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Original concept, to say the least. Now, maybe it could be improved on the readability department, reader doesn't always sees clearly what's happening, and sometimes barely understands it. But dialogs, ambience, and setup were great.

 

Good job. :D

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Original concept, to say the least. Now, maybe it could be improved on the readability department, reader doesn't always sees clearly what's happening, and sometimes barely understands it. But dialogs, ambience, and setup were great.

 

Good job. :D

I was going to go in to explain stuff on the bottom, like GS = Gear Scores and stuff but decided not to, since I'm not going to continue.

 

Very well done. Love the comic style stories.

Thank you, surely took more time to make it comic :]

 

Very cool man. I can see the idea come together. I hope to see more. 

Thanks friend but, this is just going to be the only one.

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Wow, this was freaking awesome! I didn't really understand all the stats and stuff, but the fight scenes were fucking amazing! Definitely going to check out your other work now.

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Wow, this was freaking awesome! I didn't really understand all the stats and stuff, but the fight scenes were fucking amazing! Definitely going to check out your other work now.

There's stats and stuff is because they are competing in a game, like Esport in League of Legend or World of Warcraft (online gamer stuffs). Instead using of mouse and keyboard, they put a helmet over there head and go in to the game world, like a virtual reality.

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