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The Purge of Riften (3/)


Resdayn

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previous part: https://www.loverslab.com/blogs/entry/9821-the-purge-of-riften2/

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I suggest cheking out the story sheet and start with the beginning.

 

https://www.loverslab.com/blogs/entry/6362-story-sheet-gwynolda/

 

The Purge of Riften (3/)

 

 

 

 

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One thing I realised from all the memories I hidden from myself, it was not wise. I made myself weakerby taking away all the experiences and memories. I could avoid so many events and trouble, I experiences in the past months, and even the heart-break too from Evelynn. 
 

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After I done here, Markarth is the next after all. I swear on Lady Dibella's name, I make the city pay for everything it did for me, and for you Evelynn? I crush your plans and ambitions as you did with my heart.. you made your own doom by letting me go..

 

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 Lady Dibella be praised, I have now the authory and power to do what I see fit right. Imperator Magus suggested starting with the prison, in this corrupt town there might be someone who know the something about the underworld..

 

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 Im not sure he actually told the Jarl and the guards, he has a Iudex with him.. this might make the things messy..

 

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 No matter that, I have my tools for that..

 

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One guard at the door, seems opposed Whiterun, entering the prison is not allowed just like that...

 

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Most of the guards here are corrupt, so they are worthless anyway, no one gonna care if I kill him, let alone the Imperator Magus..

 

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Moving up there, distracting as a new comer guardwomen, few flirts to let his guard down, after all who can say no to a pretty face, even the mighty Witch Queen couldn't, why would this weak-minded idiot would?..

 

Gwynolda: Hello Handsome, Im the new here, can you a help a bit?

Guard: Of course have you lost your post or what can I do for you sweety?

Gwynolda: There is thing you can help with me..

 

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Then casting a illusion spell made up with sickness, terror and some of the dark vision, this corrupt guard just die from the shock slowly and terribly..

 

Gwynolda: Just die..

 

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 Not the first time I kill someone, I even erased my first time doing it along with my combat skills, .. just because I did fear end like my mother..

 

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I should be greateful for the Imperator Magus, this was definetly nothing more than just stupid girls naive desire to run away problems, he is right, I need face them and accept them..

 

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 Prison seems to big to scout a head without getting suspicious, there must be something I can start with..

 

Guard: (laugh) Wasn't we a bit rough with her?

Guard: Why?

 

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Gwynolda: Hmmmm?

Guard: I mean we raped her while arresting her, we could wait afer she is in the prison?

Guard: I can't help with, she was my type..

 

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I presume the Boss means someone in the underworld, this might be a good lead..

 

Guard: Boss ordered to be rough with her specially, we had too do it...

Guard: I guess you right, what do you think of a second round with her(laugh)

 

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Im sure if these two trash just outright descreate the Divines and a girl just because someone's order, I should try getting some intel out from them before delivering justice, they seems not bright either..

 

Gwynolda: Hello handsomes, Im a bit lost, I was ordered to join guarding the girl from the boss..

Guard: Ohh my who is this girl?

Guard: Im not sure, but I did not know Boss had pretty girls working for..

 

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Guard: Of course girl in the 1st floor of the prison in the very back, she is a bit had a rough day, but Im sure we can patch her up later(chuckles).

Guard: So when did you join the town guards, wanna get know each other?

 

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Gwynolda: I think I pass that..

 

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Their words where true, I find the women's cell in the 1st floor, compared a prison cell this one is rather too good, but in this prison most of the cells look way too good for keeping criminals there.. something off..

 

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She immedietly noticed me of course, looked rather not my type of girl, but I keep my guard up..lets find out why are you so important..

 

Women: Who the fuck are you? What you want your friends was not enough?

 

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Gwynolda: Im Gwynolda, working with the Imperator Magus to cleanse the corruption of the city as Imperial Iudex, Im not your enemy, but I can be your ally..

 

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Gwynolda: I know its hard, but can you give anything what we can use as leads or anything what can help us finding out..

Rigmor: Call me Rigmor, so you working with that masked person? You say he is actually that person?

Gwynolda: Yes, and you can be sure, nobody can stand up against him..

 

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Rigmor: In that case, I know who is the boss behind the whole crime organisation.. there was a reason why they throwed me there, to keep the information safe and punish me..

Gwynolda. Punish you? Why? Who are you exactly?

 

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Rigmor: I was the second in command for the hole thing, but Boss decided get rid me, since I was not followed her like a puppy, damn it without me, she never would got the whole city and the hold under her graps..

