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Winter's Night: Chapter 4


ongwk733

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Following from the cliffhanger in Chapter 3, here's Chapter 4!
Every chapter is moving the story a bit by bit, maybe a bit too slowly? I don't know. Should I make them longer and have more events happen per chapter?
So far, every chapter's been around the 30+ image mark.
Let me know what you guys think!

 

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And as always, direct link here http://imgur.com/a/cPbxM to the album if you have trouble viewing. Have a good one! :)

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I like the direction this story is going kinda like an anime. ;):D

 

Great part 4, like Jayomms said, i like where the story is going.

 

I watch anime a lot more than I do live action stuff, so I guess it shows. :D

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Excellent realisation, you know how to play with the reader's interrogations and feelings, and the dialogs  plus realistic behaviour make up to it. Can't wait for next chapter ! :D

 

About the size of your chapters, it's a matter of choice I think : sure it's on the short size, but the length of that one was satisfactory and that allows you to keep a good posting rythm. There are others story bloggers who post way larger stories at a time, the advantage is that you've got the whole thing to be judged (you don't need a bit of innuendo in each scene), the drawbacks are that you hook readers way less due to longer interval between posts. So it's a matter of choice. :)

 

(I was even thinking on shortening my own chapters after seeing your posting rythm, so you see ;) )

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