Nice outfit 

> Nice story. I noticed your characters walks a lot. Don't they like riding horses, or do horses not exist in your Skyrim? (Just kidding)

7 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Nice story. I noticed your characters walks a lot. Don't they like riding horses, or do horses not exist in your Skyrim? (Just kidding)

Ayrana likes to walk XD

And I didn't really want to go to the trouble of looking for a mod so they could all have a horse. XD

Good story, good pictures.

Minor feedback on text:

Yellow - good

Orange - good

Light blue - readable - bright light blue is good

Blue - readable - except orange background blue font is too small...

Dark blue - not readable - just a blur on the screen...

1 hour ago, fred200 said:

Good story, good pictures.

Minor feedback on text:

Yellow - good

Orange - good

Light blue - readable - bright light blue is good

Blue - readable - except orange background blue font is too small...

Dark blue - not readable - just a blur on the screen...

I use different colors depending on the moods of the characters.
But you don't follow the blog just to comment on the font and color, do you?

If all the text were readable, I would not have commented.

Since I was commenting, I tried to provide a little useful feedback.

Feel free to ignore. Authors are always appreciated for the effort they put in.

1 hour ago, fred200 said:

If all the text were readable, I would not have commented.

Since I was commenting, I tried to provide a little useful feedback.

Feel free to ignore. Authors are always appreciated for the effort they put in.

I have nothing against it.
But a commentary on the characters, the chapter, the story would be a bit better.

And they live happily ever after ... well more likely they got knee-deep into more dangerous troubles.
Your main protagonists (with some exceptions, like Luxia) appear to have the habit of acquiring pretty large entourages to accompany them.

7 hours ago, Talesien said:

And they live happily ever after ... well more likely they got knee-deep into more dangerous troubles.
Your main protagonists (with some exceptions, like Luxia) appear to have the habit of acquiring pretty large entourages to accompany them.

Ayrana is an admired princess who attracts people and possesses a mysterious, alluring aura.

Atanéa is a nord woman who simply accepts to be accompanied and who becomes, after the High Priestess who repelled the Domain, a heroine.

My other nord with Daegon had no choice. Daegon kind of imposed himself.

As for Luxia, she's a daedra. As a succubus, she already arouses distrust and fear. And then she disappears without warning.