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Winter's Night: Prologue


ongwk733

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Hey all! Here's my attempt at a more plot-driven story starring a new character, I hope you guys find it entertaining. :)
This is just the short prologue, and it's got none of my lovely ladies unfortunately..BUT you get this new beefcake,in exchange! Worth it, right?

 

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The story won't stay a sausage party for long, I promise, so stick around please!
Please comment any constructive critiques and criticisms please, I'm new to story writing after all. :)

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I love the way you making your stories. it's interesting and the dialogues are good too. Hope you will include more of your great looking girls in the future ;)

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Don't be afraid to post the story by larger parts. Of course we wait longer, but people will have more chances to hook on its content. :)

 

Anyway, according to Malicia, Morn looks very cute. So I guess that makes a good start, doesn't it ? ;)

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Don't be afraid to post the story by larger parts. Of course we wait longer, but people will have more chances to hook on its content. :)

 

Anyway, according to Malicia, Morn looks very cute. So I guess that makes a good start, doesn't it ? ;)

 

I'm thinking of the story as I go, but I think I'll split the parts where I think would stop at a good point.

Planting text on pics in Photoshop gets pretty boring quick, and I've got a short attention span. :P

 

Good to hear Carter qualifies the hotness test. I'm a straight male, so I wouldn't know what makes a man eye-candy. :D

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Good to hear Carter qualifies the hotness test. I'm a straight male, so I wouldn't know what makes a man eye-candy. :D

It's a matter of imagination and observation. The kind of man with an harmonious face, a more carefully  tended look than it seems (controlled goatee, falsely tousled hair), appealing silhouette, and just enough tiny scars/dirt to add in virility (which goes very well with latino type skin). It's a matter of taste ofc, but some « types » will call more attention than others. 

 

For my part, I've been doing RP with Malicia for many years now, so I think I'm getting good at figuring what a woman like her would like. ;)

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