It looks like you chose a replacer mod for the eyebrows, but didn't change the vanilla hair. There are replacers for that as well. Or go for Apachii: very little, no physic, good looking.

Since you work with basic CBBE skin: the face itself (its architecture) comes from the normal map - you can install an additional skin and only take the files needed to exchange the skin; meaning, the face would look the same, only you'd use a more high-def skin. In your case, I'd take a look in the Bjin-skin.

Plus, for the guy, try SAM. HP for it is vectorplus. Didn't test it for some time myself, but the skin looks far superior to SOS standard. I dare say.

But I'm only here for the eye candy.

I like that you added some realism in the travels duration (several days from Riften to Windhelm). As for the rest, it's well written, and the events are pleasant to follow ; with a rather pleasant night lighting for the graphics. ?

Malicia : « Those two guys were there all along ! That's very embarassing, uh.  »

Another nice chapter ? 

I really liked this screenshot. The way you captured them with their arms out for the wading effect. 

I also feel like the love scene is an improvement over your first one in Chapter two. The murmurings and whispers make it feel more alive to me. 

Nice job! Can't wait to see what happens with those... ruffians! ?

22 hours ago, LexiAJ82 said:

Another nice chapter ? 

 

I really liked this screenshot. The way you captured them with their arms out for the wading effect. 

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I also feel like the love scene is an improvement over your first one in Chapter two. The murmurings and whispers make it feel more alive to me. 

 

Nice job! Can't wait to see what happens with those... ruffians! ?

The improvements all you really, I wouldn't have thought to do it if you hadn't suggested it

On 4/28/2020 at 9:46 AM, Tirloque said:

I like that you added some realism in the travels duration (several days from Riften to Windhelm). As for the rest, it's well written, and the events are pleasant to follow ; with a rather pleasant night lighting for the graphics. ?

 

Malicia : « Those two guys were there all along ! That's very embarassing, uh.  »

Thank you :)))