looks amazing

Very, very nice. I had to giggle seeing her surprised face when peeking oh his cock under the shower. I love your facial expressions. Enjyoed very much in those during the sex and tongue play. Compliments.

P.S. You seems to be XXL boobs lover?!

(I'm not criticizing you just saying what I noticed. There were great number of pictures of him sucking his breast nipples.

looks amazing

Thank you so much. I loved the place for the lighting and made for some good shots. Lighting is the toughest thing to deal with making these things.

Very, very nice. I had to giggle seeing her surprised face when peeking oh his cock under the shower. I love your facial expressions. Enjyoed very much in those during the sex and tongue play. Compliments.

 

 

P.S. You seems to be XXL boobs lover?!

(I'm not criticizing you just saying what I noticed. There were great number of pictures of him sucking his breast nipples.

Yes, I do have that fetish. I will try to catch myself doing it too much. I want it to flow better but like us all we tend to focus on what we like. Please tell me what you think, its great to hear from you.   

I love your work since the first post. Unlike you I'm into small boobs   Personally, your fetish doesn't bothers me although they look little bit too big for Lara Croft's skinny body. The things that I like in your stories is that they are very understandable even without text. You doing excellent job with gestures and face expressions and your stories are entertaining.

I love your work since the first post. Unlike you I'm into small boobs   Personally, your fetish doesn't bothers me although they look little bit too big for Lara Croft's skinny body. The things that I like in your stories is that they are very understandable even without text. You doing excellent job with gestures and face expressions and your stories are entertaining.

That is what is so great about LL. You can find almost anything that suits you. Thanks for your support

I love your facial expressions.  

 

P.S. You seems to be XXL boobs lover?!

(I'm not criticizing you just saying what I noticed. There were great number of pictures of him sucking his breast nipples.

At the other end, I think your stories could be better if the text was spread among the images (at least splitted) ; for from my point of view it kills the suspense to have the episode summed up right before viewing it.

That being said ; pleasant scene, and absolutely great facial expressions (Ravus seeing Zoe arriving is an excellent example).

 

I love your facial expressions.  

 

P.S. You seems to be XXL boobs lover?!

(I'm not criticizing you just saying what I noticed. There were great number of pictures of him sucking his breast nipples.

I agreed with that. Big or small boobs is a matter of preference, but one must consider that boobies are partly made of fat, so it's a bit off to see the combo big boobs + slim waist/legs/arms. But it's all a matter of preset I think.

 

At the other end, I think your stories could be better if the text was spread among the images (at least splitted) ; for from my point of view it kills the suspense to have the episode summed up right before viewing it.

 

That being said ; pleasant scene, and absolutely great facial expressions (Ravus seeing Zoe arriving is an excellent example).

 

Thank you, it is something I take some time on and it is amazing what you can do with the angle for the right expression. One I thought needed work was the last shot of Ravus holding the note. I wanted sadness but not too much so I could keep a more stoic look. I tried to use the angle to show it. You are right about text it is tough to have it at the top, I will need to think about placing it throughout. Or try to write dialog which I sometimes struggle with.  I must say you do a great job with text.  

Thank you, it is something I take some time on and it is amazing what you can do with the angle for the right expression. One I thought needed work was the last shot of Ravus holding the note. I wanted sadness but not too much so I could keep a more stoic look. I tried to use the angle to show it.

You are right about text it is tough to have it at the top, I will need to think about placing it throughout. Or try to write dialog which I sometimes struggle with.  I must say you do a great job with text.  

Doing dialogs is searching for entertainment, and keeping in mind the particularities of a character (for example Orthorn uses a sophisticated/formal register of language, and is excessively polite and sometimes shy in the way of introducing his comments). Reading books is a good way to learn different language registers, though it takes time.

But if you don't feel like going into dialogs, you can avoid it. Just split your text in 3 parts or more and spread them accordingly among the images ; and you'll keep your narrative tone while avoiding dialogs (and lessening spoilers).