Gwynolda: Who is the Boss?

 

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Rigmor: Its the Blackbriar family, specificly Maven Blackbriar, keeping the council of Thanes, skooma trade, Thieves guild in her hand, she run the whole hold, while that stupid Jarl sitting at her fancy chair.. now she plan to get the bandits and baraign with the dark brotherhood and other dark sects..

 

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She did make one mistake, you not tell intel and important information without asking first something in return, there are no remorse or regret in her words, I think I have no reason to keep her alive.. she is just as scum like the others..

 

Rigmor: I was content following her and helping out everything, but when necromancy, death worshipper assasins and even vampires got into the plans, I questioned her once

 

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Rigmor: Now she raped with her goons and throwed me there, til I kiss her feet and beg to her mercy.. but seems divines smiled upon me, when I saw the Imperator Magus, I feared him few days ago..

 

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Rigmor: But now his pressense is blessing, I can make Maven pay, I presume I get protection and pardoned for my words and intel yes? What are you doing?

Gwynolda: I patch you up with my spells..

 

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Rigmor: What those are not healing spells!!

Gwynolda: You are just as scum like this Maven person, Stendarr may show mercy, but I don't, since you told me everything, I just can burn you alive..

 

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Be cleansed by those flames and be burn.. you do not deserve any mercy or second chance, it was truly lucky she spilled those intel without asking something first.. she was stupid as those guards..

 

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So Maven Blackbriar, we already got the name, Imperator Magus will be pleased to hear that. I think before telling him I check the Temple of Mara just incase to see there are no heresy..

 

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But finally, we can work towards to cleanse this city of all the trash, Riften can breathe finally.

 

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Humming

 

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This Vampire blood thing was not a bad product, I got younger and prettier like for what some diet change? Feels so good to be my prime again.. like a new make up

 

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Ohh Of course, lets not forget why I am here in the first place to help out with Riften's corruption. That arrogant masked idiot asked me to help, but he said its fine if I drank this blood and my daughter is here to meet with me as well.. What is even her name?

 

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12 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

That would explain why then you consider Lawful good as evil characters in fact. But that is in fact due to you finding a way to exploit RPG adjusting alignment through numerical values. What's important in D&D's original alignment system is what a character has in her/his heart. If a character is in fact abusing a system to allow him/her to commit evil deeds while being ununished, then it's that deep inside he/she is in fact rather evil indeed.

 

But that's not the alignment that is evil, it's just that you found a way to fool a game's system. :classic_wink:

 

And that makes the story more complex and unpredictable. And thus creates the hype among the readers. :D

 

Gwynolda was always somewhat narrow in her view on heresy and evil, but in her heart she feels herself lawful good, but her actions and behavior def closer to lawful netural, now maybe a bit darker shade of neutral, since she walking a dangerous path.

 

I mean this chapter already has consequences, we not even sure what Gauis would think if she go this type of decisions.

 

Indeed, What Gwynolda gonna do in the Temple after showcasing her methods? What Gauis actually up? Whats the deal with Eliza? How Maven plans to deal with this situation? Raises questions, and rather unpredictable what comes next. ?

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3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Gwynolda was always somewhat narrow in her view on heresy and evil, but in her heart she feels herself lawful good, but her actions and behavior def closer to lawful netural, now maybe a bit darker shade of neutral, since she walking a dangerous path.

 

I mean this chapter already has consequences, we not even sure what Gauis would think if she go this type of decisions.

 

Indeed, What Gwynolda gonna do in the Temple after showcasing her methods? What Gauis actually up? Whats the deal with Eliza? How Maven plans to deal with this situation? Raises questions, and rather unpredictable what comes next. ?

> Gwynolda is the best when she walks around naked and Trilog use Malicija to complain for he is jelous he can't have her ;)

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8 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Gwynolda is the best when she walks around naked and Trilog use Malicija to complain for he is jelous he can't have her ;)

Indeed. When I ask Malicija to walk around naked just like that, she refuses. Rumor has it that Resdayn had the opposite problem with Gwynolda. :smiley:

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:O Woah, Gwynolda is brutal now! I could tell she had changed, but not to this amount. I was getting chills. Great job, Res!

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18 minutes ago, Collygon said:

:O Woah, Gwynolda is brutal now! I could tell she had changed, but not to this amount. I was getting chills. Great job, Res!

Thank you ❤️

 

Ohh she did change, quite a bit, and I am happy to hear it managed give chills, thats pretty awesome ?

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Gwynolda has really lost it now ?

