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Concept Story
part 1
I decided to spend my last year of my education on the Fair Lady Academy in the town of Fairport. The town is old rusty colonial port, famous of the fishing and the history of dark tales, legends of its past and of course the witch trials. I always had interest in such things and influenced my decision to go here for that year, I wanted explore those stories and how much true they are.
As soon as the year started, I spent my time on the library reading the tales of the said legends of course this led me pretty unpopular, people here not really like their history and researching can annoy a few person. Town have suprisingly big history of murders and brutal trials of witches, but these are history. The legends are not numerous as I thought and they are incomplete, might be intentional.
Aside of a few rumors of some founder was vampire, only actual legend of the Red Witch, and that one is blank, there are nothing on it, nor people who I asked about it and they was not fond of my questions.. I might need put more effort of uncovering that mystery, I heard rumors of it, other wing of the academy might have some info about it.
Its her again, what is she up to again, ever since I am here she is usally bothering me, blaming to her duties..
Her: Humming..
She goes the name of Abigail, part of the academy's student council and representive of my class, fairly popular person, according her its her duty to watch over the people of the my class, I don't buy it, she mostly mocking me for reading the history of the town and annoy me, when she can, not the worst one, the others bully me..
Protag: What do you want now?
Abigail: I'm here to inform you..
Protag: Inform of what?
Abigail: I'm sure you may not heard, considering how much you hang around here, anyway there is murderer in the town targeting young womens like us and he descreate them before the murder..
Protag: When did this started?
Abigail: It started 2 months ago accoring the police.. I'm suprised you miss the announcment, I mean one of the victim was from our academy..
Protag:..This is horrible..
Abigail: The police advises no one should out the town after 10mp, due that our academy decided that everyone should in their room after that, with that they also put each student with another in one room, just in case..
Protag: Who's my one?
Abigail: Its me.. we going sleep together in a nice room, but safely..
Protag: Sounds great really..
Abigail: Ohh before I forget the Academy's other wing is forbidden to enter, knowing you have tendency to like the meaningless stories of the town, I warn you before you doing any stupid, soon its 10pm, you should go in "our" room, I hope you haven't planned anything after reading..
End
Author notes
This story is mixture of few concept I wanted to write, now I combined them, however compared my usual writings this is bit different challenge, not the same setting nor the same type, so Resdayn tries herself in an other types. Any kind of comment is greatly welcomed.
Both of them passed 18 , before you ask.
This is something to read while watiing for Gwynolda's next parts.
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