A sacrificial ambiance, i like that kind of darkness ! It could be dramatized more though, to heighten the stakes, and make the reader feel more suspense towards what's going to happen. Technically, I'd advice being cautious with postimage, as contrary to Imgbox, they do recompress your jpegs. The dialogues felt written a bit fast as well (you don't adresse a god with "I guess, yup". Yet it was still a rather refreshing read, so the potential is there.

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 (you don't adresse a god with "I guess, yup".

That made me think of this:

28 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

 

That made me think of this:

 

 

That's it on reverse, indeed.

I've still got Hermaeus Mora answering 'sup ? " to Dovah in mind. I'll have to bring him back one day. ^^

Really love the artstyle! Who is the author, might i asking?

On 11/29/2019 at 6:17 AM, Tirloque said:

A sacrificial ambiance, i like that kind of darkness ! It could be dramatized more though, to heighten the stakes, and make the reader feel more suspense towards what's going to happen. Technically, I'd advice being cautious with postimage, as contrary to Imgbox, they do recompress your jpegs. The dialogues felt written a bit fast as well (you don't adresse a god with "I guess, yup". Yet it was still a rather refreshing read, so the potential is there.

I didn't learn the post-image thing till way later.

1 minute ago, ther1pper said:

I didn't learn the post-image thing till way later.

Possibly, but that message was in 2019, so one would hope more people would know since the time. Plus Tex is a member of the Storytellers Club.

That being said, since the Post-image issue didn't repeat itself, Pixxxels (their adult image service) could indeed be regarded as an alternative.