 

As to the morality/alignment discussion: If you're using a D&D alignment system then that comes along with the absolute existence of objective morality down to the point that each alignment even has its own plane of existence that you can wander on into and visit. D&D alignment is 100% absolute and is never down to justifying your actions or "feeling like you're doing the right thing". Evil is evil, good is good and that's it and if you don't believe it you can go visit the corresponding plane and see for yourself.

 

I agree with @Tirloque that the notion of killing an evil guy to make up for killing a good guy is just silly Fallout 3 video game "morality" and really has no more place in a nuanced view of good vs evil (such as one you'd find in a book, movie, story or good pen and paper RPG campaign) than the idea that collecting 100 coins will give you an extra guy. Now that doesn't mean that people would know their alignment any more than they would know their dexterity score, plenty of people might THINK they are lawful good but that doesn't make it true. In this chapter Gwynolda is definitely threading the gap between LN and LE IMO (though that's just looking at the surface, it also seems to me that beneath this sudden change in her personality s some degree of using her new position and power to cover up or "self medicate" her past emotional pain which would tend to shift her actions more towards a NE or very questionable true N since her motivation would be purely self serving). 

 

You seem to be looking at LG through a very jaded lens. LG is not following the rules to the letter with no regard for compassion or humanity, that is textbook LN, the cliched old trope of executing the hungry thief who steals bread to feed his family. LG is the guy who does the right thing no matter the cost, it is the guy who finds a way to save the unsavable no matter the personal sacrifice, who finds a way to bring the "heretic" back to the light. This speech is the essence of Lawful Good (and why Captain America will forever be Marvel's best character (fight me):

 

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Lawful Good does no follow orders blindly or kill for no reason because it is what the system demands. Chaotic Good will fight to destroy that corrupt system, Neutral Good will ignore it and do the right thing anyway, Lawful Good will change it, he will fix it no matter what it takes. He is not good because the law tells him to be, he is good even if it tells him not to be. 

 

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28 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Gwynolda has really lost it now ?

 

She did a bit.

28 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

 

As to the morality/alignment discussion: If you're using a D&D alignment system then that comes along with the absolute existence of objective morality down to the point that each alignment even has its own plane of existence that you can wander on into and visit. D&D alignment is 100% absolute and is never down to justifying your actions or "feeling like you're doing the right thing". Evil is evil, good is good and that's it and if you don't believe it you can go visit the corresponding plane and see for yourself.

 

I agree with @Tirloque that the notion of killing an evil guy to make up for killing a good guy is just silly Fallout 3 video game "morality" and really has no more place in a nuanced view of good vs evil (such as one you'd find in a book, movie, story or good pen and paper RPG campaign) than the idea that collecting 100 coins will give you an extra guy. Now that doesn't mean that people would know their alignment any more than they would know their dexterity score, plenty of people might THINK they are lawful good but that doesn't make it true. In this chapter Gwynolda is definitely threading the gap between LN and LE IMO (though that's just looking at the surface, it also seems to me that beneath this sudden change in her personality s some degree of using her new position and power to cover up or "self medicate" her past emotional pain which would tend to shift her actions more towards a NE or very questionable true N since her motivation would be purely self serving). 

 

You seem to be looking at LG through a very jaded lens. LG is not following the rules to the letter with no regard for compassion or humanity, that is textbook LN, the cliched old trope of executing the hungry thief who steals bread to feed his family. LG is the guy who does the right thing no matter the cost, it is the guy who finds a way to save the unsavable no matter the personal sacrifice, who finds a way to bring the "heretic" back to the light. This speech is the essence of Lawful Good (and why Captain America will forever be Marvel's best character (fight me):

 

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Lawful Good does no follow orders blindly or kill for no reason because it is what the system demands. Chaotic Good will fight to destroy that corrupt system, Neutral Good will ignore it and do the right thing anyway, Lawful Good will change it, he will fix it no matter what it takes. He is not good because the law tells him to be, he is good even if it tells him not to be. 

 

Gwynolda is actually lawful neutral character, thats what is in her sheet, she just feel herself lawful good. ?

 

I just joke around with lawful good, since in crpg-s I managed to play around and play murder hobo while keeping the aligment ?, later rpg games which use the aligment system some reason put the genocide option to lawful good xD, while evil aligments not had such choice.

 

In this scenario she getting closer in the darker shade-s of grey and evil, if she not be careful, she def can get end up lawful evil and neutral evil, but thats the stake here. ?

 

Does she end up self realise her mistakes and attitude or end up a fallen hero?

