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Chapter Four: A Wrong Turn


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Continuing from where chapter three left off with Micah and Alicia making their way ever closer to Windhelm... Or not.


 

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"We're lost."

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"Well no not precisely los-"

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"We're lost."

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"Okay yes.  We are lost."

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"All because you wanted us to take your little shortcut."

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"I was ten the last time I came to Windhelm, I mixed this road up with another one, I'm sorry."

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"It's fine, let's just make camp here tonight we can continue out in the morning."

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"Tent is all set, I suppose since we're here we might as well enjoy the hot spring for a little while."

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"I suppose we could do that."

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"Oh this is nice."

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"It's been a very long time since I've been able to enjoy the hot springs here."

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"Wait when did y-  Fuck you, you did this on purpose!"

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"I knew you'd never agree to get off track from Windhelm to enjoy something you didn't know was this good.  Don't worry I know exactly where we are, we should reach Windhelm in a day, two at most."

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"I... Thank you Micah."

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"You're welcome Alic-"

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"I want you."

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"Mmm Micah."

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"Alicia."

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"Ah."

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"Oh gods Micah!"

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"I want you inside me."

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"Ohh yess Micah.  I want you all the way in me."

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"Gods Alicia you're tight."

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"Harder Micah."

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"I'm close."

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"Me too Micah keep going."

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"Alicia!"

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"Micah!"

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"You get some rest love, I'll keep a look out around camp tonight."

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"Thank you for bringing me here Micah."

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It looks like you chose a replacer mod for the eyebrows, but didn't change the vanilla hair. There are replacers for that as well. Or go for Apachii: very little, no physic, good looking.

Since you work with basic CBBE skin: the face itself (its architecture) comes from the normal map - you can install an additional skin and only take the files needed to exchange the skin; meaning, the face would look the same, only you'd use a more high-def skin. In your case, I'd take a look in the Bjin-skin.

Plus, for the guy, try SAM. HP for it is vectorplus. Didn't test it for some time myself, but the skin looks far superior to SOS standard. I dare say.

 

But I'm only here for the eye candy.

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I like that you added some realism in the travels duration (several days from Riften to Windhelm). As for the rest, it's well written, and the events are pleasant to follow ; with a rather pleasant night lighting for the graphics. ?

 

Malicia : « Those two guys were there all along ! That's very embarassing, uh. :classic_blush: »

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Another nice chapter ? 

 

I really liked this screenshot. The way you captured them with their arms out for the wading effect. 

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I also feel like the love scene is an improvement over your first one in Chapter two. The murmurings and whispers make it feel more alive to me. 

 

Nice job! Can't wait to see what happens with those... ruffians! ?

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22 hours ago, LexiAJ82 said:

Another nice chapter ? 

 

I really liked this screenshot. The way you captured them with their arms out for the wading effect. 

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I also feel like the love scene is an improvement over your first one in Chapter two. The murmurings and whispers make it feel more alive to me. 

 

Nice job! Can't wait to see what happens with those... ruffians! ?

The improvements all you really, I wouldn't have thought to do it if you hadn't suggested it :)

 

On 4/28/2020 at 9:46 AM, Tirloque said:

I like that you added some realism in the travels duration (several days from Riften to Windhelm). As for the rest, it's well written, and the events are pleasant to follow ; with a rather pleasant night lighting for the graphics. ?

 

Malicia : « Those two guys were there all along ! That's very embarassing, uh. :classic_blush: »

Thank you :)))

 

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