Looks promising.

I love the way you making your stories. it's interesting and the dialogues are good too. Hope you will include more of your great looking girls in the future

I agree, the story needs more gender diversity^^. Looks good, I'm looking forward for more.

Don't be afraid to post the story by larger parts. Of course we wait longer, but people will have more chances to hook on its content.

Anyway, according to Malicia, Morn looks very cute. So I guess that makes a good start, doesn't it ?

Don't be afraid to post the story by larger parts. Of course we wait longer, but people will have more chances to hook on its content.

 

Anyway, according to Malicia, Morn looks very cute. So I guess that makes a good start, doesn't it ?

I'm thinking of the story as I go, but I think I'll split the parts where I think would stop at a good point.

Planting text on pics in Photoshop gets pretty boring quick, and I've got a short attention span.

Good to hear Carter qualifies the hotness test. I'm a straight male, so I wouldn't know what makes a man eye-candy.

Ha! That Witcher reference...

 

Good to hear Carter qualifies the hotness test. I'm a straight male, so I wouldn't know what makes a man eye-candy.

It's a matter of imagination and observation. The kind of man with an harmonious face, a more carefully  tended look than it seems (controlled goatee, falsely tousled hair), appealing silhouette, and just enough tiny scars/dirt to add in virility (which goes very well with latino type skin). It's a matter of taste ofc, but some « types » will call more attention than others. 

For my part, I've been doing RP with Malicia for many years now, so I think I'm getting good at figuring what a woman like her would like.