I've gone. These were done a while ago, however, hehe.

Thanks for your comments!