dinomagick Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Not sure if this is the right place for Pictures or Stories, please forgive me if this is the wrong place....When Keira became "Dragonborn", she hunted Dragons all across Skyrim... Then she came across the Orcs of Largashbur while hunting a Dragon, and everything changed..... The Hunt:  . . . . . . . .    Captured:   . . .    Taken:  . .    Revelation:   . . .    The Old Orc:   . . . . .    Orc Train:   . . .    Accepting Fate:   . .    Maybe not the end.... Maybe just a beginning....  Keira's adventurers will continue, IF Gularzob lets her.... I'm sure she'll be able to "convince" him....   Added: .rar archive of story attached. OrcSlave-V1.rar Link to comment
Khiropter Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Nice to see a new story around here . Also i think you could have posted into skyrim adult (don't know ^^) . Will read it after i post this and will give feedback after. One advice i would suggest, maybe will be a good one . You could make it like a comic. What i mean is maybe a cover not necessary and the rest added like pages into a rar would we awesome simply as it seems that the forum image viewer is not loading the pics all the time (can be my end of the prob) Link to comment
dinomagick Posted June 4, 2013 Author Share Posted June 4, 2013 Nice to see a new story around here . Also i think you could have posted into skyrim adult (don't know ^^) . Will read it after i post this and will give feedback after. One advice i would suggest, maybe will be a good one . You could make it like a comic. What i mean is maybe a cover not necessary and the rest added like pages into a rar would we awesome simply as it seems that the forum image viewer is not loading the pics all the time (can be my end of the prob)  Great idea!  I didn't think of that.. but.. I can take screenshots and stuff, i'm not good at covers.. I'll add an .rar or .7z of the screenshots to the original post... thanks!  First time.. be gentle on me ;-) Link to comment
OMGYourMom Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 *cough* plothole. She could dragon shout. XD Link to comment
Daguy Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Interesting, nice idea and screenshots. Shame about the image quality in the rar though, they are a little low res. Link to comment
Jay1646 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Really good story  but I think she gave up rather too easily  still good read! Link to comment
dinomagick Posted June 5, 2013 Author Share Posted June 5, 2013 About the Dragon shout plot-hole, I tried to keep the Gag on her mouth, but for some reason, during the animation, (like the cages and poles) all the Zaz stuff just kept disappearing....I know the Image quality is bad and that is me.....  I really don't know how to make good images... I don't know enough about ENB's and how to set them, or how to get better pics from the .bmps converts... I have Adobe Photoshop CS6, but don't really know how to use it other than opening up an image and saving it under a different format...  It's my first... I'll learn. Link to comment
Khiropter Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 well a good idea is to use fraps (if u dont) it can make really nice screenshots. That's what i use, well mostly cause my damn video card don't know why when i make screenshots using normal way they get distorted and black and white. Whit fraps you can select different version for images (png/jpeg/gif/bmp etc).  I DL in the meantime the story and will read it as i didn't manage to read it yesterday.  Edit: I come whit an edit as i read the story. Nice thing you did there. I do hope you will continue it, either whit her or other character. Also i think an ENB not very flashy just to make the colors in game a bit more alive would look awesome. I had a good one but i lost it when i had to wipe my HD.  Overall nice job and would like to see more of it as i said before ^^ Link to comment
nordwhore Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 Very good, I look forward to seeing more. Link to comment
lidowxxx Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 Had a good reading the story! I agree with Jay that she gave up a bit too easily, but other than that, it's pretty well done! And if possible please use higher resolutions and with some nifty  ENB next time, you are not recording a video, so low fps shouldn't matter much when you are taking screenshots. Hope we will be seeing more of these kind of stuff! Link to comment
Daguy Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 About the Dragon shout plot-hole, I tried to keep the Gag on her mouth, but for some reason, during the animation, (like the cages and poles) all the Zaz stuff just kept disappearing....  I know the Image quality is bad and that is me.....  I really don't know how to make good images... I don't know enough about ENB's and how to set them, or how to get better pics from the .bmps converts...  I have Adobe Photoshop CS6, but don't really know how to use it other than opening up an image and saving it under a different format...  It's my first... I'll learn.   No worries, it wasn't an insult or anything. You did well.  I use FRAPS, but the paid version. The basic screenshot button should work just as well for Skyrim.  I don't personally think ENB is required, I certainly don't play with enhanced graphics beyond the HD texture DLC, but people vary. Link to comment
dinomagick Posted June 6, 2013 Author Share Posted June 6, 2013   No worries, it wasn't an insult or anything. You did well.  I use FRAPS, but the paid version. The basic screenshot button should work just as well for Skyrim.  I don't personally think ENB is required, I certainly don't play with enhanced graphics beyond the HD texture DLC, but people vary.   I have a full version of Fraps, it's an older one from a few years ago. (i used to play World of Warcraft).  I'll give that a shot.  I've tried ENB's but they almost crash my PC.  I think it's the resolution, I am going from 1600x1024 to 800x600 on the screenshots. Link to comment
dinomagick Posted June 8, 2013 Author Share Posted June 8, 2013 With the new addition of the Procreation Mod, I am working on figuring out exactly how to show Keira being pregnant....  I am such a newb..  Link to comment
Khiropter Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Don't worry you will learn ,same as i started learning converting armors. Will come whit time Link to comment
ThaOlo Posted June 16, 2013 Share Posted June 16, 2013 Where can I find more stuff like this? Link to comment
Daguy Posted June 17, 2013 Share Posted June 17, 2013 TFC 1 gives you a frozen scene. Same for Fallout 3 and New Vegas, but sadly not Oblivion. I only discovered it in Skyrim. Would have saved me days of screenshot arranging if i'd known about it four years earlier. Link to comment
Lyman the Lunatic Posted June 24, 2013 Share Posted June 24, 2013 The entire thing reminds me of my Breton in Duknish-Yal, whatever the place name is. She kinda had the same fate there lol, though slightly better for her, I guess? Anyways, despite the amazingly weird similarities, I liked the story, good work. Link to comment
bp1357 Posted June 24, 2013 Share Posted June 24, 2013 Good story, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it, look forward to more. Link to comment
JarlNick Posted July 1, 2013 Share Posted July 1, 2013 I imagine, at some point, this story would end with a slipped gag, a disarm shout and lots of dead orcs   Until then, it looks like quite a party. Nice job. Link to comment
Pwishy Posted July 1, 2013 Share Posted July 1, 2013 *Eagerly awaiting the next update*  Link to comment
dinomagick Posted July 2, 2013 Author Share Posted July 2, 2013 I am waiting on a new video card to increase resolution and make it better.  I've decided to run through the "Procreation" mod and give better screen shots.  I have the story line laid out, but am working on providing better screenshots.  A lot of people have given me some really good advice and the next installment will be done after the 4th.  Thank you all for the great comments and advice! Link to comment
YumiChan19 Posted July 3, 2013 Share Posted July 3, 2013 had any thought about making this into a game mod? would be pretty cool to be captured by an orc stronghold like that in game with a story to go with it Link to comment
dreadme1 Posted September 19, 2016 Share Posted September 19, 2016 for the gag coming off hun,your going to want to go into devious devices and turn off the leaders being able to replace gags and chastity belts,that will keep your dragon born well and truly quiet,as well as adding a plug gag so he can slide his imense wood down the dragon borns throat,captured dreams has some really nice gags!. Link to comment
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