 

But again system is just some minor help to align my character's morality and give an idea of it, I not really write black and white morality wise.

 

My personal Marvel Favorite is Dr Doom thought.

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1 hour ago, SpyVsPie said:

 Evil is evil, good is good and that's it and if you don't believe it you can go visit the corresponding plane and see for yourself.

 

I agree with @Tirloque that the notion of killing an evil guy to make up for killing a good guy is just silly Fallout 3 video game "morality" and really has no more place in a nuanced view of good vs evil (such as one you'd find in a book, movie, story or good pen and paper RPG campaign) than the idea that collecting 100 coins will give you an extra guy. Now that doesn't mean that people would know their alignment any more than they would know their dexterity score, plenty of people might THINK they are lawful good but that doesn't make it true. In this chapter Gwynolda is definitely threading the gap between LN and LE IMO (though that's just looking at the surface, it also seems to me that beneath this sudden change in her personality s some degree of using her new position and power to cover up or "self medicate" her past emotional pain which would tend to shift her actions more towards a NE or very questionable true N since her motivation would be purely self serving). 

 

You seem to be looking at LG through a very jaded lens. LG is not following the rules to the letter with no regard for compassion or humanity, that is textbook LN, the cliched old trope of executing the hungry thief who steals bread to feed his family. LG is the guy who does the right thing no matter the cost, it is the guy who finds a way to save the unsavable no matter the personal sacrifice, who finds a way to bring the "heretic" back to the light. This speech is the essence of Lawful Good (and why Captain America will forever be Marvel's best character (fight me):

 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

   

Lawful Good does no follow orders blindly or kill for no reason because it is what the system demands. Chaotic Good will fight to destroy that corrupt system, Neutral Good will ignore it and do the right thing anyway, Lawful Good will change it, he will fix it no matter what it takes. He is not good because the law tells him to be, he is good even if it tells him not to be.

I couldn't agree more on that. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

37 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

I just joke around with lawful good, since in crpg-s I managed to play around and play murder hobo while keeping the aligment ?, later rpg games which use the aligment system some reason put the genocide option to lawful good xD, while evil aligments not had such choice.

As we said before, you thought that because you found a way to take advantage of the leniency of a videogame numerical vision of moral choices : +2 and -2 makes +0. And if lawful good is between +15 and +5, and chaotic bad only at -15, you could indeed do more evil actions as a lawful good character than a good actions as a chaotic bad character before the system adjusts your alignment. But that's just the limits of having a not really intelligent computer keeping track of it.

 

Alignment refers to what's a character is deep down inside, and Captain America speech is indeed a good insight on what a Lawful good character is from that point of view. 'cause ultimately, if he had to choose between a lawful but wrong/bad/evil action, and a good/right/compassionate action, he would choose the "good" one, and try to make the system right afterwards.

 

But I think you understood all this already, as is implied on your next quote :

48 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

In this scenario she getting closer in the darker shade-s of grey and evil, if she not be careful, she def can get end up lawful evil and neutral evil, but thats the stake here. ?

 

Does she end up self realise her mistakes and attitude or end up a fallen hero?

My associate thinks she needs expert advice about it. :classic_biggrin:

 

Still, having the possibility of her becoming a fallen hero makes things so much more interesting that I'm almost jealous. I'm not featuring enough alignments in my own stories. :classic_tongue:

 

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39 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Alignment refers to what's a character is deep down inside, and Captain America speech is indeed a good insight on what a Lawful good character is from that point of view. 'cause ultimately, if he had to choose between a lawful but wrong/bad/evil action, and a good/right/compassionate action, he would choose the "good" one, and try to make the system right afterwards.

 

But I think you understood all this already, as is implied on your next quote :

My associate thinks she needs expert advice about it. :classic_biggrin:

 

Still, having the possibility of her becoming a fallen hero makes things so much more interesting that I'm almost jealous. I'm not featuring enough alignments in my own stories. :classic_tongue:

 

I am aware of that, not worry ?

 

Most of the characters you feature, have not really that much chance to change aligment, I can't see Malicia goes total evil. ?

 

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55 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

I am aware of that, not worry ?

 

Most of the characters you feature, have not really that much chance to change aligment, I can't see Malicia goes total evil. ?

Ohhh, extreme circumstances can lead to change. Though for most of those you know their alignment are deeply ingrained in their minds. But there should be more greyish characters around in some time.

 

Malicia : « That's what you think. But next year, I'm gonna go to lady Trinn's, and if people doesn't agree with me I'll stab them in the hand, yes. :star: »

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